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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Next morning. College.
Maanvi looking for Virat and Jeevika walking beside her
Jeevika:Mannu yeh itni pareshaan ho ke tu kya dhoond rahi hai?
Maanvi: Di..woh Virat ko...
Jeevika:aaj Virat ko dhoond rahi hai Maanvi...kya baat hai
Maanvi:oh please di kuch baat nahi hai...
Jeevika:toh Virat ko tu...(she feels something is wrong)...tu usse kyun dhoond rahi hai...please manvi kuch ulta seedha mat kar...for God sakke yeh college hai...
Maanvi:for god sake di aap merri di ho...nahi main kissi lallu se aapke shadi hote huye dekh kar aap ka jeevan barbad hote nahi dekh sakti...di...
Jeevika:oye dramebaaz chal yaha se
Maanvi:bye di
Jeevika:ruk ruk Mannu

Scene shift
Virat:Maanvi...roz mere saamne aa jati hai...aj pata nahi makkhi ke tarah kaha ghum rahi hai...
Viren:tu Maanvi ko dhoond raha hai..waah kya din aa gaye
Virat:koi din vin nahi aaye...mujhe usse kaam hai...
Viren:usse kaam...waah...(he feels something wrong) Virat sum please please kuch aisi vaisi harkat mat kar please please...
virat:bhai Chill main kuch aisi vaisi harkat nahi karunga main toh aisa harkat karunga aaapka life set ho jayega,...bye bhai..
Viren:ruk ruk toh Virat...

Virat and maanvi finally find each other
Virat and maanvi together shout each other's name
Both together:mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai...
Maanvi:acha pehle main bolti hoon..
Virat:nahi main pehle
maanvi:aise kaise...Ladies first
Virat:yeh 21st century hai ldies first ka rule gaya...
Maanviu:please koi rule gaya nahi...maanvi Choudhary jo kehti hai wahi rule ban jata hai...
Virat:as if...!!kam ki baat kare...
Maanvi:ha...dekho to cut te long thing short...mujhe lagta hai tumhara bhai aur meri di ek doosre ko pasand karte hai...
Virat:wow...great...main bhi yahi kehne wala tha ki...bhabhi yani tumhari di...mere bhai ko pasand karti hai...toh hum unki...
He is interrupted by maanvi
Maanvi:meri di tumhare bhai ko nahi...tumhare bhai mere di ko pasand karti hai...
Virat:Grow up Maanvi...bhai ke peeche jitna lamba unka sirname hai na utni hi lambi unke peeche ladkio ka line hai...
Maanvi:ha ha ha...no wonder tumhario IQ itni low hai...Chaudhary ki spelling zyada lambi hai...aur Di ke peeche utne saare ladke aate hai...
Virat:really...?? aur tumhare peeche kaun aate hai...wahi tumhara boyfriend...
Maanvi:kaun boyfriend?
Virat:peeche dekho aa gaya chela tumhara...
Maanvi turns back to find Aryan
Virat is smiling cause now he knows Jeevika has the same feeling for Viren!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
continue soon waiting for their prank
shilpa09 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
that was superb:)👍🏼
whenever i read virat saying her makkhi it craks me up...🤣
brilliantly written dear:)👏
and virman convo was awesome:)😆
thnx 4 pm dear:):):)🤗
sushmakryan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
loved it continue soon thanks for the pm
saggitarius687 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
One of Virat's friend comes...they are sitting in the canteen
Friend:Vir...Virat...Mallika...
Virat:Malllika kya...???
Friend:Mallika aa gayi...
Friend:WEhat...tu theek toh hai...mallika...woh gayi London...woh kaise aa sakti hai...
Rohit(Virat's best friend) interrupts him:Mallika nahi...shaamat kaho...Virat:beta teri toh shaamat aa gayi...
Virat:shut up! Rohit...Mallika aa gayi...
Mallika is supposed to be Virat's ex girlfriend(basically Mallika's character is similar to that of Maya)
Maanvi who was sitting in the canteen...
Maanvi:kyun virat...Mallika ka naam sunte hi hawa nikal gayi...????
Virat:Maanvi...koi kaam nahi hai tumhe jao...apne boyfriend ke saath kab se wait kar raha hai bechara...
Maanvi:woh mera boyfriend nahi hai...
Virat:apna yeh audio player bandh karogi...50hazar crore baar sun chuka hoon woh tumhara boyfriend nahi hai...
Maanvi:phir bhi bakri ke tarah ek hi baat bolte rehte ho...
Virat:bakri...what...???
Maanvi:bakri yaani goat...that's what you are...
Virat holds Maanvi's finger which was pointing towards him...just then Mallika enters...
Mallika:Virat...main kuch dinon ke liye London kya chali gayi...tumne doosri girlfriend dhoond liya...
Maanvi:oye main koi isska girlfriend
Virat interrupts her...Virat:that's right Mallika...yeh meri nayi girlfriend hai...
Maanvi:Vir...aat...tum...
Virat:yes Maanvi...I know tumhe pasand nahi ki...main humara relationship status public karoon...
Mallika(not paying much attention to what Virat was saying to maanvi):how dare you Virat...tumne kaise...I just went for...usske beech hi...
Virat:kyun Maya...tumhe yaad nahi...what had you said...yahi na...ki main tumhare level...yea level...ka nahi hoon...toh maine apne level ka dhoond liya
Maanvi:Virat...just leave..(she tries to loosen the grip as she is talking)
Rohit:kyun Mallika...mili nahi koi apne level ki...
Mallika:shut up will you...You are disgusting Virat...
Mallika leaves...Virat leaves Maanvi...
maanvi:you are sick Virat...tumne usske saamne...mera mazak bana diya...i hate you for this...
Virat:pehle kya love karti thi...jo ab hate kar rahi ho...and you know what you should be grateful...I just gave you another reason to hate me...
maanvi leaves disgusted




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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
that was bang on...
i really loved it...
manvi virat convo regarind the boyfriend thing was hilarious...
virat told mallika that manvi was his new gf... woww lots more coming up...!!!!!
really loved virat's dialogue...
Virat:pehle kya love karti thi...jo ab hate kar rahi ho...and you know what you should be grateful...I just gave you another reason to hate me...

shilpa09 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
awesome update:)👏
loooved every bit of it dear:)😃
virat and manvi's dialogue's are always worth reading in ur FF:)
virat said her his GF😲... good yaar... now i would love to read how this news will get all over campus... and how their relation will change...😉
gr8 writing dear:)...do continue soon:)😊
thnx 4 pm:):):)🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Loved the update.Virat answer to mallika was bang on.Poor Manvi😆.Loved their fights and Virat's dialogue at the end of the update.Pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
itne dino baad update kiya bt no virika !!! Plz update the next part soon with virika
Marzii thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
what a great FF
cont soon
plase PM me 4 the next updates
sending u buddy request right now 😛

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