|Arnav&Khushi| Shadows of Desire-[On Temp. Hiatus]

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=| Shadows of Desire |=
Edited* I know most of you are uncomfortable with the female protagonist not being Khushi. Since I write on a Public Forum; somethings are upto my audience. So for IF, the name is Khushi, while on my Blog the name [Kanyaka] remains the same.
I know some of you comment on the Blog, but is it okay if I'm selfish and I ask you to give me feedback on the this Thread?
Its just that I love reading your comments, and it really helps when they're in one place.
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*Edited
So, this is now the official Thread for Shadows of Desire. Please feel free to write whatever you want in regards to my writing. I am shallow as any human being, thus the flavor of flattery does taste sweet. But to improve my writing, I welcome criticism as well.
I will keep editing this post with extras about the Fiction, and trivial information that might just play a big role in the end. Pictures, poems and music that inspire me will be on top of each chapter, but if I find something more; this is where you will find it.
Hopefully I am able to prompt you enough to comment after reading my works.
Index:
Chapter 1 : Unneeded Interruptions
Chapter 2 : Dreams, or Reality?
Chapter 3 : Rage, Unleashed
Chapter 4 : Beginning of Battle
Chapter 5 : Permission
Chapter 6 : Animosity
Chapter 7 : Unavoidable Pain
Chapter 8 : Forgiveness
Chapter 9 : Curses
Prologue

Shadows of Desire

I have been inspired to write this story for a multitude of reasons. The first being my Indian Music teacher, and second being Devi (publicenemy) from IF. Through her brilliant works, she has driven me to think of scenarios that develop in a different world. And I am trying my hand at those very ideals.

Also, my friend Amrita (amritab) from IF will be helping me out with the translations and other necessary bits that are compulsary to this story.

The story's inspiration comes from the language and culture in Bengal. Specifically, it is based in Darjeeling.

More shall be revealed later as I go on and discover the story myself.

I would be honored if you would join me on their journey.

Prologue: An Unexpected Guest

Streaks of saffron and crimson combined to color the early morning sky in an iridiscent shade. Vivid hues rose out in stark contrast against the pale heavens, the orb of the yet-fatigued sun rising steadily from behind the looming mountain.

The scene was observed passionately by the otherwise dispassionate young woman seated on the rickety chairs. Her violet eyes-unusual for a Bengali woman-glittered mutely in the light filtering through the cracked window.

Those distinguished eyes did not blink even once, but merely continued to stare audaciously at the sun. She observed the ball of fire as it approached its peak in the wide expanse of the azure sky. It stayed there, lending its vibrant red color to the surrounding arena.

Turning her gaze back to the tea that lay stone cold upon the table, she exhaled defeatedly. Little rings appeared on the surface and did not cease until she had poured it down the drain.

There was more light in the cramped kitchen now, as usual.

It seemed as if Mother Nature herself was against the young woman's peace of mind. The moment she would dispense of the sickening liquid that held too many memories, the sun would rise. It would color the otherwise gaunt room with its ebuillient shade, succeeding in its attempt to give the cramped area a slightly humane air.

But how could it be? When the room belonged to Khushi Sen, how could anything be understood to be humane?

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Peeling paint coated the ancient wood door that lay intimidatingly ahead of him. It stood in his way, almost as if proclaiming for the young man to turn around and leave.

He took a deep breath and opened his suddenly weary caramel eyes. He had not undertaken this debilitating journey to resign at the final moment. A man of his word was he, and his word he would keep.

Three sharp raps resonated around the soundly asleep mohalla, alerting them to a newcomer's presence.

Standing there silently, he determinedly gathered what remained of his equilibrium and slowly exhaled. An old, smiling face appeared in the doorway about a few seconds later. She motioned for him to come in, putting a pudgy finger across her lips in the process.

He entered stealthily, removing his shoes behind him without any unneeded instructions. He might have been born American, and he might have understood the traditions of the modern world. But he was an Indian at heart.

Arnav Singh Raizada had returned. And he was here to stay.

*Copyright of Image belongs to Respective Owner

*All this writing is solely my own. You are committing a crime if you steal it.

As promised, here are some images*;
Darjeeling:
For Arnav, you can all imagine Barun Sobti. For Khushi, I leave you to your respective imaginations. You may imagine a more...angrier Sanaya, it is what my sister does.
Arnav Singh Raizada:
Anurag Sen:
Kashish Chatterjee:
More will be added as the characters and important points in the story are achieved.
*Images belong to their respective owners. NO Copyright Infringement Intended
Enjoy,
Avi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for a new one...
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Congratulations! :D

I've not actually read this FF yet - is it new?
If not, then I'm not quite sure how I missed it! xD
I'll read it as soon as! :D

Congrats, once again! :)
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please PM me waiting to see what you have now
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Just read your prologue and can already tell it's going to be great! I have posted a comment on your blog for that. Hey, thank-you so much for sharing your work. You are a great writer!👏
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just read ur ff...its interesting and intriguing...
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ermmm i think i lost the blog link in all those PMs can u send me again avi plzz
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Congrats for the new thread!
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Interesting start cant wait for the next update
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Just read the prologue and 3 chapters. Promises to be a very interesting story.

May I suggest that you include a link to this thread on the blog. Meera (Careless Whispers) has such a link and it makes commenting in the thread so much easier.

Q: If she is Anurag Sen's daughter and he was adopted by Sen, wouldn't that make them siblings?

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