MG:INTEHAA#6/THREaD 7 OPENED - Page 48

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Part 69

Maan sat there blank without any reaction on his face. Various thoughts were running in his mind, he felt like the whole world has crashed on him in a single day. So many things had happened in a day and now he felt his whole mind has stopped working.

The silence was turning uncomfortable now for raj and shyna. They waited patiently for him to say something as he was the one whose forgiveness mattered the most not only because if he agreed geet would do so but because he was the victim in the whole act while they were the predators.

Maan atleast say something said raj trying to gain his attention. Maan took a long sigh and then gave a long glance to both of them. Raj I don't know what to say, I am just blank. Your every word is so shocking for me. Not even in my dreams I would have thought such a big planning was going behind our back.

But maan we were just doing it for you guys, said shyna trying to make him understand. He showed his hand to her stopping her to say further. Shyna I am no more angry on you but I am feeling myself my love so small that you guys have to go so low just to prove my love was true. I.. he stopped thinking about all those they just said now.

I… I am quite thankful to you guys that you took so much interest in our security and moreover if my geet is safe its just because of you guys. You guys have made me indebted to you and thus for that I can forgive you guys what you did to us especially the pain you caused to geet. Though you guys targeted me still it was she who was most hurt.

But please don't expect anything more than this from me in this regard. I know you want me to speak to geet but I cant and I wont. If I will go and say her to understand you guys she will forget it in the very second but if I did so I will break the vow I gave to her. I promised I will never come between you guys, never I had did that before nor I will do that now.

His each word was filled with so many emotions. Raj and shyna felt guilty as they now understood how much hurt maan is from their act and so will be geet too. But maan was right too his interference may wont be liked my geet and it may enraged her more.

Maan ok wont help us but you just be with us when we will tell her. You will do that much right. said shyna hopefully expecting a yes from him. Ok I will but I don't want her to know all this now. She is weak and tension wont be good for her. I expect you will stop the topic now and we will tell her when she will be all ok. Is that clear?- said maan stern not wanting to give any tension to his love anymore.

They all nodded but were halted by the noise of something falling inside. Maan went and was shocked to see geet's timid body standing on her feet all weak and pale still the red hue of anger was visible. They got a hint that may be just may be she heard all that spoken outside and their thoughts came true when they heard her spat angrily-maan ask them to not show their face to me ever again in this lifetime.

She said all this with her back facing to him. Maan knew though she spoke in anger still he knew a lone tear escaped from her eye in pain. Raj was shocked to see his jaanu facing her back to him. Never ever she closed herself to him.

However angry she may be but she never asked him to go but she did that today. He too felt his eyes misty as tears started forming in his eyes hearing her anger filled voice. Geet's condition was no less too. She never raised her tone on raj. He was sort of an elder brother for her who stood by her in the toughest time of her life but today he just crossed his limit.

Gudiya was the only word escaped from raj's lips as he felt the same vulnerability today in her as saw at the 11 year old girl but the only difference was at that time she was showing her vulnerability and this time she is closing herself from him.

Geet just closed her eyes tight as she heard that word again from his lips. The same word with which he called her first time and would use for her only when he is hurt deeply. Tears were flowing but she still didn't turned back to them once.

Geet just listen them for once jaan said maan as he saw the pain stricken face of both geet and raj. Maan what do you want me to hear ha that they played such a dirty game with you. I agree they saved us but I wont forget them for what they did to you ever.

Jaan don't get hyper they just wanted best for you. Maan that's not a way to check whether someone is good or bad. They had crossed their limit a big time. They played with our emotions, our love not even for once they considered whether they are doing right or wrong.

They just didn't pointed your character but unhone hmare pyar pe bi ungli uthai h. (they pointed a finger on your love). Pyaar ko ek khel samaj liya h dono ne. maan kya unhone ek baar socha that a man to have a emotion. Why they didn't thought for once ki what will go on you after all that. Aaj they pointed their finger on our relation maan. I agree there used to be a time whne this marriage is nothing for me par aj… aj geet ka wajood uske maan h. geet ki duniya sirf maan se shuru hoti h and maan par khatm. My world just revolves around you and aj unhone mujhe bhi bhut dukh dia h.

They said na ki they were trying to protect me but aj they just protected me by giving pain to me only. Aj they pointed finger on me you our love our relationship… unhone aj geet ki gaurav, geet ke abhiman par ungli uthai h aur ye geet sab kuch bardasht karegi par apne maan ki taraf uthi hui ek ungli ko todne ka dam rakhti h.

Her each word was so determination filled, so much love filled and she was the woman who always did what her heart wanted. She had so many colors in her that sometimes he himself is astounded by her acts. She loved him insanely and that's why she was ready to die and now she is because of the same love breaking the most cherished relation of her life.

Though her eyes had pain for speaking to raj rudely but nowhere she was guilty of it. He sometimes felt his love is nowhere in front of hers. Wo sachi shabdo me uski diwani h. just his. She doesn't see anything more than him and that's what makes him more restless. He never wanted her to be in pain because of him and at the end that's what he gives her in the end.

But geet we were just scared for you gudiya- said raj as geet's each word stroke his heart. Raj for what you were actually scared. Geet shouted as he called her gudiya again. That word was bringing some unwanted memories too which she don't want to know now. For what were you scared, that whether he is attracted to me physically or he loves me. Bolo what were you testing. Geet started coughing badly as she was weak and the operation and stitches in her neck were fresh and her excessive speaking and shouting were making her weak.

Maan rushed to hold her and made her sit on the bed hiding her in his chest. She tried to speak again but he pleaded her to take rest but she refused. She wanted to show raj what she is feeling and in no world can she rest before that.

Raj looked stunned as her words fell on his ear. He didn't understand what she meant and the anger in her was just paining him more. He knew she has more to speak and he just let her speak today, to let out all her pain so that she wont keep anything inside her.

Raj you guys just tried to seduce him but what do you think is love all about being physical. No it is not. Love is an emotional feeling that can just be felt. Though physical connection just enhances loves but it is just a lust without any feeling and the way you tested my maan's pure love, you just proved it to be lust a pure lust.

He is the man who never crossed his limits even when I was ready too because he wanted to make me feel free and comfortable and you thought he will get physical attracted to shyna. Raj you claim to love her na and how will you feel if you are just tested the way my maan was did. Will you accept all that just for the sake of shyna. And shyna I ask you, you tried to force yourself on my maan, did for even once you felt him even looking at you in other way. Did you shyna felt him trying to touch you… will you raj will accept that type of treatment. She started coughing badly while maan tried to calm her but she just could control herself.

Raj love is a blessing which can be just understand by the one who have been blessed too. Agar tumhe maan ke bare me poochna tha to mujhse puchte. I would have told you how much pure his love is. Unki ache jo sirf meri ek jhalak se chamak padti h. unki smile jo meri har ek phaltu ki baat sun kar bi unke hoto pe cha jati h. unki dharkan jo mujhe paas paakar aise chalti h jaise unhe ni jindagi mil gyi ho. Unki baho ke aghosh me mujhe aise simette h jaise unki puri duniya mujhme basi ho.

Kehte h bhagwan ka roop apke pyaar me jhalakta h to phir kyu wo mujhe hi apna sab kuch mante h. kyu raj kyu. She turned to maan and cupped his face lovingly, raj Tumne kha tumhe armaan ne btay ki maan is married to me par kya usne ye ni btaya ki maan me hi geet basti h. maan ki muskan hi mera din roshan kar skti h unki chehre ki ek tension meri neende udas krti h.

Mere maan ki pyaar ki intehaa ko tum kya jano, wo to mai khud bi ni janti. He makes me feel lively. He fulfills each of my childish demand with a smile on his face, he calms down my anger with a smoothness in his face, he handles my crazy act every day still not even for once he hurts me, and his each breath is just for a purpose i.e. to make my each moment beautiful.

It was too much for maan to hear, he felt so blessed that geet understands his each unsaid word so easily. How easily she told how he feels for her in just few sentences while she never told that her love is the only thing which made him do all this thing for her.

Raj dipped his head as he realized how shallow he treated maan's love to be. Geet's each word was ringing in his head and that made him realize what a big mistake he did, he knew he had given both of them a lot of pain and the thought pained him more.

Raj was about to say something but was shocked as he saw geet coughing blood out as her stitches opened up due to her speaking and he felt another load of guilt engulf him. Tears flowed in his eyes while he ran to call doctor for another operation to be done on her.

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OMG!!!!!that was a superb update..
love u dear...
i just wanted this...and they deserve this for hurting my maaneet...
felt bad for geet...i mean she may be going through so much pain knowing raj did this...
firstly i loved maan's reaction for raj's confession...maan knows his mishty will not forgive them...
and geet's dailogues were superb...raj indeed hurted maaneet very badly, so he deserves to be punished...u have given justice dear...
ya i agree what if he(raj) has to go through same thing..testing his love...

amazing update dear...

fabulous and emotional part dear
geet love for maan was expressed very emotionally which made raj realise his mistake

awesome and emotional update.
continue soon.

power packed dialogues from geet.,,,...she's really proving her love to be limiless.loved d update.