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*In the dance camp*

Taani and Rey are in different camps as girls and boys are in different compartments.

Rey---

All the boys are doing different things. All the St. Louin boys are in one camp. Nilesh and Vicky are talking about girls and Bharat and Amar are enjoying when they all notice that the girls are very far and they understand that boys and girls are to be different. They all irritate Shivam and all. Swayam and Rey are side by side. Swayam is still depressed about the fight with Sharon and told Rey about it. Rey consoles him etc, but Swayam can't help noticing that Rey is not exactly into it.

Swayam: Okay, forget it Rey. I think you are right. I will just give Sharon some space.

Rey: That's cool. I mean you know Sharon, she is the messed up diva and you know how she is.

Swayam: Ya, well whatever... But are you alright Rey? I mean why are you so lost?

Rey: (hesitating) Lost? And me? No way yar.

Swayam: Rey, I know you think that I don't notice anything because I am in problem, but don't forget. I am you best friend and I know something is bothering you. So, tell me what is it?

Rey: (Not sure what to do) Well no, yes I mean no Swayam. Listen it's no big deal. Just don't worry about me right now. I am fine.

Swayam: Okay fine, but just remember if you ever need me I am here. K?

Rey: of course bro, you think I don't know that? (Thinking: I know Swayam, but I don't think there is anything you can do. Even if you could I am not stupid that I will tell you that I love your sister.)

Taani---

All the girls are in one camp. They are all busy decorating it and stuff. Taani and Sharon are side by side. Sharon is just looking at others. Not doing anything. Taani is managing her things, but in-between she keeps sighing and getting lost and all.

Sharon is thinking: What is happening to me? Why do I keep messing up? And why do I keep talking rudely to Swayam? I just don't get it. Yes, I was mad at him for telling my name to others but why does it hurt me so much. I was angry at him for some days, but why am I hurt if he doesn't favor me? Is it just because he affects me a lot or... For days now I wanted to be alone. I didn't want to talk to him, but when he doesn't talk to me I don't like it. God, what is wrong with me?

Taani is getting flashes: first time she saw Rey, Rey rejects her, Shivam takes her hand and says to everyone they are couple, Rey smiles at her. (Don't think Taani. Not now please. Sighs) Rey smiles at her in the bus, Shivam's despo behavior; Rey touches her, Rey in the food fight. (Gives up decorating and sits)

Sharon is still in her thoughts. But she notices Taani sighing. Lately she was noticing that Taani was acting a little bit different. Sharon was sure that she was in some kind of trouble. She knew that Rey was in some kind of trouble too. Sharon knew that Swayam was so worried about Taani and he was very protective and possessive about her. But she was noticing how Taani kept shrugging Shivam off. She had noticed that whenever Shivam even like touched her Taani would stop smiling. It was something different. But she was so messed up in herself that she couldn't even ask Taani about it. But now seeing Taani so lost she felt the urge to ask her about it?

Sharon: Are you okay Taani?

Taani still in her thoughts

Sharon: Taani? Taani?

Taani: hmm. Ya Sharon?

Sharon: Are you okay?

Taani: Yeah I am fine.

Sharon: Taani, I know you are not fine. What's bothering you? (Suddenly worried) Is this about Swayam? Is something wrong with him?

Taani: No Sharon. Bhai ko kya hoga? Sab thik he Sharon. Woh me thaki hui hu na isliye aap ko esa lag raha he.

Sharon: Okay. Taani, listen. I don't know if something happened or not. But just know one thing that I am your friend. If something's bothering you that you can't tell Swayam or anyone, you can talk to me about it. Okay?

Taani: Thanks Sharon. Par aap na bilkul tension mat lo. Me bilkul thik hu. Okay? Arey aap ne aab tak kuch saman nahi rakha. Kya hua?

Sharon: Mera man nahi ho raha he. Me bahut thak gayi hu. Me bas thodi der so jati hu. Phir sab rakh dugi. Good night Taani

Taani: Good night bha um Sharon. Me bahar jati hu thodi der. Ye jagah bahut achi he.

Sharon: Ok good night

Taani: good night

Taani comes outside and takes a walk. She is cold, but enjoying the fresh air and all.

Rey too after talking to Swayam comes outside. He is just standing there and is thinking about Taani when he notices her. And a beautiful smile comes on his face when he notices her enjoying and smiling a bit. She looks so innocent, beautiful and adorable. He smiles mischievously and follows her. And suddenly comes behind her and says "bhaoo" Taani turns into shock to him. He laughs. But then notices that she is so scared and shocked. And his smile fades. Taani's eyes fill with tears and in shock she runs away from there. Rey calls her: Taani? (Thinking: Oh god, I scared her. Damn it. And goes behind her.)

There Taani is shocked and on verge of tears. How can he scare me like this?

Rey comes

Rey: Taani taani taani taani. Oops um I'm Sorry.

Taani: doesn't say anything and shrugs him off.

Rey: Hey hey hey hey Taani. Relax yar. I'm sorry I shouldn't have scared you like this.

Taani: No you shouldn't.

Hmmm. May be something like this would happen. But how is Rey going to console her.??? I can't think. What do you guys think?? May be he will sing and dance. Like on kabhi kabhi aaditi, or something. Tell na what do you guys think??

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.wanderlust. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well firstly welcome ere :)
And yes u did write pretty well :D
but i dun think so she ran awya cz rey scared her im sure it must be cz of da SHIVAM -.- :/
Well lets wait n watch cant wait for monday :/
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: KunwarKiDeewani

Well firstly welcome ere :)
And yes u did write pretty well :D
but i dun think so she ran awya cz rey scared her im sure it must be cz of da SHIVAM -.- :/
Well lets wait n watch cant wait for monday :/


I don't think that is because of Shivam.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i don't think rey made taani upset.

but

nice part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: soumyak

i don't think rey made taani upset.


but

nice part.

No I mean he shocked her and thats why she ran away. And then wo manayega Taani ko
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well written👏! Shivam ne hi kuch kiya hoga😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I think that shivam has something to do with Taani crying. Awesome job plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Why would she cry just bcz he scared her a bit ? I pretty sure its cz of him -.- Yaa toh she must be thinkin abt deir fake relationship !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was nice yaar!! swaron and taarey are hell confused😆

but you know im sure taani dint cry because of rey scared her!! she was already a li'l bit upset..,maybe its because of shivam or some other thinggg...,well lets see😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@SHIVTRSS🤗
U HAVE DONE A GREAT JOB!!! 👏BUT I DONT THINK TAANI IS CRYING COZ SHE IS SCARED BUT BECOZ OF THAT SHIVAM😡BUT I LIKED IT N WWE JUST NEED TO WAIT N WATCH FOR MONDAY AS IT IS GONNA UNFOLD MANY SURPRISES BUT HOPE THE SURPRISES R IN THE FAVOUR FAVOUR OF TAAREY N SWARON😳

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