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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

Awesome update

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ash1991

amazing update...

enjoying the story bt fully understanding...bt its quite interesting...




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Posted: 12 years ago
Do continue
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Originally posted by: .SexyEyes.

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Posted: 12 years ago
A PARALLEL LIFE






PART 5


NOTE:

hiii friends ...i hope i am still holding your interest in this fic of mine

i am changing maan's friend from REHAAN TO ISHAAN

i hope you all can adjust with this name...and if someone have any issues do suggest me with a new name coz it took me 1 week to find a name...



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One whole day has passed after dadaji's and maan's conversation somewhere he has made her calm and given a new ray of hope that he can return to his time….. afterall he can't stay in 1912 rest of his life and that too in a totally opposite world….as far far he has encountered the things here …… all the things are same but with a vast difference…like here sun rises from west …the flow of water is in opposite direction practically saying the things are reverse and the nature and mindset of people here are conflicting…..

He can understand why now ishaan was scared when he was telling him about this place but how did he came here and does anyone knows about him here …..

Maan: maan why did't you listen to ishaan when the guy was given you the instructions ….

Yes they were the future warnings …somewhere may be ishaan knew that maan will be here but how…maan again looked at the pictures…. And this time he was fully concentrating on them…..

He was looking at the picture of geetakshi sitting across a river throwing pebbles and nothing was visible in the picture …but all of a sudden he saw a vague shadow in the picture and when he saw the last picture that he never see till now….

That was it….

It was maan and geetakshi conversing ….. and he looked at his attire …it was same as he was wearing at that time….

Maan : oh my god that is why ishaan was sounding so scared coz he knew that I am here or going to be here ….that means he has been here when I am there that means he'll be also here at the time I will meet geet…..

That means he is been travelling in past but our time is different he is bit forward in his trip and he didn't even told me the way to be out …..

Maan : wait if I'll reach at time on meeting geetakshi and follow ishaan then I'll be out of here …..

Maan rushed out of the house in order not to miss the idiot friend of his who has been travelling all the way before him and knows everything about this place which has been not less than any puzzle to him…..

But before maan goes he needs to tell the truth to all the family members….well we know that he is nothing to them but still somewhere they are resembling his relations so he can't cheat on them….. may be it is the time to reveal the truth that there maan is no more ……..

Maan went to dadaji…all the family members were there …..

Maan went near dadaji and daadima first and touched their feet….no matter how he treats people in his world but the culture and the bringing of his daadima has given him the some sort of ethics that made him to take their blessing ….. they happily blessed him…..

Dadaji knew that maan was going to do something …. But not aware of his next move….

He once hugged his mom…. Or say the lady which looks like his mother …. He had some silent tears in his eyes …that he didn't shed…..

Maan: dadaji …mujhe jaane ka raasta mil gaya …mujhe jaana hoga…. Nahi to der ho jayegi…..

Dadaji knew gave him permission to leave ….maan quickly rushed to the river which he knew …. There he saw her sitting looking lost throwing pebbles in water …. He was staring at her.. she was looking breath taking beautiful in her simple saree …. Her silver anklets…. Making tinkling sounds…hairs opened and flowing with the breeze….

Maan was about to go near her ….and see her without caring at the time…. He knew that this time also he is going to lost his love forever…but nothing can be done…..

Before he could call her …. Maan saw ishaan who has started taking their pictures ….. he quickly followed him…. Ishaan after taking his pictures was going on the same path from where he came…. He didn't bother to see if someone Is following him…..

Soon both were on the same bridge…. Maan finally catched ishaan….

Ishaan was surprised he didn't thought even for once that he could see maan and that too in this world…. He has been thinking all the way that the maan he saw was his clone…. Not in his wildest dreams he cared to think that this maan of whom he is taking pictures can be his only friend….

Maan : ishaan why didn't you tell me that I will come here …. You just get me out of here we will talk about this mess later on….

Ishaan who was confused on seeing maan was absolutely in a fear on seeing his friend instead of maan of opposite world…..

Ishaan: maan …… you are here ….. ishaan was shocked beyond his limits….. but maan didn't listen to him ….

Maan: yes I am here …..now if you have enough of this non sense can we go back…..

Ishaan looked at his watch….

Ishaan: just two minutes more…..

After those two minutes maan and ishaan jumped off the bridge….

This time it was clear to maan what was happening…

When they jumped they travelled through a void…. That was connecting two different worlds and the time they ishaan checked was to make sure that they will reach in their time only not in any other age….

Within split of seconds they were on the bridge again….there was maan's car badly damaged….this was enough for him to know that he has reached safely here…..in his world….


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NEXT: a girl wearing a deep blue saree covering herself was going on the busy roads of delhi .when a car honked in front of her…she yelled and put her hands on her ears and closed her eyes…..





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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
so now maan came to his world

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
my darling updated lov u...this story is different jitna isko samjhte hai utna he confuse ho jaate hai...but the story inside story is really great...waiting for update...thanx dear



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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it,
actually i missed the part, initially i started reading
but i lost my track
again i read all the parts
different concept
likeed it
thannks al lot for the pm

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