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Posted: 13 years ago


thnakuu

Originally posted by: Maria.

Nice update

i didn't even think a mother can stoop so low...
continue soon



thanks alot


Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Lovely Part...this tai jaan is so so cheap...it looks like as she is step mother of nupur...even step mothers are not that cruel.

Present is good...continue soon.Take care🤗



thanks dear
yup she is soo
thanks dear


Originally posted by: clustersofstar

how r u now

plz jaldi se theek ho kar tai ko suffer karwao


im better

han thora time aurday do...



Originally posted by: Humayra

Awesome part, Fiza sis. Loved it. I wish I could slap that Tai Zaan. Thanks for the pm.



thanks dear



thanks dear

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

felt bad 4 MN!
sab kuch kab teekh hoga?




i know but sorry to say two more updates to be bad bad
us k baad sab almost thik hoga




thnku



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

Cascade-my janu
what a beautiful update yaar
idont know how could u manage to wrote such a intelligent and beautiful part.
GOSH what i should say abt tai jaan
ye shaatil aurat ki ghinona harkate meri MN life barbad kar diya
they were in so much pain

she trapped then in such a way that they could not find any way to escape frm her track...

uski first target thi mayank ki barbadi. nd she got successful on it...

Cascade i cant c them so helpless
my eyes got teary after seeing mayanks nupur's pain
yaar aur kitna sahegi ye dono

i want tai jaan to get punish asap


aweosme part jani
loved it 2 d core
keep updating




thanks alot janu
aww thanks alot dear
itni tareey maat kiya ker meri ...

sorry janu per do aur updates us k baad sab thik kerny per ajao gi...sorry per pora tu story kholny do
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

i simply love the way you put words together that bring out such strong emotions..

the past is really painful...Mayank and nupur going through such trobled times and Nupur blaming herself for everything...and yet Mayank being there with her and inspite of his own troubled being trying to cheer up nupur.

i the present i could completely feel what Shilpa probably must be going through...brilliantly written out :)

great job :)



thanks alot Sanchu
this the frst time i m seeing ur such a long comment and it really makes me feel great

thanku so much for ur beautiful compliment

thnku so much.. glad u can feel the pain n helplessness
thnku😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

very well written

amazing update..
uff yeh tai jaan ke attyachar kab khatam honge...



thnaks alot dear

bus story k sath woh bhi kahtam hony ko hai
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update API

loved it lodsss
Beautifully written
loved it to d coreee
thanks alot dear
Sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bechara mera Mayank (Nupur stop glaring 😛)
uss GA ne puri tarha se usko Trap kiya hain...arhhh
i wanna kill her...Ghatiya Aurat, Manhoosss, Begairattt.HUH!!!!!!!!!!!!
i like the way Nupur confronted her...😳
Ma na hoti uski toh main usko bhi ek thappar nhi do char thappar marne ko kehti...jalil aurat kahin ki! 🤢
lol...nupur trust him she wont glare at u
han ji ap ko kya laga unhony awein mein itna sab kiya...
woh aur bhi kuch hai ..GA>..
n OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow!!! so now i got it ke unhone ase jhut kyun kaha taki woh shares de de...
As abhi Salman uncle bhi problem mein hain...sigh!
n Gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love u API u r the BEST!!!!!!!!
itnaaa accha likha hain woh past ka last part...sigh!!!!!!
i mean the way Mayank made her show her real emotions was Tremendous!! 👏
i loved it sooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
pata hain even i was like awww...🤗
yes abhi aur bhi kuch hai...
thanksjani glad u liked it..
n hope u cont to do so

loved it lodsss
Sigh!!!!!!!!!! Present!
Ab shilpa aunty ka reaction was valid still unko ek bar sunni chahiye thi...Sigh!
phir bhi jo unhone kaha was sooo hurting
i hope ke sab thik ho jaye n usss GA ko acchi sabak miley...HUH!!
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API *Dil Se* 🤗🤗🤗



woh itna hurt kyun hua hia woh tum ko next update mein pata chaly ga... bulky us se bh next mein... shilpa anty k correct words... samarat.. and all...
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Posted: 13 years ago

RPLYD TO U ALL….THANKU..

Chapter: 29

Past:

Mayank: idhar dekho aur bolo…

Nupur: mayank please mjhy chor do… with that she hugged him and he embrace her to.. when he felt that she has relaxed he broke away, and cuped her face..

Mayank: kya hua hai nupur.. asay kyun kaha.. tai jaan ny kya kaha

Nupur: unhony kaha k.. k.. mein tumko chor do gi tu woh shares day dain gi…

Mayank: WHAT… magar kyun…

Nupur: mjhy nhi pata… woh khati hian k agar asa hoa tu 25% shares tumahry naam kerday gi… mayank un ko sab pata hai ..chotay papa k project k baray mein bhi..

Mayank: aur waha bhi trouble un k hi kiya hoa hai.. god…

Nupur: tum ny lawyer se baat ki…

Mayank: hmm.. nai se baat ki hai… aj pora din wahin tha… sari tarha se dekh liya hai..koi option nhi hai…. Sirf ek option bachi hai.. k mein khud America jao aur waha ja ker us company k owner se personally baat kero….

Nupur: tum mjhy yaha akela chor ker jao gay…

Mayank: nupur… abhi mein sure nhi hoon…. Agar financial company ko pata chal gay tu woh aur action laysakti hai k mein bhag raha hoon yaha se … tu yeah option buhat soch samhj ker istmel kerni hogi….

Nupur:is se kya hoga

Mayank: agar woh tender k sara mal karhid lain tu humaray pass pasy ajay gay… aur hum company ko waps day sakty hain.. maagr ek bat wahin k wahin ha… papa k masla is se hal nhi hota hai…

Nupur: us k lyan tu shares chaiy hongay hi…. Haina..

Mayank: haan…

Nupur: mein papa se baat kero

Mayank: koi faida nhi hai… jo baatein hum chopa rahy hain woh sab samny ajay gi… aur taya jaan kya kerlay ga…. Un khath mein kuch bhi nhi hai…kuch bhi

Kuch samhj nhi araha hai yaar.. keray tu kya kery

Nupur: mayank … shayd humara sath itna hi tha.. tum mjhy chor do…

Mayank: deemgh karab hogaya hai kya… yeah baat tum khabi nhi mano ga unki…. Zayda se zayda sab ko bata doon ga… kya hoga

Nupur: mayank pagal hogaya ho kiya… baat sirf humari nhi hai…. Choty papa ami… un k kiya hoga… hum apny liyan unko kyun…

Mayank: mjhy se nhi hoga aur nahi mein asa kero ga… mein baba se baat kerta hoon..

Nupur: she went near him and hold his hand and stopped him… tum janty ho baba per kya asar hoga is baat k…. tum janty ho yeah thik nhi hai…. Baba khabi bardsht nhi ker pay gay….

He dropped himself on bed…

Mayank: tu kya kero…

Nupur: ami ki baat manlo

Mayank: nupur.. tum kyun bar bar..

Nupur: aur kya kero mayank…. Aur koi tareqa hai

Mayank: aur is baat ki kya guarantee hai k woh us k baad sab kuch day dain gi…

Nupur: woh hum pehly hi naam kerlay gay

Mayank: ya really… tai jaan hum per aitebar keray gi… yeah ek buhat hi bikar option hai nupur… bulkily bikar …

Nupur: is k elwa koi aur rasta hai tu bata doo…kya tum sab kuch try nhi ker chukay ho… sab kuch…she said hugging him

Mayank: koi tu option hoga…nupur hum taya jaan ko bata day.. taya jaan talluq tu nhi hony dain ga.. bulky hoskata hai woh finically bhi humari maadat kerskay…

Nupur: tum thik kah rahy ho.. mein kal subha hi baat kerti hoon…

Mayank: hmm…

………

Nupur: baba woh mjhy ap se kuch baat kerni hai

Taya jaan: han beta bolo…

Tai jaan who was keep a close eye on her and mayank suspected sumthing fishy when nupur went to study…. She followed her and she was right … she has got the right way to handle it.. but nto so easy…

Tai jaan: kya hua nupur mjhy se baat kerlo…

She was stunt to see her there… she wasn't home even.. than how she came here….

Nupur: nhi woh…

Taya jaan: aray beta bolo nah kya baat hai..persahn kyun hoti hoo

Nupur: kuch nhi baba mein bhool gai… baad mein baat kerti hoo

He chuckled…

Taya jaan: acha thik hai… jao..

Tai jaan went out and grip her hand dragged her to her room throwing her in

Tai jaan: kya kerna cha rahi thi tum haan

Nupur: mein kuch bhi kero ap se matlan

Tai jaan: mjh se hi tu matlab hai beta ji…. Jo tum soch rahi ho nah asa akar tum ny kiya tu… 25% bhi khabi nhi milay gay tum ko samjhi tum.. aur kaan khol k ek aur baat sun lo… agar faraz ko is baray mein kuch bhi pata chala nah…. Tu yeah rahy mayank k khilaf FIR k papers… sirf ek phone aur woh andar hoga…. Samjhi tum….

Nupur: ap asa kyun ker rahi hai … asa kasa kersakti hain ap…

Tai jaan: mein is se bhi bora kersakti hoon tumhary mayank k sath samjhi tum… tum dono k pass kal sham tak k waqt hai… ya tu meri baat manlo… warna mayank jail tu jay ga hi sahi… sath mein Salman ko kabar mein bhi lay ker jay gay

Nupur: AMI….

Tai jaan: AWAZ neechy rekho … samjhi tum…koi chalaki kerny ki zaroorat nhi hai… warna woh hoga jo tumhary farishto ny bhi nhi socha hoga…aur jo tum soch rahi ho k tum Faraz ko sab batao kit u talluq rukhny k liyan shares day day ga… tu janab Faraz k hath mein ek chees nhi hai…. Aur yeah tu tumhara woh aqalmand shoor achy se jaan gaya ho ga ab tak k mein ny is baar koi kahli war nhi chora hai… tu apni chalakiya apny pass rekho ….. she shouted on her top… and left shutting the door with bang…

She took her cell out and called mayank… asking him to come home ASAP… she has to tell him about The FIR…. Her minds is turning numb to number…

Gunjan came in to nupur's room suspecting sumthing is dam wrong… they have lost there old charm, carefree ness, the affections tht was showering so much.. now adays its more like holding eachother like consoling rather than.. love… she have seen mayank sitting alone trying in deep thought or most of the time they remain in there room and try to smile n make things appear normal

Gunjan: nupur.. kya baat hai.. mein aj kal dekh rahi hoo mayank aur tum dono pershan ho kafi zayda..

Nupur: nhi kuch nhi… bus asay hi

Gunjan: nupur please.. koi baat tu hai…

Nupur: gunjan kuch nhi bus… mayank aj kal kam mein busy hia tu thora frustrated hogaya hai

She smiled…

Gunjan: tu lari hoi hai kya… aray baba tu us mein itna pershan kyun.. she touched her cheek… kuch nhi hoga… us k deemgh thik ho tu bhag ker aay ga tumhary pass…

Nupur: haan… bus asa khabi nhi hoa na tu

Gunjan: hm.. dost na laray ..shsor zaroor laray ga… she chukled..

Mayank: kaun lara raha hai

Gunjan: kya soon rahi hoon mein deever ji… apny meri nanad se lari gi

Mayank was surprised and look to her and she signal him to zip it…

Mayank: tu.. apki naand humain tang bhi tu kerti hai… donot worry hum mana lay gay

Gunjan: ji bulkily… jitni jaldi ap yeah kerly apki sehat k liya behtar hoga…. Kya samjhy.. mein chalti hoon… mnay k liyan thori privacy tu chaiy hogi…

Mayank: bulkily… he smirk…

Gunjan left and mayank went near nupur…pulling her in his arms..

Mayank: hmm.. tu janab bhabi se shikayt lagi meri… hum ny kiya kya… he kissed her forehead… manay kiya… jasay bhabi bol rahi thi…

Nupur: kya kerti.. woh poch rahi thi k tum pershan kyun hoon…

His smiled faded…

Nupur: mayank baba se baat nhi kersakty…. Ami ny dahmaki di ha k woh tum jail bhej day gi.. un k pass FIR k copy bhi hai… jo applicable hojay gi.. with a phone call… kya kuch bhi nhi hosakta… sirf ek hi rasta hai….

She asked with so much pain tht his heart came in to fist… he hugged her tight…and than moving away he framed his hand around her face… and kissed her eyes softly that were about to drop a tear…

Mayank: mjhy per behorosa hai …. He said rubbing his lips down on her cheek….he was doing this all so softly n affectianltly tht she was feeling her self drown

Nupur: haan… per…

Mayank: koi rasta tu nikal hi lay ga… he said kissing corner of her lip…

She clutch him tight

Nupur: ami…..ny….kal…tak..

With that he silent her, and kissed her softly … making her loss herself…. to assure her that they will find there way but not will depart from each other..

Moving away he spread his fingers in her hairs, whose eyes were still cold basking in the feeling..and embrace her within him….

………..

Present:

Shilpa with great difficulty found her feets to go near mayank who was standing in the corridor balcony of the hospital looking out side…

She placed her hand on his shoulder yet he didn't turned around…

Shilpa: beta maa se buhat naraz hai nah

He chuckled pitfully

Mayank: nhi.. mein kisi se bhi naraz nhi hoon…. Ab yeah ehassa ksis k liyan nhi bacha

Shilpa: she gasp to hear the plainless in his voice… seems he is over everyone…. mayank.. mein janti hoon hum sab ny buhat bora kiya hai tumharay sath… ek bar tumhari baat kahany k moqa tu dayty..

He turn to her and she shuddered looking at his eyes … they have nothing in them just a question… why mom…

Mayank: janti hai jab itna sab kuch horaha tha tu sab se zayda mein apko yaaad ker raha tha… jab darwazy per apko dekha tu .. ek ajeeb sa sukoon hua tha.. k ap se tu mein woh kah paoo ga jo mehoss ker raha hoon… woh sary dar.. jo mein Nupur se bhi nhi kah sakta… woh aur daar jay gi…. per ap ny bhi ek second mein woh saray daar gayab kerdiya… yeah ehassa dila ker.. is rastay per mein jitna jaldi hosaky yeah manlo k sirf hum hain… jo chaly gay.. aur koi nhi…

Shilpa: mayank.. please humain maaf kerdo.. hum janty hain k hum sab nhi tumahray se galat kiya…

Mayank: ami sach kah raha ho mjhy ap mein se kisi se koi shikayat nhi hai…. Janata ho batmeezi ker raha hoon

Shilpa: bus beta… aur nhi kaho asa… tum ghusa kerly ty aur shikayat kerty tu mjhy zayda sukoon milta… tum asay sab ko bardasht ker gay… magar akhir tum ny asa kiya kyun

Mayank: raat buhat hogai hia ami… ap ghar jay… samrat ny driver tu beehja hoga..

Shilpa: aj tum ghar chaly jao… mein nupur k pass hoon…

Mayank: nhi… mein yahin raho ga… ap jay.. kayal rekhiya ga..

Shilpa: tum apna kayal rekho… shayd ab koi aur yeah sab kerny ka haq nhi rekhta

Mayank: asa tu nhi hai nupur hai nah…

She smiled ..and patted his cheek..

Shilpa: humesha khush raho… hamehsa… tum ny yeah sab kasay kyun jo bhi kiya ho… per ek baat tu hai .. mjhy sach mein aj fakar horaha hai k tum meray betay ho… aur meri soch aur samhj se zayda achi k rastay per ho.. hum sab chahy kuch bhi kahay kuch bhi sochay… hum mein se koi bhi tumahin define nhi kerta..

She moved forward and hugged him… and moved away as she can feel he wasn't as warm as he use to be… and was moving back home

Maaynk: ami…

Shilpa: han

Mayank: ap kaha rukhi hain…

Shilpa: ghar per aur kaha …

Mayank: dhayhan rekhiya ga.. kafi zayda…. Allah hafiz..

Shilpa: as kyun kah rahy hoo

Mayank: koi tu wajah hogi.. ateibar rekhain…

Shilpa: mjhy pora aetibar hai.. mery betay ny kah diya… tu ab asa hi kero gi… thik hai.. AH

Past:

Mayank: nupur…. Sirf ek rasta hai ab… per is mein kafi sari muskil asakti hai… aur woh kahin na kahin tumhain akelay dekhni hogi….

Nupur: kasa rasta tum bolo tu hum kuch bhi keray gay… is masla k haal nikla nhi hoga….

Mayank: hum tai jaan ki talluq wali baat man lyty hain…

She closed her eyes to let her tears escape from her eyes…

Mayank: per wasy nhi jasa woh soch rahi hain

Nupur: tum kya kah rahy hoo

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome update
Beautifully written
loved it to d coreee
Uff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i sooo loved d way They both love Each other...Spcly!!! Mayank!!!!!!!!!!! Sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i mean asa koi banda kabhi ho sakta hain kya...the way he is sooo much devoted towards Nupur the way he loves her more than anything n anyone more than Himself!!!! just make me SIGH more n moreee!!!!!!!!!!
Gosh!!!!!!!!!! he is the best character sketch!!!!! i just love him to d coreee
Pyar karna toh koi iss Mayank se sikhe...sigh!
just loved it the way he holds her strong...Sigh
Awesome update api
bass kash ke woh GA ka katal karna mere hath mein hota toh main itniii behrehmi se marti ke kya kahu...😡 kamini kahin ki 😡
ALLAH asi auraton ya insaano se sab ko durrr rakhein n Hifajat se rakhein...Ameen.
Awww...i sooo felt bad for Shilpa aunty n Mayank...Sigh!
their convo was sooo heart touching n making me sad...
i wish Mayank unhe maaf karde...
i sooo love Shilpa aunty 🤗 she is the best Saas ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i ❤️ her to coreee usse bhi jyada jitna main uss GA ko hate karti hoon...😳
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: sry! for the delay as main aj karne hi wali thi kal raat baki sare un-ress karte karte late ho gaya tha bt then aj apka pm a gaya 😔
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
No cments g let me enjoy it
mayuloveu thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow beautiful. I want samrat mayank convo too where samrant will want maffi. plz dont end the story soon. plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
again awsm update Mayank ne soltn nikal hi liya
akhir mayu hain hi itna hoshiarr lvd the update convo btwn Mayank and shilpa was also very good.

thanxx fr PM

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