Arhi FF:Taste of His Own Medicine(Chap2 updated)

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Hi Friends,

Attempting to write a FF for the first time, hence need lots of encouragement and all your support.

Posting the first chapter.

Will proceed based on your feedback and comments.




ARHI FF : TASTE OF HIS OWN MEDICINE


CHAPTER ONE


NAA JAO SAAIYAN


Arnav was late again, Khushi sighed to herself, looking at the wall clock in their bedroom strike the magical hour of midnight. It had been the same routine for the past few weeks.

She hardly saw her husband for the past few weeks and couldn't remember when she last had a decent conversation with him. He was just too busy.
Arnav would come home well after midnight when she would be half asleep or completely asleep (depending on how hectic her day had been) . Even if Khushi was awake when he returned, he would be too tired to speak even a sentence to her.

In the mornings, he would get up late while she had to be up and early for morning aarti and household stuff that needed to be completed and of course cater to the family's breakfast and meals.
Sure, Raizadas had an entire fleet of assorted servants what with the household helps, nanny, cook, drivers, etc but she and Payal had always insisted on cooking for the family themselves. They were after all halwai's betis, they would tell proudly. Cooking was in their blood.
Khushi was very proud of Arnav and all his achievements, which included being a successful businessmen at such a young age. She understood that he had a huge responsibility on him of his business, especially now, what with the new line of their bridal collection being launched in just a few weeks.

But Arnav had been so caught up in his work, that Khushi wondered ruefully, whether he remembered that he was no longer a bachelor and had a wife waiting at home for him.Shaking her head to get rid of such melancholy thoughts, Khushi switched off the bedroom lights and keeping the night lamp switched on, she resigned herself to sleep.
She didn't even realise when Arnav came home and slept next to her.

In the morning, Khushi got up late, having stayed up till midnight waiting for Arnav to come, resulting in her rushing about getting ready for the morning aarti. Hence, she did not have time to even glance at her sleeping husband. Flustered at being late for the aarti, she almost ran down the stairs to find that Naniji, Mamiji, Payal and Anjalidi all had already gathered for the morning aarti in the mandir and were waiting for her.

"Sorry"she mumbled softly, eyes downcast and face apologetic. "So, Chotey came home late yesterday,as well,haan Khushi betiya ?" asked Naniji looking at Khushi's downcast face.
"Ji,Naniji" replied Khushi in low voice. "Hmm." Naniji said looking sympathetically at Khushi and shaking her head indicating her displeasure at Arnav's behavior.

"Khushibhabhi, put your foot down and scold him "said Anjali, limping towards her and patting her cheek."You have been letting him get away easily with his ridiculous behavior for the past few weeks."
"Di, its ok"Khushi rose to Arnav's defense" The launch is in a few weeks, you know how much that means to him na"
"Yes, I do, bhabhi" smiled Anjali, hugging Khushi "But isn't family more important than work? Chotey needs to get his priorities fixed"
"She is absolutely right, phatti sari" said Mamiji, joining the chorus. "Hamara Arnavbitwa is acting likes bachleorwa, nat marriagewa"
"Ok, ok, Lets discuss this later and begin the aarti. Its already getting late" said Naniji, changing the topic cleverly, looking at Khushi's sad face.

The family completed aarti and was gathered around the table for the breakfast when Arnav walked down the stairs, ready to leave for work.
Khushi and Payal walked in from the kitchen with trays filled with breakfast items and both began serving everyone.

"Arnavji" said Khushi, smiling at him. "Khushi, I am a bit busy. I will have breakfast in office with Aakash. Bye.Come on Aakash, we are getting late" said Arnav looking at Aakash, not even sparing a glance in Khushi's direction. Aakash went and silently mumbled his apology for skipping breakfast to Payal and walked behind Arnav.
Both the brothers walked out of the door with Khushi staring sadly at Arnav's retreating back.

" But Arnavji, I had made your favorite Aloo Puri for breakfast today"mumbled Khushi to herself. Payal patted Khushi's hand sympathetically.
Naniji, Mamiji and Anjali looked sadly at Khushi and then each other, deciding to take matters in their hands before things went completely out of control.




Chapter One : Naa Jao Saiyaan
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3212049/arhi-ff-taste-of-his-own-medicine-chap2-updated

Chapter Two : Nagme Hai, Kisse Hai, Baatein Hain...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Feedback and comments will be appreciated
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nice story line do continue 👍🏼
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Superb start...very interesting
waiting to see what khushi will do
please continue soon
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Hey!
This is a great start to a new FF! 😃
I'd love to see where the story goes ...
Is there something other than work on Arnav's mind and hence he is distancing himself from Khushi ... well that's the first thought that crossed my mind.
Anyway, please continue with this and PM me for the next update. Thanks!
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Continue nice story...:)
plzz can u pm me when u update...plzzz...
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nice ff
cont soom
plz add me 2 ur pm list
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me likes!! 😊

pm me when you update!

cheers!
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nice start !!! please continue !!
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nice work for a first timer!! Do continue.. storyline seems to have a lot to give!😊

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