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Posted: 12 years ago
poor geet...
feeling pity on her...
let maan know her problem soon...
honeymoon???
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Posted: 12 years ago
brilliant writer i must say, the way u deveeloped the story its unbelievable!! waiting anxiously for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh no what's happening with Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago

geet's condition is getting worse day-by-day

nd no one in d house knows abt it

wen deir all misery r gonna end???

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Posted: 12 years ago
i feel so bad for Geet and Maan...is he serious...he is angry because she left him...
she went with a letter telling him of his marriage which was very well arraned and not a lie
he moved forward and got married
he has a daughter
and he is mad at her to an extent that it clouds over his love? I found it as a very shallow act...how can love does not recognise her pain
i am sorry but he lost lot of respect in my eyes today
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oshi, here Sara comes again. Just read both the works and commented there. As per the patient thing, it is a tough task for me.

Well, cut everything else, me will give honest comment as always. Jia is a angel here and dadima is trying her best to bring everything back to normal, for sure. Maan being short temper and arrogant, no new thing but Geet being self-pity and helpless, can't digest. You are always free to use your imagine. Me have trust on you coz you can't do injustice to the lead and also can't disappoint us. Just a simple frustration, half truth from past is making me insane. Upar se, where everybody gone? I know both are hurt *she being more* and angry *he being more* but they should solve it together. Act mature and bring your trust back. Overall, awesome yet painful. Waiting for precap part.

Do cont soon and do PM me.
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Posted: 12 years ago

MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- 66

Updated both stories so will reply to ur comments in next update...😛

Dadimaa you can't do this. Maan growled totally despising the idea. His Dadimaa was making his life difficult every passing day; couldn't she give him some peace n space? Or was it too much to ask for? He had come to inform her about his upcoming tour to London but now she was adamant about him taking Geet there as well.

Maan as you said it's just a five days visit. You are always engrossed in your work; this could be your mini honeymoon. Dadimaa said in a calm tone, pretending as if she knew nothing.

Excuse me... Did I really hear mini honey moon? Maan gave a hysterical laugh. Dadimaa, I n Geet are no picnic here... n you know it well. Standing in same room was impossible for them n Dadimaa was talking about them going together for the so-called mini honeymoon, he scoffed at the thought.

I am sorry Dadimaa to burst your little bubble but Geet is not going with me. He said firmly not wanting any more discussion on the obnoxious topic.

So you are not listening to me. Dadimaa asked equally determined.

Do you still have doubt? He raised his brow.

Then what I am doing in this house when my words mean nothing. Dadimaa was furious now n Maan clenched his fist, she exactly know where to hit the bird. I am leaving with Annie n Jia, you can do as you please.

Dadimaa you... A knock on the door interrupted him.

Speak of the devil. Maan thought stingily.

Dadimaa aapne mujhe bulaya? Geet asked in low voice once aware of Maan's presence.

Haan... Start packing. You and Maan are going to London for five days. Okay! That got Geet's attention.

Maan has some work there n you are joining him. Dadimaa said in a no-nonsense tone. You will be leaving the day after tomorrow.

Maan's clenched fists n stiff jaw told her that he had already tried fruitlessly-of course he was against this trip as much as her-so she didn't said anything n nodded her head. Maan left the room, with nothing much to say Geet also followed his trail.
He felt like breaking everything 5 days with Geet were worst than burning in hell. Her face only was enough to make him mad with fury.

Geet cleared her throat behind n his temper flared to new heights. How dare you enter my room? Angrily he strolled towards her n she stepped back with a look of pure fear on her face.

Again digging nails into his palm, he tried to control his raging nerves. The girl ignited a furious passion in him n he didn't know how to tame that.

Nervously licking her lips, she looked up. It was not like she wanted to talk to him but it was a necessity at the moment but as much as she forced the air out of her lungs it refused to turn into words.

Maan caught the action as she licked her lips n couldn't help himself replaying the scene in his mind, her feel was engraved in his each cell... n he remembered how good she felt when he kissed her, how smooth that skin was... inside those clothes, how exotic she looked beneath him, her eyes dazed with desire. He shook his head getting rid of the images as the previous anger again bubbled to the surface.

You don't have to take me with you. She succeeded in pulling out some words out of her dry throat. I will go home n you can go to London.

N you think your family won't tell Dadimaa that you are there. He barked back knowing Dadimaa, she would be singing everywhere about their mini honeymoon by now.

I will take care of them. She said n he wanted to ask how. Then thought against it, her 'how, where n what'... were not his concern.

Fine with me but I don't want to get caught in another fuss. Not even once thinking about why she was doing it, he agreed just reassured that she won't be there to piss him off.

You won't... Announcing she left for her room.

The driver opened the car n Geet slipped in beside Maan. It was a sunny day, birds were chirruping outside n winds blew lightly making the loose hairs bounce over her face. The flight was of 11:30 in morning n that was a big relief. She didn't knew if she would have been able to go in her disoriented state moreover she didn't wanted anyone to know that she was not well, it was her own problem n she learnt dealing with herself long ago, gone were the days when she depended on others for every need, for company, for friendship... for love.

The car rolled out of the gates n she felt guilty for feeling better. Now she wouldn't be in Mansion with people all around, she would be alone... by herself. No need to hide her pain or something because there won't be anyone to notice. Loneliness in itself is bliss.

Maan thoughts wandered back to Jia. He had a hard time bidding her good bye. Knowing her reaction he had decided to inform her about the trip in the morning only otherwise aware that he would never say no to her, she would have tried to stop him.

After getting ready he had gone to meet her n hearing that he was leaving for five days she had instantly started crying.

You going away... She said sucking her upper lip, tears streaming down her face. You angry? Jia will be good.

Princess, you are already the best. Maan said doing his best to cajole her, his heart shattered a thousand pieces wataching her cry.

Then don't leave. She rounded her hands around his neck n buried her face into his chest not ready to let go. Maan gently pulled her a back n placed a peck on her damp cheek then her red nose.

Daddy has an important work darling. If I won't go other will go ahead n your daddy will be left behind. Jia looked at him with her doe shaped eyes, listening carefully. You want Daddy to be a loser.
At this Jia shook her head rapidly then again her lips trembled. But I want Daddy.

I will be back in a blink n every time to miss me just tell nan, she will call me n then we could talk. Jia hardly looked convinced. You are big girl. Right?

Jia nodded her head n her eyes gleamed. Maan didn't understand why she so much wanted to a big girl still this always worked. So when big girl's Daddy leave they don't cry n they say bye with a big smile.

Why?

Yeah she had to ask, now answer Daddy. He grimaced. Because then they could do all the secret things.

Ooo... God he was saying this now but once she would actually become a big girl, he swear he would never say something like this, though he doubted if she would ever be enough grown up for him. She was n would always be his little princess. You terious?

Yeah damn serious. Eventually, finished with pacifying Jia he kissed her forehead. When I will be back we will go to aquarium.

Acu acu... She screamed merrily. Remembering again that for now he was leaving she switched back to gloomy mood. You'll be back soon?

Yes real soon.

Promit.

Promise.

He was going to miss Jia real bad. Dadimaa would somehow coax her but he was not sure about himself. She may be small but for him she was the life giving drop of water. Her cute talks kept him distracted while she herself gave him a reason to live.

He leaned his head back... next few days were going to be difficult for him. He seldom left her n if there would be some emergency he made sure to return the very next day but the London branch was facing problems in management with the next in charge in line since he shifted to Delhi. The trip was inevitable n keeping in mind the long distance with relatively serious issue, 5 days were the best he could do otherwise he would have surely returned earlier. Anyways no use chewing over what should or could have happened, he sighed already feeling the emptiness.

The car came to halt on the street far away from KM n Geet got her cue, time to part ways... fortunately. She got down n the door closed behind. While she walked away the car zoomed past n both didn't bother to look back.
Precap- Rajendra in KM.


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Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
maneet hm they decided to go separate place jia maan moments awsem
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Posted: 12 years ago

sad update...

wen will d truth come out!!!!!!!!!!

m waiting for it

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Posted: 12 years ago
sad update dear
hope they meet soon dear

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