Why? Oh! Why? - A SwaRon Poem.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

dis is sooo beautiful <3

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AmRiTa_S

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Beautiful stuff Madhura...perfect from Swayam's POV.

Dese two are seriously very complex people...but they are perfect for each other.

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Kankshita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

This is a very sweet poem, with a few grammatical errors here and there. Otherwise, well rhymed and yes, dude, this is poor Swayum's old regular volley of questions. Sharon makes Swayum dismal, for all we know, always. Well captured. (:

Thanks for the PM and apologies for keeping you waiting. 😳

Love from

Kanks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

This was beautiful Madz!

Beautiful display of Swayam's regular worries and emotions.

The rhyming was well and it sounded almost perfect.You write beautiful poems,have told you earlier too.😳

Thanks for the PM and pardon me for giving my feedback so late.

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

beautiful poem dear...loved it..perfect POV of swayam...so touched by it.

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

For starters nice dp!
Swayam bechara tho kab se pyaar mein phasa hain.
Why oh? Why is the case for him.
PS- Maar math dalna shop ke liye yaha par suggestion chod rahi hun.
Are you watching Arjun in SP?
Arjun - Riya make a great pair.

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Shalini

@lyfisbeautiful

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Haha this was cool madhura..😎 its like swayam when he was 14!! he is too matured to be this whiny now but we fans are not.. so it made a fun read and it made perfect sense.. some 'whys' hv no answers!!🤔

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doll_sg

@doll_sg

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

amazing perfect from swayam's pov

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Satnam

@Satluvsd3

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

superb poem!! ⭐️👏
loved it!
spoke whatever swayam feels!! 😊

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

First of all Madz, I'm so very sorry for being so late with this comment. It's weird how I've been saying the same thing everywhere these days. :P

The poem is really nice. Well actually, "long" is too less a measure to define how long Swayam has been waiting for Sharon to come around. Even after getting into this so called "trial relationship" the guy doesn't have a moment of peace. CVs are making a game out of Sharon character, who bhi "complexity" ke naam pe. :P

Anyways, just want to say that poem is really nice and shows Swayam's situation perfectly.!

"When all begins to just go fine,
You start from a different line"
That is the ultimate truth.!

Thank you for the PM you sent me ages back and I'm extremely sorry for being late.

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