Why? Oh! Why? - A SwaRon Poem.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I made a short SwaRon poem. It is from Swayam's POV, a bit of SwaRon journey, I can say, hope it connects with them, :). Comments and criticism is welcome.
Why? Oh! Why?

I am waiting for you for long,

But you always prove me wrong.

I try to make you happy,

But you feel it all crappy.

Why? Oh! Why?

I try to be composed and cool,

But you make me feel as a fool.

I know you inside-out,

But you throw me as a cut-out.

Why? Oh! Why?

I try my best to be soft,

But you make my anger froth.

When all begins to just go fine,

You start from a different line.

Why? Oh! Why?

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Madhura.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful madz..simply perfect frm swayam's
n specially I love d name...why?oh!why?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaRonforever

beautiful madz..simply perfect frm swayam's
n specially I love d name...why?oh!why?

Thank u so much Poorv, am glad you like the poem so much and the name too! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awwiee madhura dee.🤗.this was short n cute..i loved it..do write more poems..👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Madhura,

Lovely poem.. short and beautiful..😊 Perfect from swayam's P.O.V... sharon really makes swayam this way.. ruing all his plans in just one go.. Poor swayam..😆 .. Really beautiful piece of work.. 👏

-Shruti


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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey madhura! it was realy nice.. U described swayam's p.ov very well.. sharon realy makes him crazy..😆 it was realy a brilliant piece of work.. do write more of such brilliant stuff on swaron..and don't forget to pm me..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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-*UNRES*-

Firstly..
That was a Cute sa poem! :D
Loved it.. u shudve continued !!
i wanted to know mre about der Cute pov's !! :)
Looking forward for it! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Madhura, awesome poem sweetie.
An apt title- Why? Oh! Why?
Sharon ko villain bana diya, koi nahi, it still connects a lot with SwaRon.
I would be really glad if you can keep scribbling some more poems for SwaRon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: neetha

awwiee madhura dee.🤗.this was short n cute..i loved it..do write more poems..👍🏼

Thank u Neetha, will try!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaron19

Hey Madhura,


Lovely poem.. short and beautiful..😊 Perfect from swayam's P.O.V... sharon really makes swayam this way.. ruing all his plans in just one go.. Poor swayam..😆 .. Really beautiful piece of work.. 👏

-Shruti


Thank you for liking it Shruti!
Well yes, so its from Swayam's pov, though Sharon has her reasons, :)
Thanks for appreciation!

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