New FF on Ariya !!UNSPOKEN LOVE!!Chapt 48 Pg143 FEB 02 PMLATE

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 13 years ago

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please continue dear😊

Poor riya hurt😭

y z hel is rathore so bad tempered and scolding riya so much😕

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fasiha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

really loved it.

it looks like in ur ff arjun and rathode have swapped their places.

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 13 years ago

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haruhi26Direct Link Posted: 16 September 2012 at 11:20am | IP Logged

please continue dear😊

Poor riya hurt😭

y z hel is rathore so bad tempered and scolding riya so much😕

Dear Rathod beheviour will reveal later.

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007
haruhi26Direct Link Posted: 16 September 2012 at 11:20am | IP Logged
please continue dear😊
Poor riya hurt😭
y z hel is rathore so bad tempered and scolding riya so much😕

Dear Rathod beheviour will reveal later.

you mean it was him the guy at the start of your story😉

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Mahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

nice continuation dear👏.. oops the mystery behind Rathod's behavior leaves me suspicious🤔... oh well.. i am sure that you will reveal the mystery soon!! 😃

Thanks for the continuation and please do continue soon!!😳

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

CHAPTER 3

Thy all take Riya to d hospital . All team r vry worried , bcoz Riya is a young , dear to everyone. Doctor takes her to operation theather. After 1 & 1/2 hour doctor come outside & inform thm operation is sucessfull , she is out of danger nw. Shree felt so angry on Rathod , bcoz he knw His Ri , his best frnd. suffered a lot bcoz of ths man. he remerbered all past events of Rathod & Riya . He always tortures her & she silently suffer ths all . he only sees his Ri always tense abt sumthng & as a frnd he try to ask her bt she never tld him. Sometimes Shree saw her cried in thr bathroom. And Shree lost his cool, he shouthed @ Rathod ( Who seating on a bench lifeless.)

Shree : Nw r u happy Sir...

Arjun & Chotu luke @ thm.

Shree : See , what u have dne to her , u always insulted her , humilated her & see the result . Why r u so silent , ohhh i guess nw u dn't find answer to protect u . right Sir .Nw u dn't have any explanation Mr. Samer Rathod..?

Arjun & Chotu tries to pacify him , bt thy failed. Rathod is still seat thr like sme statue.He nt ans back to Shree , r his voice cn't reach to his ears. he is in his own world. Blood continueously coming frm his wound , Doctor notcies ths & tke him inside his cabin for dressing. Doctor sees him he is luke like Robot , no emotion on his face. Doctor realises he in a shock. Doctor dressing his wound , suddenely his cell phn rings , bt Rathod is his own world to react sumthng. Finally Doctor receives call & informs d person tht he is docor. A person over d phn sounds very wiorried while talking , whn he heard abt Doctor . D person immeadately asks abt owner of d ohn ( Rathod) Doctor inform him he is in hospital. He & his officer Riya are hurt themselves during operation & nw recrupting under his observation . A person over d phn thx to him & put off d phn.

Suddenly Rathod stands & turn around towards door & start walk to door. Doctor calls him & reminds him abt his phn bt he already reach outside his cabin , goes to his team . He asks Arjun , " Is she fine ? " , " I want to meet her ." , "I want to see her. " before Arjun could open his mouth to ans him , Shree suddenely goes to him & hold his shirt's collar tightly , "Dn't you dare to ask abt her. " "You always discourged her , humlited her , & nw u asking to us she is fine.?"

Rathod : Plz...

Shree : " W all witnessness her condition Mr. Rathod , you try to kill her ."

As soon as Rathod heard ths he felt thron in his heart.

Suddenly someone come aggrasilvely & give tight slap to Shree. All of them expect Rathod luk @ tht person shockingly. She is a lady who is in post 50's. She seems vry rich , bcoz she wears vry costly cloths

( i give ths role suhasini Mulye she was seen in Geet as a Maan's first dadi. bcoz i think he is best suit to his mother role )

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elle..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Nyc nyc nyc...do continue. Wanna know rathore's mystery

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Lady : Tumhari himmat kaise hue hamare bete par haath uthane ki ? ( Hw dare to slap my son)

Shree : "You dn't abt your son mam .

Lady : Just stop it & what u knw abt my son ?

Shree : Mam , i dn't want know abt your son , bcoz i knew him him , he is killer , he try to kill our Riya. He is such a ...

Lady : ( Before Shree can complete his sentence tht lady give him another tight slap on his face ) Chup rahiye aap , vo kabhi apni chutki ko kabhi dukhi nahi kar sakte . Vo jaan hai unki. ( Just shut up , he never see his chutki hurt bcoz of him . Chutki is his jaan . )

Arjun , Chotu & Shree : Chutki?????????

Lady : Ha chutki , hamari beti aur unki behen. ( Yes . my daughter & Rathod's younger sister )

Arjun , Shree & Chotu : kya????? Riya Rathod Sir ki choti behen hai??????? thy all r shell shocked..

The lady nw goes to Rathod , who seat silently on a near bench. She caressing his messed hair softly , hold his chin to her index finger & lift his face. She feel vry bad for son As soon as her eyes meet his eyes , he throws himself in her arms & sobbed loudly... He sobbing continuosly ,,, his mother just hold him tight in her arms. He speak finally , "Maa , humne kuch nahi kiya. Hame hathyare nahi hai ... Hamari ... hamari... chutki theek to ho jaaygi na.. ???" his mother caressing his back softly & say , "Use kuch nahi nahi hoga . "

All team are shell shocked . They never see thr Boss like ths, the chief who always strong , & thry know as a emotionless man who is sobbing like child for his chutki & thr sweet dear Riya.

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Amina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Awesome story plz contiue fast

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Mahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

wow what a wonderful story👏.. chutki chutki😉😆 and i seriously loved the way shree reacted😊 must say, he is a true friend😳 oohh i want arjun in action here😆