New FF on Ariya !!UNSPOKEN LOVE!!Chapt 48 Pg143 FEB 02 PMLATE - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
wow u relay crate mystery and successful make us in shocking mood

i love the way this story is turning

awesome please update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
update sooonnn please pm me cant wait riya is his lil sis wow pleaseee update sooonn
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 4
Nw rathod & his mother goes to see Riya. Rathod sees all machines & saline bottles & feel vry bad for her , he cursed himself. He wnted Riya leave ETF , bcoz he knew ths field is vry danger 4 her. So , he always insulted her , humilted her , bt his mind knows whn insulted her , humilted her he felt someone kill him 100th times. Bt Riya never utter a wrd against him , she always stay calm , tht kills him. His eyes bcome moist. He feel someone hold on his palm & sqeeze it softly , he look @ his mother , she nodds assurly , tht everything is alright. His mother felt vry bad for both her childrens , she thinks what if tht time never comes into thr life , tht time stole her childrens frm her , her life happiness depend upon thm , bt nw she knows damage ws dne. She tell Samar to seat thr , & she herself visits Doctor wit one man who like thr Manager. She asks Doctor abt bth of her children, doctor assures her everything is fine nw. . After consulting him she goes back to her daughter, she always wants to meet thm , she always dreamt abt those scenes whn she w'll meet her childrens , happiness on thr face , bt ofcourse her dreams shattered , whn she received d news frm thr manager Gehlot ji tht her childrens is in hospital , she leave immeadately , witout informing anyone. She reached Riya's room & whr ETF Team standing Silently , she look @ thm . Thy all r seems vry tired & tense. She requested thm to go home & tke sme rest , bcoz she & her son is thr , bt team refused politely. Nw she just about to enter Riya's room , whn sees her beta (Rathod) hold his sister's one hand in his strong palms , & lukng @ her lovingly.
She suddenely goes back to Flashback.
Samar Rathod is just 5yrs old & Riya is just born baby.
FLASHBACK
Rathod's mother just goes outside of her room. Little Samar took ths oppturnity & sneaks in his parent's bedroom . He look @ Riya who sleep peacefully on centre of the bed. He climbed up bed & goes to near her.
Suddenely his mother come back in room & ask him , "Samar beta aap yaha kya kar rahe ho . ?" Bcoz ths time whn little Samar goes to play wit his frnds.
Samar : Ma sa ye ekdum pari jaisi lagti hai na , (Ma , She exactly look like fairy)
Ma sa : Ha beta.(Ys son)
Samar : Ma sa , ye hamesha soti kyu reheti hai ? ( Why she sleeping all d time )
Ma sa : Kyu ki ye abhi bahut choti hai .
Samar : ( Asks immeadatly ) To ye kal tak ye badi ho jaayegi na ( is she will big tom na ?)
Ma sa : Beta aap ko itni jaldi kyu hai , vo abhi bahut choti hai , use bada hone time lag jaaye ga. ( Son why r u in hurry , she is too small nw. she tke so much time for see like u)
Samar : (makes weird faces)
Ma sa : Kya hua beta ? ( What happen my son )
Samar : Hamare saare dost apne bhai - ya behen ka saath khel sakte hai , bas hum hi nahi khel sakte .
Ma sa : ( Laugh @ his little son's problem ) Jab vo badi hogi na aap use apne saath khel ne ke liye leker jana . ( Whn she w"ll grow up u tke her along wit u)
She sees her little son goes to some deep thinkng.
Ma sa : Kya hua beta ?( Wht happene my son )
Samar : ( Suddenely Samar smiles himself ) Ma sa aaj se hum iss 'Chutki ' bulayenge. ( Ma frm tod w call her chutki)
Ma sa : Theek hai beta , par chutki kyu? (K , bt why Chutki)
Samar : ( Instantly replied) Kyon ki vo bahut choti hai na ( Bcoz she is too small) & goes to play . His mother smile herself.
"Madam ", "Madam" She suddenely comes out from her trance & sees Nurse , who requested her to give her side bcoz she wants to check Riya's BP. PLZ SCROLL DOWN TO CONTINUE...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
love it ur os

i like small samar...i wish i can see this front of

i asure u that riya really look like a small angel from sky for samar⭐️

i want to know how he played with his sis when he was small...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please continue dear😊...
So Ri and Rathore are Bro's and Sis...
Very good plot 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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After 1/2 hour Riya open her eyes slowly & see her tense big bro & Mother look @ her. She speak , " Bhai sa aap theek to hai na ." Rathod nodded his head in a yes manner. Riya is first scared whn she sees her mother , bt aftersomtime she felt happy. All ETF Team comes to meet her , all sense tht she is happy tod , she cn't say ths. Bt her pain gone whn she sees her closed ones wit her.
Riya recrupting vry fastly. Rathod comes 2 times in a day. Shree & Chotu comes in eveing . Even Arjun comes to meet her sometimes , she is so happy , whn she sees him. Nw doctor discharged Riya. Nw Riya & Rathod lives in a one house after 5 years. In one fine mrng their doorbell rings. Samar (Rathod) goes & open it. He sees his mother standing @ his dooestep. She comes in & order him " Chalo hamare saath" ( Come wit me) She marched in Riya's bedroom , she sees ETF Team also comes to meet Riya. Her mother find tht his daughter happily chatting wit her frnds , bt whn she sees her daughter , her daughter look frequently in one direction , & whn she sees thr , her eyes show some unknown feelings. Her mother follwed her gaze in tht direction & found one tall & handsome man standing thr , with his arms folded his chest. Her mother scared , bcoz she seen ths feelings 6 yrs ago in her eyes , tht madness , tht dreamy eyes & tht feelings changes thr lives. She gathers herself , & remind herself why she is thr. Nw ths d right time she thinks. She requested Team to wait outside room for a while & close d door.
Riya : Kya hua Ma sa? (Wht happene Ma)
Ma sa : Aap dono hamare saath wapis chale rahe hai.( You bth r coming wit me)
Riya & Samar : Kya????
Samar : Nahi hum nahi aaynege.( No , w r nt coming)
Ma sa : Aap ko aana hi hoga , Hum aur aap dono ki jaan ke saath aur kilhwad nahi kar sakte. ( You hva to come , I"ll nt take any risk for both of u)
Samar : Hum apni raksha khud kar sakte hai . ( W r able to protect ourselves.)
Ma sa : Vo hum kuch nahi jaante . (I dn't want know anything )
Riya just look @ thm worridly .
Samar : Ma sa hum hamara faisala nahi badlega . ( Ma , w dn't change our decision.)
Ma sa : To theek hai , to mai Maharani Gaytridevi ye hukum deti hue ki aap dono ko hamare saath wapis aana hoga. ( K, Thn I Princess Gaytridevi orders u bth tht u hva to come wit me)
Samar : To ye hukum hum nahi maante. (Thn i dn't follow your orders ) & with ths he stromed out of room. Riya & Gaytridevi luke @ his back. .
Gautridevi pleads to her daughter , tht she hva to come back wit her brother . Bcoz she needs both of them. Riya tell her tht she will try her best. Bt she knows her big bro. Gaytridevi thinks Bth Father & Son r same , hot tempered.
All ETF Team listened all this & chose to keep mum.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
what is ma sa checking and thinking about Arjun...hmmm?😕


Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago
Mimi2609 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
please continue...
What happened 6 years ago,that she's so scared????😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 5At ETF Ofc
Arjun comes to know tht Sikandar & Rana are in a Rajasthan & try to harm Army's big ppl. He immeadetly calls Rathod & tell him to come. Rathod comes ofc . He find Arjun seat in his cabin.
Rathod : Kya hua Raute? ( What happened) Badi yaad aa rahi thi meri .( Seems u mis me lot)
Arjun : ( Glares @ him) Rathod tumhe wapis jana hoga.(Rathod u hva to go back ur place)
Rathod : ( His facial expression changes , his facial muscles stiffened , he clinches his jaw) This is my personal matter Arjun , u dn't need to interfare in ths.
Arjun : Ys i knw. Bt whn matter comes to contry it is nt personal.
Rathod :( He look Arjun confusly & try to find out if he is mad ) What do u mean ?
Arjun inform him about Sikandar & Rana. Nw Rathod dn't hva a choice bt has to go back his roots. Whn Riya heard ths news , she is so happy , finally she going to see her ppl & her house agin after so many years. Shree & Chotu are vry happy finally thy go to outside of Mumbai & thr best frnd's house. Arjun as usual think abt case & Rathod try to remain calm.
In ofc everyone is happy like thy r gng on some holiday.
In Rathod's cabin he stands near window. He remebered everything , her eyes , her talking , her care , her faith on him & thn her screams tht always haunt him in his sleep , he always seen her face in his dreams , her blood , her lifeless body. Suddenenly he say , " Sry Di , mein apna promise nahi pura saka. " (Sry di i cn't complete my promise.) Suddenely he fells someone hold his collarbone & sqeezes it softly . Rathod instantly & found Arjun is thr. Arjun tell him . "Everything is fine" ." I know she ws gone nw. u cn't change your past " "Bt am always wit u Samar." Rathod eyes bcome moist. Arjun finally see his long last frnd & feel happy somewhere in his heart.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
who is this new Di, who is already dead???????😕
Please update soon😆

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