my 1st os... navya beautiful love story..:) ❤️

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hi guys.. iam gono write my first os.. as i dono much hindi ll update in english..ll try to update in hindi lso n middle.. plez bare wid my engish & hindi..😛😆
hope u all will like it & forgive my mistakes..
ok guys.. 1st will start wid the begning scene..we cant change the 1st epi bcz itz magical..
so ill try to reprise it in my way..
let me intoduce the characters :
NAVYA mishra: Cute,charming & talkative naughty girl from kanpur whose family have settled in mumbai when navya was young..she a funloving girl
Her family consist of Father (deepak mishra) mother(meetha mishra) elder sister (renuka sharma-married to gautham sharma & is pregnent now) yonger brother ( harsh mishra) & dadi (susheela)
now its our heros turn:
Anant bajbai: He charming, traditional but enjoy his life utmost & vry naughty & talkative too.. a funloving guy & he is dream boy of every girl..he is vey tradional yet vey morden ..his family consist of father( om bajbai)mother (sugandha bajbai) there elder son (mohon bajpai) this wife(rama bajpai) dadaji(shankar dayal bajpai) buvadadi(sarswati)chahi(savita bajpai) her husband (sanjay bajapi) &there daughter ( nimisha bajpai)
talking about their families..
navya's family is very traditionl but navya is mordern yet deep routed traditional girl.. she belive in faiy tales romance esp when her best friend ritika (ritz) fall in love with ranbir (anants bestfriend) she also screatly wishes to get a boyfriend who is so romantic.. funloving ,charming guy..
anants family is an orthodox family & greatly belive in customa & tradition.. they strictly follow traditions and lso want there childen to follow it ..even in this morden world of 21st century they are old loonly tunes family!😛😆 but yes our hero anant is tradional guy for the family but for the socity he is funloving & morden guys.. but he nevr thout of falling in love with a girl but ...!!!!!
LETS SEE HOW THESE PEOPLE FALL IN LOVE
disclimer:ive not read much os..so iam writing it for my own ..iam sorry if this type of story is written by someone else...
as i said 1st epi is so magical epi i cant change much scenes .. ill write it as such wid little changes i could..
NAVYA A BEAUTIFUL LOVE STORY
scene 1: navya starts writting an autobiography..
this is how the scene goes..
"my life is very beautiful..iam a simple girl with no expections of my future..but one incident of my life which made my life very special"
A flash back...
That day Navya starts for college... its a valentines day!... her friend ritika calls her & tell her to dressup in red & come to college.. but navya wears a simple white suite & get redy for college..as she comes to hall her father is reading newspaper ,mom brings him tea & dadi doing pooja.. his father on reading newspaper tells navya tat.. its valentains day & be careful..meanwhile her friend ritika comes to pick her up to college .. she waits in front gate for navya..as navya comes down & ritz take lift for navya.. both goes to college there they both meet appy college is decorated wid ballons & flowers(ritz & appy are navyas childhood friend) appy scolds navya for not wearing red colour dress..but navya replies its not a special day for her.. as they move into college ranbir (ritz boyfriend ) comes there with flower mean while a voicr "are u coming ranbir" ranbir says s iam coming u leave..so saying so that character turns all see him.. appy ask ranvir who is he... he replies he has joined newly & my friend *anant*
scene 2:
ranvir give a boquet & tell he "i love you" & gives a cup written "i love u" & tell her to come for movie ..ritz invites navya & appy to along wid her to movie.. ritz try to take her mob from her bag as her hand was full she give the cup & boquet to navya..
scene 3:
Three friends go near ranbirs car... the protogonist who r against valentines day attack the students in the college.. then one of the man capture navya & sees the bouquet & cup in her hand & says "parents send u colg for studies not for all this..today ill punish u such a way tat it ll be remembered by u & for all who do this nonsence.."
saying so he takes his hand for slapping navya..but one hand defend him from doing so.. tats our anant.. he pushes tat guy down & turns to navya & enquires her if she is alrite.. but she din speak a word just standing there & admairing him ... (now back to where navya writing..she writes..this is the movement my simple life has took a turn..& a beautiful days startes..'flash back agn..) he countinusly ask her if she is alrite..but she donst reply.. mean while tat guy whome anant pushed down getup & ask two people to hold him ..tat guy ask navya tat wether he gave tat bouquet & cup..she replies no.. so tat guy again raises his hand to slap anant sumone stops him from doing so by telling him something in his ears.. so tat guy enquires anant tat wether he is shankar dayal bajpais gandson .. & tell tem to leave him & tell anant tat he ll talk to his grandfather reg this.. meanwhile ritz & appy pull navya to getout of tat place..when anant turns to see navya she is moving wid her friends .. she turns & sees him & both sees each other passonately & finally navya leave tat place..
by this the 1st epi ends.. sorry ive not written any os b4 so sorry for any mistakes.. & yes this has become like 1st epi w/o 😆😛 .. sorry for tat.. do write if u want any changes..ill try to gve a diff story from 2nd epi.. sure.. k ..only if u guys like it..ill continue..
do press like button if u like it..😊
a(mmu19-preethi)
Edited by preethi_shamya - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice..update it...n update the page no:in the title too
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow beautiful start dear, but update ur post title whenever u update with chapter...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice.. waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice...waiting for the next...😉
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Nice waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb start👏👏..Just loved it!
Continue soon!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow the first episode.. it was certainly a magical episode, where all of us became crazy fans.. reading your os, I relived that moment.. please do continue.. variations from the original are alwayz welcome..

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