Virman (SS) - you belong to me ch 5B pg 50

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awesome loved it...thnx for d PM

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awesome start please pm me when you update next thanks

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Originally posted by: pinky.padda
awesome start please pm me when you update next thanks

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hye guyz me back again😊just wana say a big thank u 2 all of u 4 the amazing feedback really i love them ...ok guyz hope i am not 2 late so here is the next ch !!!
guyzz plessee this time also give me ur feedback .

Chapter - 2

Manvi was vey busy decoreting the place she was giving her best because this was for her bestfriend rohan for 3 hours she was continuesly working alone and rohan was getting ready in his house now manvi finish doing the decoretion she moved a little back and look at the decoretion ''perfect'' she said and smile.

suddenly a car stopped and rohan came out looking amazing he walk a little and stop as he say the decoretion he was amazed.

after a while he walk toward manvi and hugged her from behinde tighly ''chatterbox u r the best tu ek daam kamal hai '' he said witha smile manvi turn to him and said ''acha ji wese kya baat hai ek daam hero lag raha hai'' she said cheerfully he smile ''thank u my chatterbox aur is beautiful decoretion ke liye bi thank u'' ''ur always welcm mere rohu'' she smile he also smile ''acha abi saara kaam hogaya hai teri sonia bi thori deer mein ati hogi aur daddu bi mera wait kar rahe hoge toh mai chalti hoon'' she said ''ahh ok theek hai par driver tuje chore gaa tu aese raat ko akeli anhi jaye gii''he said ''areee rohu mai chali jau gi kyun fikar karta hai'' she said childishly ''kese na karu fikar tu kya chahti hai k mai tuje aese hi akela janee du haan no never chup chap gari [car] mein beth aur driver tuje chordega samji'' he said in a serios tone ''ok baba gussa kyun hota hai mai gari se hi jau gi ab kush'' she said innocently and rohan smile ''bhot khush'' she smile ''acha bye kal milte hai'' she was about to walk when rohan hold her hand a stop her manvi look at him ''kya hua rohu'' she asked he came closer to her and cupped her face in his hands and then kiss her forehead and manvi smile ''apna khayal rakhna samji'' he ordered ''aur tubi'' she said cutely rohan smile at her cuteness and then manvi left.

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viren virat and jeevika reach singapur and walk out of the airoport.

''bhai ap log jao muje apni meeting attend karni hai''he said

''theek hai virat hum abi hotel ja rahe hai thori der rest karke shopping pe jaye ge tu jab free hogaya toh muje call car dena'' he said

''ok''he said and left in his car and viren jeevika left in another car

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jeevika and viren were shopping and viren phone rang he picked it

''hello''

''bhai i am free now so kaha ho ap''he asked

''are virat hum shopping hi kar rahe hai tu aja yahi'' he said sweetly

''bhai is it important''he asked

''virat pleasee mere liye''he said lovingly

''fine kon se mall mein ho ap''

''dream mall mein tu yaha ponch [reach] kar muje call kar he said

''ok see u''

''hmm bye''and they disconected the call

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all three were in mall but only jeevika and viren were shopping virat was just geting bored but was helping viren in selecting his wedding funcions outfits and jeevika was missing manvi badly after a while all three went to cafe to eat something
viren was sitting infront of jeevika and virat was sitting beside viren

''virenji muje meri mannu ki bhot yaad arahi hai'' she said sadly

''jeevika muje bhi meri sali saheba ki bhot yaad a rahi hai tume pata hainaa agar woh yaha hoti toh kitana masti karti kitana khush hoti'' he said lovingly as he remeber her cute antics

virat was sitting quite and hearing their conversation he dont have any idea who is this mannu and why viren was calling her sali saheba because as much he knows jeevika dont have any sister

''haan virenji par usne promis kiya hai ke woh hi hamari shaadi ki sari decoretion karegii'' she said

''aree wah agar sali saheba decoret karegi toh it will be awesome she is just amazing in decoretions maine kahi baar dekha hai jab usne rahul ki date location decoret ki thi aur manvi painting mein bi kitni kamal ki hai really my sali saheba is best''he said and smile

''sai kaha apne manvi ki haatoon mein jadoo hai chahe woh painting ke liye ho ya decoretion k liye''she said

then viren realised that virat was just sitting quitely and he also dont know who is manvi

''aree virat tu itana chup kyun hai wese tuje pata hai manvi kon hai''he asked

''no''he said

''she is my sali saheba tu yahi soch raha hoga ke jeevika ki toh koi behen hi nahi hai toh phir manvi kese hainaa actually manvi jeevika ki bachpan ki dost hai woh jeevika se 6 saal choti hai par bhot pyaar karti hai jeevika se aur hum saab bi usse she is very cute and innocent he said sweetly

''ok''he said he dont care who is she nor he care about how cute and innocent she is because he just hate all the womens

''wese tu hamare saath kal chandighar chal raha hainaa'' he asked

''haan bhai''he said

''toh theek hai wese bi saab ne socha hai ke hamara roka chandighar mein karee aur baki saab delhi''

''hmm that good''he said

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they all were in chandighar now its been 3 hours that they reach and they all were in viren's house virat also because viren said him to live here till his roka and today evening manvi gona come to chandighar

all were sitting in the hall virat also and were talking but virat just keep quit

''are aaj meri sherni a rahi haina viren''asked inder chachu he aso love manvi very much and after what she did for himshe help him so much first he was a zero he was lawyer but just 4 name but manvi made him best now he just like viren a best lawyer

''are chachu haan a rahi hai manvi baas thori deer mein ponch ti hi hogi'' he said

''kya toh tum mese koi usse station lene kyun nahi gaya''dadaji asked angerly

''woh dadaji apko toh pata hai manvi kesi hai usne order diya hai k koi taklif karke station pe usse lene nahi ayegaa woh khud ayee gi''he said

everyone laugh except virat he never laugh laugh is faar away he never smile

''kitni pyari bachi hai aur kitni zinda dil hai zindagi mein itana kuch hona ke baad bi kese khsuhi se apni zindagi jiti hai''he said and smile remembring her talks and antics

''haan bauji inder bhaiya ki bi kitani madat ki thi usne'' she said smiling

''bilkul theek kaha bhabhi ajj manvi ki waja se hi toh mai itana kamayab lawyer hoon''he said

hearing this virat remeber about inder chachu he tries his best but he never was a god lawyer and now in these days he is the best

''chachu mai toh pucha bhool gaya yeh saab kese i mean ur best now how''he asked

and inder smile

''yeh saab manvi ne kiya uski waja se mai aaj best hoon usne muje honsala diya ke mai yeh kaar sakta hoon muje yakken dilaya ke asali mein jo daar hota hai woh sirf hamare dimak mein hota hai aue kuch nahi hame sirf apne aap pe yakeen karna chaiye apne aap ke bare mein sure hona chahiye manvi ki waja se mera daar khatam hogaya and now result is in front of u''he said and smile

now virat thought if he is right about womens true they r womens who are selfish like his mom and now he heard about a girl whoz name is manvi how she help inder chachu and how she live her life how selfless she is he dont now why but he want to meet that girl for once.

suddenly door bell rang and he came out of his thoughts.

Edited by lalmirch - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

both the updates wer fabulous...

amazing story line...n moreovr luvd the charactersketch

so mannu z already the jaan of virikaz n evn rohanz family...

rohan seems to b quite an intersting character...luvd his protective n caring attitude towards mannu...😳

well virmanz first encounter wz disastrous...cant wait to c his reaction aftr seeing mannu😆

plzzz cont soon n dont forget to pm me wen ya update!!!😊

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Jannat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Amazing update dear

loved it 👏

rohan is so caring for manvi

now virat is curious to meet with that girls 😊

thanx 4 the pm

update soon

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Radhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

amazing update!!

continue soon and thanks for the pm!

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Anu101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Thank you for the pm

Eagerly waiting for their meeting!!! Rohan I know he is really kind and caring but I dunno...

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Sanam

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Thanks for the PM :) i love ur story concept ... so far everything looks so good ... rohan is so nice and caring and i hope he remains the same ... cant wait for the story to unfold further ... please continue soon ...