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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: yogini64

Khushi bahot tadpati hai . . . . . . Agle footloose tak to vaise hi koi secret nhi khulne degi . . . . Haina khushi?


Madam ji iska update mil raha hai..Sajda aur IJD tho monty once ho chuke hai ..uska kya?😳
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Finally page 49..Guys slow down..Vaise bhi kaun hai ab...Sab tho gaye ...Sirf mai vaishu aur yogs..

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Hope In get my first comment...

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Originally posted by: asmaju


kjIisne yaad dilaya...
Acha maaf kiya tujhe...
Agar amore accidentel aise hi kiya nah tho dek meri haal😡



chalo sun ke accha laga aapko pasand aaya amour accidentelle...

it is gonna be a simple stry...

a relationship stry...

bolo toh stry bata dungi...

par i won't end it that way...

have already thot abt it...

aspiring to make it a work of multiple threads... 😳

plus prince-princess wala bhi strt karungi... have changed the plot thoda sa... lekin premise vahi rhega
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Posted: 12 years ago
IJD ke liye to tapasya karni padti hai 😆

aur aalsi log likes hi ni karte
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plus i want to improve my writing thru it...

i wanna make it interesting thru the write up di...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Vaisgu gayab!!!!!!!!!!



K vaishu!!!!!!!!!!!!
GUys stop until she posts...

Edited by asmaju - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Note: Pmz for this update on will be sent through Guzarish. id 😃

G u z a r i s h .


Color key:

Kriya

Shivam

Smriti

Swayam

Rey

Sharon

Vishakha

Neha

Rinni

Simmi

Bharat

(rest will be added as they make their entry + will add them all on first page with CS and include at top of each update till the time you automatically remember that this color belongs to this person 😛)

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Next: Part 7 - Page 63

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Part 6

*Next update on, I will be taking the color key away. Hope you have the colors memorized by now..*

"What ' what are you doing here? Don't you have a victory to celebrate?" Sharon asked; the harshness back in her voice. "You got what you wanted. The attention."

Swayam crossed his hands across his chest as he rested his back on the wall. "Is that what you think? Is that all that you figured out about me till now? Do you really think I care about attention? Do you think showing you down is going to make me feel happy?"

Sharon really wondered about that and she knew the answer. She knew he loved her and she also knew that she was being stupid for asking such questions to him. "How would I know?" she replied back. And there it was. The Sharon he was well aware of. Thinking something and saying something totally different.

He took a step towards her. "Why are you so afraid of saying your thoughts? Why do you keep your feelings to yourself all the time?" He turned to leave but then stopped having something else to say. "Don't let what other's think come in your way. You're still the same dancing diva Sharon. Don't lose your confidence because of people like Shivam. They don't deserve the attention and nor are they that important. Don't let what happened rule over your passion."

And that was all he said. He left leaving her speechless again. Again, he knew just what her problem was without her telling it. She wondered how he did that but then figured out the answer. Because it was him. He probably knew her better than she knew herself!

But what he said left an impression on her heart. She was a lot braver than the time she entered the college. And there she was. The made up her mind. They had done nothing wrong and it was Shivam who had stolen their routine. She and her team had nothing to feel embarrassed of and they didn't have to hide. It was Shivam who would have to hide then.

She walked out of the washroom and gave a damn on what others around her thought. She went and found Rinni, Simmi, Nilesh and Vicky in the rehearsal room, sitting there sulking.

"What's wrong guys?" she asked coming in.

They looked at her like she was crazy. She was happy?!! Rinni asked, "Sharon, are you feeling well?"

"Yea, you're fine right? You're smiling? Maybe it affected you too much. We just lost the Foot Loose finals!" Simmi continued.

Sharon went in between them and walked along with them. "Guys, why are we sad? Have we done anything to be ashamed of? No. It's Shivam and his bloody team that are wrong. We shouldn't let them overpower us. We'll fight this like a team and make them pay. Why let such low people affect us, right?"

She continued on to explaining her changed view from what Swayam had told her. Swayam was a silent spectator of this. He was about to enter the rehearsal room when he heard Sharon talking. Seeing that Sharon had understood and the team was in right path as well, he left without interrupting to find Rey and his team.

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On his way to finding Rey, Swayam came across his team who were overjoyed on getting in the finals. "Guys, where's Kriya?" Swayam asked suddenly realizing that in the rush, he hadn't noticed. "Now that I think about it, she wasn't there was results were announced and even today, I haven't seen her."

Neha replied, "She was sick yesterday. So maybe she took the day off."

"Did anyone let her know the results?" he continued asking. They looked at each other and all shook their heads except Vishakha. Swayam was about to text her when Vishakha stopped him. "Don't disturb her. She'll know when she comes tomorrow. Just let her rest."

"She's right." Bharat said. Swayam agreed and he was about to leave to find Rey when a random person came to tell them that RDX had called them in his office. Thus, they left for his office instead.

In rehearsal room, Dazzlers were informed of the same and they found Rey on the way. He nodded and walked along with them when Sharon told him.

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It was lunch time and Smriti called Kriya again. "Kriya, come have your lunch." Kriya switched off her music player and walked over to the table and sat there quietly. The lunch again passed by in silence just like breakfast. It pained Smriti to see her like this. She might have been strict to Kriya and brought her back here. But she was her daughter after all. She only wanted her to be happy.

While cleaning up, Smriti spoke up, "Kriya, how long will this go on? We have moved back and that decision is not going to change. You have to forget him and move on. He's a boy. Just like all boys, he'll move on and won't even remember you in few days. Don't hurt yourself for guys like them."

The only thing Kriya said before leaving was, "He's not dad."

Those were just three words. But they pricked Smriti's heart really bad. She had never expected Kriya to say that to her. Could she blame her though? Kriya wasn't seeing that Smriti understood her and she blamed her for having to go through all this. If only Smriti could explain to her for doing this to her. She was simply trying to save her from the pain she had once gone through.

Once inside, she wondered if Rey would have received the letter by then! She was being impatient waiting for his reply.

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**Flash-Back**

Kriya stood up the post the mail. The next morning, Shivam made his presence in the college. He was fully determined on having his revenge. He would never forget what Sharon did to him. The insult he went through and the slap. On his way, he crashed into the peon, who was carrying the letters to RDX's office.

Shivam bent down to help, as he had decided to pretend as if he's changed. "I'm so sorry!" he said flakily. In the process of helping the peon, he saw a letter marked to Rey and Swayam from Kriya. He couldn't help the temptation and amidst all the other letters, he sneakily stole those two letters away.

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Precap: What did Shivam do to the letter? 😆


Me sadd... Likes and comments going down again... regular updating is becoming a problem kya?

Comment and like pretty please!

Next update will be tomorrow to make up for being inactive lately. 😃
-Khushi.

New readers: Add Guzarish. as your buddy to get pmz when I update.


Edited by ..first.rain.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me loved it..
Yaay first one to comment..
Finally I did it...
Me dancing klike manic..
K now to update..
I just loved it..
Yup beyondwords..
I would have hugged tv if something similar happens..but now my computer gt it..
Mumma thinks me gone insane..
Ab kya karu khushi samali hi nahi jati..

Thank god Kria did nt get a cal..
RDX called them..
to inform Kria's departure kya??
Ad dat guy Shivam...hun agar usne letter ka kuch kiya nah tho i'm sorry before mai use daatungi woh bhi bad words se...
I seriously cant tolerate this guy even a bit...


Gret update..
Yup S i rem colour code...
And Khushi an Update 2morrow ...w0w...

Edited by asmaju - 12 years ago
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I like the way swayam is motivating her . . . . . . He did dat in show too but only to take revenge 4m shivam 😳
but here he's actually taking away her fears,,,, not caring abt her shouts 👏
coz jab tak dukhi rahegi . . . . Zyada chilayegi 🤣
& it worked too 👍🏼
she made her way to her team wid full confidence . . . . . . . . Coz there's nothing to be ashamed of 😈
I thought they will blame her . . . . . . But ppl here do have brains unlike cv's 😆
& majnu never misses his laila's moments 😃
ohh ya . . . . . Kriya ka to usse abhi nhi pata . . . . . 😔
where's rey btw?
smriti is right on her part . . . . How can she see her daughter gloomy gloomy 🤔
her words were right accordng to her thoughts . . . . But kriya knw how much he love her 🤗
hope her reply gives her mom food 4 thought 😊
damn! . . . .this shivam 😡
arre sharon se badla lena hai na . . . . . Kriya se kyun le raha hai
keede pade is gitke ko 😵 🤣
Edited by yogini64 - 12 years ago

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