#2 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 4-11 - Page 33

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okay i know i am not following the stry per say...

NS u know the reason...

lekin browsing thru upar se (literally upar se)

making an avayein guess...

so have a feeling that shivam will keep the letter with him... will never destroy it lekin keep it with him...
when he is in the college and sees everything going wrong (i mean woh bhi insaan hai usse bhi sahi galat samjh aata hai) wud then remember abt the letter as he had forgotten abt it and then give it to rey i believe somehow...

just an avayein guess hai...

it was awesome
par yaar kyu who letter shivam ne liya
i want kriyaansh loved story
not a sad story
plz don do this let the letter get to rey
plz plz plz

Haila..Khushi ne UPDATE Kia :D :P

kal padke Unres karungi..aBi padna hai..

gn ! ;)

Awesome awesome part..
Loved it
swaron part was nice...
Swayam is a gem... Cute boy
smriti understands kriya's feeling, but she is a mom...
So she might wants to protect her daughter..
But from whom..??
The person who loves her daughter madly.. Hope she understands that soon
want kriyaansh back
aisa kuch serial me bhi hota...
Tom update.. Wow
Eagerly waiting for it
thnx for pm

Amazin update!!!
Here sharon is actually tryin to understand swayam..great :)
N even kriya is showin her anger.. She is right yr!!!
Now cumin to d point...
and amidst all the other letters, shivam sneakily stole those two letters away...

U really wont believe bt honestly i hav always wondered about d letter thing in d same way..lik may b shivam has changd it..
May b shivam was d reason behind some letter has not reachd rey.. N now u wrote it.. While readin d last section i was lik...K ,now dis is wht I actually wanted to happen... Co incidence...!!( I hav always thot tht if shivam wud ever hav tht bit of descency in him..he wid tell all d truth by himself tht how he made situations worst fr kriya n how he changed d letter n stuff.. Mtlb dis was my thot )
I now hav a bit of an idea about how it wud continue...!!
N dal bloody cheap shivam.. Arrghh.. Wht d heck is his problem..
Gosh,m feelin lik killin him!!!
looser... Hufff..!

Its gona b fun now readin ur d3...
Waitin fr d nxt part n tnx fr d pm :)

chota tha but acha tha

Noo!! Shivam took the letters. :( can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update !

Omg. . . . . .
Wat jst happnd. . . .
Urgghh. . .
I jst hate tat shivam. . .
Ohhh no. . . .
Now wat vl happen,
i realy dnt knw. . .
Egarly waitng 4 the nxt update. . .
Update soon. . . .

Originally posted by: asmaju

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Me loved it..

Yaay first one to comment..

Finally I did it...

Me dancing klike manic..

K now to update..

I just loved it..

Yup beyondwords..

I would have hugged tv if something similar happens..but now my computer gt it..

Mumma thinks me gone insane..

Ab kya karu khushi samali hi nahi jati..

Thank god Kria did nt get a cal..

RDX called them..

to inform Kria's departure kya??

Ad dat guy Shivam...hun agar usne letter ka kuch kiya nah tho i'm sorry before mai use daatungi woh bhi bad words se...

I seriously cant tolerate this guy even a bit...

Gret update..

Yup S i rem colour code...

And Khushi an Update 2morrow ...w0w...