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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yogini64

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unres
I like the way swayam is motivating her . . . . . . He did dat in show too but only to take revenge 4m shivam 😳 difference 😃
but here he's actually taking away her fears,,,, not caring abt her shouts 👏
coz jab tak dukhi rahegi . . . . Zyada chilayegi 🤣 lol sahi hai!
& it worked too 👍🏼
she made her way to her team wid full confidence . . . . . . . . Coz there's nothing to be ashamed of 😈 vohi toh.. un logo ne thori na kuch galat kiya hai.
I thought they will blame her . . . . . . But ppl here do have brains unlike cv's 😆 lol all thanks to me 🤣
& majnu never misses his laila's moments 😃
ohh ya . . . . . Kriya ka to usse abhi nhi pata . . . . . 😔
where's rey btw? you'll see next...
smriti is right on her part . . . . How can she see her daughter gloomy gloomy 🤔
her words were right accordng to her thoughts . . . . But kriya knw how much he love her 🤗 true.. smriti is just doing what she thinks is right..
hope her reply gives her mom food 4 thought 😊
damn! . . . .this shivam 😡
arre sharon se badla lena hai na . . . . . Kriya se kyun le raha hai hehehe kriya se nai, kisi aur se revenge le raha hai 😉
keede pade is gitke ko 😵 🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: namratajadhav

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unresd..!!
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Thank You KHushi fr updating n m glad dat my 2000th post is on ur thread...!! the first writers work i read was u..!!😊 😳aww i feel so special. thank you so very much and congratulations to you!!

CUming to d update..!!
did i seriously read it ryt?🥱
i mean yaha bhi shivam..!!😕haha i did warn before that shivam and taani are a part of it...
oo god here i felt k kriya ne rey ko sab bata diya hoga bt aagaya chee-vam.. i so hate him yaar..!!we all do

u surely should update soon coz i cnt w8 fr d next part plzz..!!😲 yes.. in afternoon, I will 😃
beautifully written..!!😊thank you so much!
swaron part bhi mast tha..!!😃yay! glad to know 😃

update soon..!!!😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anniemathias

it was awesome
par yaar kyu who letter shivam ne liya
i want kriyaansh loved story
not a sad story
plz don do this let the letter get to rey
plz plz plz


Thank you so much annie!
hehe kuch toh masaledar hona chahiye na.. varna sab gussa kis pe nikaloge? 😛
love story toh hai hi.. but all stories have + and - 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kittu_arsha

Haila..Khushi ne UPDATE Kia :D :P

kal padke Unres karungi..aBi padna hai..

gn ! ;)


LOL itna shocking kyu? I did say I'll update 😳

Kay. Will be waiting!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -SaruuKaSh-

Loved it! Amazing update!


Thank you so much Sara!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Amazin update!!! Thank you!
Here sharon is actually tryin to understand swayam..great :) She is! In the show, they've just not shown anything on her feelings! Which angers me...
N even kriya is showin her anger.. She is right yr!!! True that... she has a right to be upset with Smriti.
Now cumin to d point...
and amidst all the other letters, shivam sneakily stole those two letters away...

U really wont believe bt honestly i hav always wondered about d letter thing in d same way..lik may b shivam has changd it.. really? Wow! That's a major coincidence!!
May b shivam was d reason behind some letter has not reachd rey.. N now u wrote it.. While readin d last section i was lik...K ,now dis is wht I actually wanted to happen... Co incidence...!!( I hav always thot tht if shivam wud ever hav tht bit of descency in him..he wid tell all d truth by himself tht how he made situations worst fr kriya n how he changed d letter n stuff.. Mtlb dis was my thot ) nope.. he has no decency.. nothing can be expected from him.. he only means harm... but your guess is really close to what Im going to be adding in the future parts...
I now hav a bit of an idea about how it wud continue...!!
N dal bloody cheap shivam.. Arrghh.. Wht d heck is his problem..
Gosh,m feelin lik killin him!!!
looser... Hufff..! hehe go right ahead!

Its gona b fun now readin ur d3... Thank you 😳
Waitin fr d nxt part n tnx fr d pm :) No prob and this afternoon 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: namylovkriyansh

chota tha but acha tha

update soon
i wana knw how will he get to knw
bcoz shivam will never let the leter reach swayam n rey
grrr


Thank you 😳 Yes.. all here would be chota sa 😆
you will know.. the letter will reach them both.. but you just need to see 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha

getting interesting update soon


Thank you kriti!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Noo!! Shivam took the letters. :( can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update !


He did... More will be tomorrow 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

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