The Unnatural: Rise of the Army Against the Si-ah - Page 19

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-Sanj- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome and sweet update..loved it...waiting for next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous!

So Abhinav aint the bad guy as i thought.LOL i think there is actually an academy of the unnatural there at some weird extraterrestrial level of the world :D Enjoyed th etour into the rather Murky and disturbing past of both Barun and Abhinav :)

Mohit seems like an angel! <3 Pure and calm. Glad that he will support Abhinav with training Barun.I think Itl take some time for Barun to truly adjust with Abhinav cause in a way Abhinav was witness to one of the most painful and terrible moments of his life.

Barun liked a Shilpa? Umm..did abhinav somehow know that they would meet up with an accident..or better than Shilpa wasnt destined to have a long life? Will shilpa return? Are they only born like you said or is there a way that they can be changed that Abhinav and the others have no idea of? When will Drashti make an appearance?

This chapter was supposed to give answers but now i have more questions! :D

P.s sorry if i am not a good reviewer this time.am in a hurry thats y*Holds ear*

Love ya Zee!
Gayu


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Posted: 12 years ago
Haha so Mohit is here! 😃
It is seriously so funny as well as amazing to read the guys and girls of different shows etc being together!
Really love your story
Keep up the good work! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally mohit!!!!!!!!11 loved the update a lot!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I absolutely loved this chapter! It is the best one so far!
This update had so much to say, so much to reveal.
So, it was Abhinav at the window. Honestly, I had guessed that. But I thought I was thinking silly. Bahahahahaha...
This chapter revealed so much about Abhinav and Barun. It is going to be much easier to understand the story now.
And Mohit's here! YAY!
Invisible, eh? Super interesting!
Mohit seems so sweet and friendly.
I am gonna say this again. I love Abhinav in this. *sigh* He is so mature, so caring with a tinge of attitude. I am so in love with this guy. He is a gem.*crazy fan-girl mode activated*
Please please please update soon! Thanks for the PM.
Love ya!

Manal <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eeep ! 16 likes, Thank You! 🤗

@Varshini- Thanks dear ! :)

@Juhi- Thank you, am glad you are reading :)

@aashizin- Thank You, i did expect Mohit's appearance to stir up matters, you will see further in the story :)

@Priyanka- Thanks, am glad you like his powers, more in the future updates :D

@raspberrytorte- Thank You :)

@arhifrvr- Nailed it!haven't you? ⭐️ Here's an answer- Barun's parents were what Abhinav is :D Glad u liked Mohit, and yes you caught the gist, this is just the beginning, there's more to unravel :) And i promise i won't keep you hanging, everything will be revealed in due time, Thank You! Keep Reading :)

@SilverFairy- Thanks a lot :D

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan- Thanks for reading :) Will update tomorrow morning..

@Hot_Indo_Chilly- It does yes, but i revealed loads in the previous chapter, if you have noticed the specific use of I - we - you - us in the chapter, there's a lot going on, i had to particularly edit and redo the chapter, there were quite a few errors by me 😳

@mishti- Thanks for reading, i am glad it manages to hold your interest int he long run :)

@Babydoll- Thanks :)

@SanjArShi-ASR - Thanks a bunch :)

@Gayu- Thanks ! :) Abhinav definitely isn't the bad guy. An academy? Hmmm not really. It was Barun's past yes, for Abhinav too but then you will find he has many such stories to tell. It's his job. Abhinav and Barun's history is a better term i suppose. Glad you liked Mohit, you understand characters very well :)
Yes, Barun liked Shilpa- a friend of his, imagine Shilpa Anand if you like. She doesn't have any important role to the plot line that's why i just gave her a name. Abhinav can sense emotions, he can't predict the future, so no he didn't know.
Are they only born like you said or is there a way that they can be changed that Abhinav and the others have no idea of? When will Drashti make an appearance?

Barun was born this way, but what about his parents and Abhinav? I can't answer the second half of your question which means it is an excellent question! 👏Drashti will not be making an appearance in the first series, but she will be mentioned time and again...
Abhinav's response does give a hint or two about 'the other side' and yes it does raise many questions in return, i give one answer and many questions rise in return, that's the basic flow initially. Not a good reviewer? *shakes head* Who said that? Thanks for your time ! Keep Reading :) 🤗

@ShiningStar- Yes Multifandomn's are fun for this very reason i think...I personally liked the idea when it came to me. I picked actors whom i could imagine together under the same roof, Like i wanted to throw in Rithwik too in the picture, but he just didn't fit in anywhere, so i couldn't give him place..Thanks for your kind review, means a lot to me <3

@monaya_sajan- Thank You! Yes i did intend Mohit to gain an instant likeness in the reader's hearts :)

@Manal- The Best? :O Thank Youu ! 🤗 Yes it revealed lots, how many did you spot? 😆 😳 It was Abhinav by the window, and yes i hoped to make clear the equation b/w Abhinav and Barun. I meant Mohit to be likable instantly 😳
Oh my Goodness! :DD I Love Abhinav too! tee hee I mean i Love writing him :D <3
Next update tomorrow morning- that's a promise 😳 Thanks for the lovely review, means a lot! Keep Reading :)
Edited by TheWandmaker - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res <3 Will edit as soon as possible :)

-Edited- *couldn't keep away for long you see*

This chapter was kind of a boys day out one😆 But trust me i enjoyed it.

I especially loved the Nhok-Jhok's between Abhinav and Barun.Yes i call it Nhok-Jhok because as you have said Barun would readily give up his life for Abhinav if it meant protecting him.I just loved that part of their relationship that you pointed out.

I have always wished that they would get along because as irritated and oh well- unnatural :D that they are they both seem very lonley.Abhinav seems more used to it and handles the lonliness sophistically but Barun doesnt take it too well.

Mohit is most def an Angel here, making peace his forte.I think his prodding will make them think a bit more leading to an actually talk between the two other than the usual disgruntled snarls:D But again i think Barun is just upset because Abhinav is part of the past where he was happy and fine and now Abhinav is all that remains of that past.Sad really..

Madhura has a ting for abhinav? :D Or does she just want to observe this strange guy more for clues regarding certain suspicions?Yes the dinner ought to be very very interesting*Evil Smile inserted*

The Irani's are most def linked to these men on a mission.Yes men becuz Barun is probably the Key to a lot of events and secrets :)

Great chapter dearo :)

Gaya3
Edited by -happilyunknown - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one ... =)
though barun doesn't look too interested in meeting the iranis right... =/
lol... And love abhinavs mind reading... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm

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