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Posted: 12 years ago
Armaanz plan to unite maan n geet...n nw rain...dnt tel me ki geet the lucky charm 4 ram mhez gonna marry her...i lykd ths story contiue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..
liked maan's care n concern for geet..
hmm waiting for their plan to unite maneet..
continue soon
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Thanks a lot for the likes and comments…… love ya….

Part-6



She gave her address to driver and car keys…… maan stepped out and took the driver seat while geet sat on the passenger seat beside him……smiled nervously…….


Maan wore his glasses again and ignited the car….. he gave his killer smile which is merely seen on his face,….. their eyes locked for a moment but she felt awkward with his intense gaze, she looked outside the window seeing the rain….. it's been 5 mins, none spoke….. she felt nothing but he felt like it's been ages he doesn't hear her sweet melodious voice,, he felt empty not hearing her voice….. it's not like he knew her from ages, he merely know about her, only her name and her profession……


nothing else…. But he felt like he knew her by his heart which starts beating for her, he doesn't why he felt like giving her a lift,,, he doesn't know why he insist her…. He knows one thing and that is he did what his heart said to him…… nothing more……


Her duppata flew a little from it's place and fell on gear…… she was abut to pull it from gear but suddenly maan held gear, she became nervous suddenly, he felt her dupatta under his hand, he glanced at the dupatta then her and pass a smile again to her…. She tried again to pull dupatta again but maan didn't let go, he was enjoying her dupatta in his hand, feeling like having her in his arm, feeling like crushing her in his warm hug, it has the touch of her…..


she was struggling with the dupatta but he was not letting go of it….. he was enjoying her presence in his car a lot…… he never felt so contended in drive never before like he is feeling today……


Both looked at each other by chance and both passed a smile to each other…… her smile meant a lot him, he doesn't know why? But he likes her smile….. it looks funny that maan singh khurana showing emotions for a mere girl whom he doesn't know much….. the drive was calm, no one spoke from them….. not a single word…. But again a problem came…. His car stops in mid….


Geet-what happen? She asked to him…… he tried to start the car again….

Maan- I don't know….. start nahi ho rahi hai….. I have to check engine…..

Geet-but outside is raining…..

Maan-I know but I have to check it….

Geet-okay, then I'll accompany you….

Maan-wait…. You will drench in rain….

Geet-don't worry…. I have an extra umbrella in my bag….

Maan-ok…. Both stepped outside from the car…. Before geet have him inside the umbrella along with herself, he was already drenched in rain but geet held umbrella over him when he was opening the bonnet….. while he was checking the engine, she was looking at him and observing his acts he did when he gave her a lift…… after a while…


Maan-let me start the car,, she nodded….. he get inside the car while she stood outside….. he tried but it was not going to be start….. damn….. he put a frustrated hand in the steering and then pushed his hairs behind with his long fingers…… he came outside the car…. It's rare that brand new BMW stopped working suddenly but may be fate has it's own way……


it was their destiny or coincidence , who knows except god…. god himself wanted them to meet again and spend some quality with each other….. well, maan doesn't believe in God but sometimes, something happened that convince people to believe in God….


Maan-it is not gonna start…. Seems today we have to feel the rain….. she smiles…. He shocked with the set of his words…. What did I said? He asked to himself….. feel the rain…. He hates rain but today he said he will feel rain…. Well he was already drenched in rain…..

Geet-it's ok…. Let's walk…. mera dance school yaha se 10 mins walk par hai….. he nodded….. he was about to held the umbrella just then their fingers touched with each other….. he felt current ran down in his body in this rain with her mere touch while she felt nothing…… he held the umbrella after coming out of his dream and she left the umbrella…. Both walk side by side under one umbrella. Their arms are rubbing with each other sometimes but both said nothing….. today he felt so happy after spending lots of time with her….


It was their 2nd meeting but he felt like he knew her from years…… after a while they reached to her dance school where she invite him inside….. both was drenched fully in rain….. actually first time, maan was not irritated with rain…. He felt like , if he will with geet then it should rain….. she went in her personal room along with him and gave him a towel for drying……


Maan-thanks…..


Geet-why thanks…. You helped me, so I should say thanks to you, not you….. he smiled…. She left him there…… she went in kid section where all kids learnt dance from her….. there is one section more which is for adults….

Geet- hello all…..

Kids- hello didi…… maan came outside hearing kid's voice….

Geet-ready all….. one of from kids asked…..

Kid- didi, you are drenched in rain…. So can we dance outside today in garden??

Geet-no,,,,, sochna bhi mat….

Maan-why are you scolding them?? She looked at them, then suddenly all kids starts screaming and ra outside the school where she & maan left there, geet was dumbstuck and maan was smiling seeing her reaction…….

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom...


All kids start singing and dancing in rain, moving their waist in a round motion and their arms were moving along with the rhythm of their waist…… she cave outside and saw all kids are dancing and fully drenched in rain…. Maan was all the while smiling…. It's very rare to see his smile but he has a killing smile….. kids were doing some funny acts while maan was totally lost in geet, , ,


Ghode jaisi chaal haathi jaisi dum

O saawan raja kahaan se aaye tum

Ghode jaisi chaal haathi jaisi dum

O saawan raja kahaan se aaye tum


They all looked at the sky complaining but smiling and having fun…. Moving like animlas and making fun of each other…….


Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom


She stood there watching them where maan was enjoying first time seeing kids so happy and dancing like this….. he used to do charity in orphan age home and sometimes visit there too but today it's a new feeing for him……. kids ran and pulled maan and asked him to dance with them….. she laughed at maan's reaction, he was black suddenly when kids were pulling him…. he was struggling but no one was listening him…… he looked at her face, her smile , her chirpiness, a kid inside her, he can see…….


He starts dancing along with the kids looking at her and singing for her where all kids accompanied him….. she felt laughing more after seeing him dancing…… who will say this is maan singh khurana who is dancing today…..


Koi ladki hai jab vo hansti hai

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom

Koi ladki hai jab vo hansti hai

Baarish hoti hai chhanar chhanar chhumchhum

Maan signaled to kids for pulling geet here and they nodded…… they all ran and pulled geet there….. she was all ready…. She danced looking at him, dancing around him…. he felt so happy seeing her dance….. he doesn't know what is this feeling? It' new for him but he is feeling happy after having this new feeling for her…… no one say that maan singh khurana can be playful, infact he could't imagine himself that he can do something like this, drenching in rain and that too with lots of kids and a pure beauty with him who made him lost in her beauty….


Koi ladka hai jab vo gaata hai

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom

Arre koi ladka hai jab vo gaata hai

Saawan aata hai ghumar ghumar ghumghoom

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom

Ho ho ho ho

Hey hey hey hey


She forget where she is….. she held his hand and pulled him again in mid of the ground and danced along with him…. kids were circling them…..


Baadal jhuke jhuke se hain

Raste ruke ruke se hain

Kya teri marzi hai megha


She was going ahead but a kid stop her by the edge of her duppata, maan was watching her every reaction……


Par hum ko jaane na dega

Aage hai barsaat peechhe hai toofan


All kids circled her, some are pulling her ahead where some are pulling her backward where maan accompanied them by pulling kids ahead…… one kid ran and jumped on maan's back where he gave that kid piggy ride…. Geet's mouth was wide open because she heard from ridzy that her brother doesn't like kids but ridzy likes kids so much….. once or twice she came here in her dance school and spent some time with her and kids & learn some dance steps…..


Mausam beimaan kahaan chale humtum

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom


He looked at her…..


Koi ladki hai jab vo hansti hai

Baarish hoti hai chhanar chhanar chhumchhum


She looked at him…… their eyes met….


Koi ladka hai jab vo gaata hai

Saawan aata hai ghumar ghumar ghumghoom

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom


Both broke out their eye-lock and looked here & there……. Kids separate them……


Ho ho ho ho

Hey hey hey hey


She left stood there like a statue where he starts singing and dancing along with kids…..


Ambar jhuka jhuka sa hai

Sab kuchh ruka ruka sa hai

Chhaya samaa kitna pyaara

Saawan ka samjho ishaara


He went near her and shook her by her arm where she came out from his dark brown eyes…..


Aise mausam mein tum bhi kuchh kaho

Tum bhi kuchh karo khadi ho kyon gumsum

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom


She pushed him and pulled kids….. all kids showed thumb to him and danced…….


Ghode jaisi chaal haathi jaisi dum

O saawan raja kahaan se aaye tum

Ghode jaisi chaal haathi jaisi dum

O saawan raja kahaan se aaye tum

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom


He pulled all boys with his side and sang for girls


Koi ladki hai jab vo hansti hai

Baarish hoti hai chhanar chhanar chhumchhum


Where she left there with all girls and sang for the boys….


Koi ladka hai jab vo gaata hai

Saawan aata hai ghumar ghumar ghumghoom

Chakdhoom dhoom chakdhoom dhoom-4


They mingled with each other and danced with each other and maan with geet…… it was rare to see maan singh khurana like this…. Thanks to god that media didn't came to know about this otherwise it will be the headline of tomorrow's newspaper that the great msk dancing with kids & a girl in rain……

Ho ho ho ho

Hey hey hey hey

Ho ho ho ho

la la la...

precap

i don't know...

hey all,, the next writer has been announced…..check the thread pls...

mg ff writer's interview


so all of you, if you want to ask any question then pls send me or nandy or you can directly ask under this post which is in fb group….. only you have to add yourself in group….. link is below….. for quick notifications- joined the group in fb….

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wow!that was awesum..
maan and dance...
geet ne msk ko badal di..
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Posted: 12 years ago
simply
beautiful
maan dancing with kids was gkood
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow Awesome update
maan dancing in rain kay kia geet .
loved it

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