U R My Life...A new OS, updated, page 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mind blowing...😊😊😊 the part where anandi slap him ...is what i want to do... . 😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys thanx for the comments and the likes as well as the suggestions. Herez presenting to u the second part.
Shiv holds Anandi's hands and walks to the car leaving the family behind. Shiv opens the door for Anandi and she gets in and Shiv takes the driver's seat and drives slowly. After about five minutes of drive, he parks the car at a side and looks at Anandi who is just staring outside the window lost in deep thoughts. Shiv is sad looking at her condition like this and curses himself for not bringing her smile on her face. He then asks Anandi where she wants to go, but she does not respond. Upon not hearing anything from her, he touches her shoulder and shakes her to bring her back to reality. Anandi turns and stares at him. Shiv asks her where she wants to go. Anandi replies anywhere where there is nobody. She wants to be alone for sometime, free from this noise and the rush. Shiv agrees and starts driving ahead. After driving for about an hour or so, which felt like a lifetime with no speaking from either of them, they reached a cliff which is full of greenery and a pond nearby.
Shiv gets down and opens the door of the car for her. Anandi gets down and walks straight without even looking at the place or at Shiv. Shiv realizes that she really need some time to be all alone and does not follow her, but watches her from a distance. After walking for about 15 minutes, she stops and turns to her side, but she found that she was all alone and Shiv was not with her. She then turned back to see that Shiv was still standing by the car quite far from her with his hands folded on his chest and is watching her from far. She realizes that she is alone and she hated being alone and she immediately runs towards Shiv and reaches him and hugs him tightly and starts crying loudly and says that aap mujhe akele kabhi mat chodiye. agar mein aapse kahoon ki mujhe akele rehna hai tabh bhi mat chodiye, mein humseha aapke aur sirf aapke saat hee rehna chahti hoon. Jab mere saath nahi hothe ho toh mujhe dar lagta hai, dar lagtha hain ki aap mujhe humesha humesha ke liye chodkar chale jaayenge. Aap plz humesha mere saath rahiyegaaa.
Shiv is shocked at this gesture of hers and is bewildered as to whether he should respond to the hug or not, and after a mind battling he responds to the hug and hugs her tightly giving her all the support and the strength that she needed emotionally at this particular time. After being in an embrace for quite sometime Shiv broke the hug and took Anandi's face in his hands and wiped her tears. He then put one of his hands on her shoulder and with the other hand he held her hand and walked to the pond and sat on the rocks near to it. Anandi felt secured in Shiv's hold and dint want to leave it. The moment they sat, she put her head on his chest listening to his heart beats. Shiv cuddeled her with both his hands giving her the strength and the support that she really was in need now and states that Main kahin nahi jaa raha hoon Anandi, mein humesha tumhara saat tha, hoon, aur rahoonga, and both of them hug each other tightly.
After few minutes of silence, Anandi broke the silence by asking him Y did Jagya come now. Shiv was shocked to listen this from her at this moment. Shiv realized that its time for her to speak and throw her frustrations out and he thought better to be silent and let Anandi speak her heart out. Anandi raised her head from Shiv's chest and turned to sit facing him and held his hands and looked in his eyes and gazed at him and after few minutes broke the silence again. Y Shiv, wat was it that made him come back. Y is GOD playing such bad tricks with her. Y is she not allowed to live her share of happiness. She then goes on saying that she never was open about her feelings to anyone. She adjusted to everything that life gave her. She has always compromised to everything in her life starting from her marriage till the engagement. She then realizes what she said and then faces Shiv and states that she agreed to marry Shiv only because her mother promised her to, but gradually she has seen the love that Shiv had for her and that she has also seen that he has been giving her time and space and the support which she was really in need of and that now the relation which she started on a compromise is no more a compromise, but she is accepting it whole heartedly and will always keep this relation fit and fine in all ways possible coz she loves him truly from the bottom of her heat. Both share a gaze and Shiv smirks at her and hugs her and kisses her forehead and states that he knew that she has accepted the relation, but she still needs time and he is ready to do anything for her happines. Both stay in that embraced position for some time. There is silence from both ends again for sometime.

After sometime, Anandi breaks the hugs and looks at Shiv. She wipes the tears, but the tears are reallly uncontrollable today. With tears flowing continuously from her eyes Anandi says again, "I was married at the age of 8 when I did not even know wat reallly marriage is, wat a new relation is, I did it for the sake of my parents. I was brought to Jaitsar, sasuma and bapusa loved me just like they loved Jagya. Dadisa hated me. She never realized that I was a girl of 8 and was leaving an independent and a happy life at Bilaria, in fact, forced me to do the house hold chores, taunted me always. I always wanted to study but Dadisa never agreed despite Bapusa's agreement. Wenever I used to do a good thing I only heard taunts from Dadisa and Jagya. Without dadisa's knowledge Bapusa and Sasuma agreed to take care of my education and I was allowed to study, but then Dadisa came to know of it and she asked me to burn my books. And luckily my in laws gave me the encouragement and I was asked to study further and was able to write my 10th exams and wen I topped in Jaitsar village, I expected Jagya to be happy but he and dadisa again taunted me. Though I compromised in all the ways possible to make him and dadisa happy, but they never were. Jagya ran off to Mumbai to be under the attack of some goons and when they were about to shoot him, I took the bullet for him, to save my so called husband. I even lost my memory and Dadisa still worried for her Jagya got him to marry another girl, and I was blamed again. She was the one who cursed me in many ways for not giving happiness to Jagya. After we grew up and after I came back to Jaitsar after 5 years of separation, Jagya wanted to become a doctor, the whole family was against it, but I spoke to them on his behalf and they all agreed and he went to Mumbai only to fall in love with Gauri and to taunt me and compare me with her always, degrading me. He never left any stone unturned to embarrass me or degrade me in front of his friends in Mumbai and he even allowed Gauri to taunt me. They both humiliated me mentally and emotionally. It was only after Gauri's marriage to Jagya that Dadisa accepted me wholeheartedly and encouraged me to live my life the way I wish.

With tears again rolling down from her eyes nonstop, she goes on saying what was my fault Shiv. Y am I being punished. Show me the mistake that I did so that I can at least correct it, so tat I do not repeat them in my future. Jagya wanted a divorce, I agreed and now at this point when I wanted to live my life happily with U, he came back saying that he still loves me and cares for me and wanted to be with me. Y shiv, Y, Y is it that all this happening with me. Wat wrong did I do.

Anandi is in tears while saying all these and hugs Shiv and asks for an explanation for Jagya's return. Shiv who is numb after listening to her past hugs her tightly and asks her to calm down. But Anandi is still crying and Shiv caresses her hair and assures her that everything will be alright and that he will make things alright for her happiness. He breaks the hug, lifts Anandi's face, wipes her tears and gently place a kiss on her forehead. Anandi closes her eyes in the pretext of feeling him closer, and fresh tears fill in her eyes and roll down her cheek. Shiv wipes the tears again and hold her hands tightly and says her that this should be the last but one time that she is crying, and the last one should be only on her bidaai after their marriage. Anandi has a small smile on her face after listening about her bidaai.

Shiv reassures her that as long as he is alive he will never let anyone harm Anandi even in their dreams and will also not allow any one to give her tears or cause her pain in anyways and also goes on saying that he will always be by her side, in both ups and downs, and any harm or pain that comes to her have to face him first to reach up to her. Anandi is overwhelemed by hearing these and hugs him tightly and in turn Shiv also hugs her back as she needs him emotionally right now. Without breaking the hug Shiv places a kiss on her head and promises to always be with her. Anadi hugs him even tight and kisses on his chest. There is a minute or two of silence from both ends and Anandi breaks the silence by saying that hum aapse bahut pyaar karte hain collector sahab aur hum khush hain ki aap humare zindagi mein aaye. Shiv is super duper excited on hearing this and both share a more tight hug and enjoys being in each other's embrace.
Edited by Kurup - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
I wish she opens up to him like this in reel life!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
superb update
she is opening up to shiv
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
aww..such a tender moment !! hope u'll continue d story...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Wow your second part was awesome👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ow wow, what an awesome update Kurup! I loved it to bits! ❤️ Glad they had a much needed heart-to-heart talk and that Anandi told him about her past! Really great writing on your part! 👏Do continue soon! 😊

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