U R My Life...A new OS, updated, page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys. I am back with an other OS after a very long time and I want this to happen in the real serial and I hope this happens though not the same way atleast the confession part...SO read and njoy and do like as well as comment.
Anandi calls Shiv and thanks him for his support whenever she wanted him and also accepts her friendship and promises that she will fulfill all her duties as a friend even after their marriage and will never let this friend down in anyways. Shiv is super duper excited and continues with his work, but suddenly is disturbed by the thoughts of Jagya. He still keeps on thinking why is Jagdish back in Jaitsar. Has he come back again to give tears to my Anandi. He promises that watever happens he will never let Jagdish be successful in "get back Anandi mission" as Anandi is his and will be his forever. He goes to the hospital in the pretext of getting his wound dressed and reaches the hospital where he finds Lalsingh checking on Jagdish who is in an unconscious state and mumbling plz pardon me Anandi. Shiv is sad at seeing his condition but after a millisecond imagines all the ways in which he has tortured Anandi and goes back to his office without getting his wound dressed. He is so disturbed after seeing Jagya, thinks that Anandi cant see the pain of even a stranger how would she tolerate Jagya's condition. He is restless and does not know wat to do. Just then Anandi calls him. Shiv who is lost in thoughts picks up the call and Anandi could sense his voice trembling and asks him if everything is alright. Shiv states that everything is fine and tat he is busy with the work and cuts the call stating that he will call her after sometime. Anandi is sure that there is something wrong with Shiv and is restless and plans on meeting him and gives the school an off for the rest of the day and goes to meet Shiv. Without even knocking at the cabin door ANandi bumps into Shiv's cabin and asks him the reason for his restlessness. Shiv is shocked at seeing Anandi at that time of the day and asks her to sit down and calm herself. Shiv in the meantime tries to hide his emotions and comes back to history normal self. Anandi asks him the reason for his silence and the reason y he cut the call. Shiv states that he was just held iwth a busy work and could not concentrate on the call. Anandi states that we are friends first and the friendship policy states that good or bad everything has to be shared openly and not to hide anything. Shiv smiles at her and states that he is really fine and asks her the reason for coming to the office. Anandi states that she has two reasons to come. One as a friend she found that her friend is disturbed and wanted to give him a company and two as a would be wife she just came to know about his health as well as his lunch. Shiv is super excited and states that he is happy to know that she has started to accept the relation. Anandi in turn states that I was a fool myself to loiter with my past and not thinking of the future and now I have started to move forward and its not just coz of the promise that I gave to my mother but coz I really want to be a part of ur life which would make my life complete. Shiv is happy and both share an eyelock. Anandi cuts the eyelock by asking him if he could accompany her to the temple today as Dadisa wanted her to accompany her. Shiv accepts it readily and asks Anandi for half an hour's time so that he could wind up the work. Anandi agrees and in the meantime calls dadisa and informs about the same and dadisa in turn informs to meet them at the temple. Shiv is working and Anandi is sitting opposite to him on the couch and is observing Shiv. Shiv is working seriously on some files and on the laptop. He throws some glances at Anandi who is busy staring at him, but does not ask anything thinking that he will ask her on the way to the temple. Shiv winds up the work for the day and leaves with Anandi to the temple. Shiv opens the car door for Anandi and then he takes the driver seat and drives their way to the temple. On the way he asks Anandi the reason y she was staring without even blinking. Anandi blushes but does not give a reply. Shiv asks again, but gets only silence as his reply. Shiv is adamant to get the answer this time and hence stops the car to the side and asks Anandi the same question. Anandi blushes and is silent, but upon repeated questioning answers that she was trying to capture him in his mind and in her eyes so that wenever he is not near she can see him and feel him. Shiv also blushes on knowing this and comes a bit closer to Anandi and asks Anandi the reason for it. Anandi again blushes, but does not respond. Shiv just glares at her but does not speak anything. Anandi looks at him and takes hold of his hand and states that she has hurt him a lot in the past with her harsh words and she is extremely sorry for that rude behavior of her and promises that she will never leave this hand watever may come in between them and will try her level best to fullfill all her duties as a wife and as a friend. Shiv states that she does not want a wife who just keeps fullfilling her wifely duties but a wife who commands her wishes to him and he is waiting for the day when she orders him something. Anandi blushes again and states that she does not need to order anything to him and infact she need not even ask him anything, coz she knows that he loves her so much that even without she saying anything he understands her very well and fulfills all her wishes prior to her asking. Both of share a cute eyelock and head their way to the temple. They reach the temple and climb the stairs. In between Anandi skips a step and is about to fall wen Shiv holds her from her waist and lifts her in his arms till the temple entrance. Both Shiv and Anadi are shocked at the site they see at the entrance. They see that Dadisa, Bhairon, and Gehna are talking to Jagya and Jagya is standing in front of them with folded hands. Anandi leaves Shiv's hands and takes her step forward where all four are standing. Shiv is standing at the entrance shocked tat Anandi left him, but composes himself. Anandi looks at Dadisa and Bhairon. Bhairon tells her that Jagya is here to apologize and to repent. Bhairon is interrupted by Jagya stating that he would talk to Anandi himself. Jagya states that it was his mistake that he did not trust Anandi and his family when they said about Gauri and that he has left Gauri forever and also states that he has come back for her and is ready to start a new life again with her. Jagya hold Anandi's hands and starts crying. Shiv is watching all this and is bit shaken when Jagya holds Anandi's hands and Anandi does not obstruct it. After a minute or two of silence, Anandi leaves her hand and slaps Jagya twice. All the people standing there are shocked. Shiv is also shocked. Anandi then states that the first slap is for leaving Gauri and the second slap is for holding a girl's hand who is now engaged to be maried. She states that she is not a toy where people can just use whenever they feel like and throw it whenever they feel their need is fulfilled. She is also a human and has the rights of being happy in every state and states that with great difficulty after struggling for many years with the lonliness that Jagya has given her and after listening to the harsh words and the curses that many of the villagers have given her she has reached this height and now she does not want the past to be repeated. She states that her happiness lies in being with Shiv and is happy in getting married to him. She also states that U left me coz u found Gauri was more suitable to u, as she is not a village minded girl like I am and is educated and can find a solution for any problem which gives immediate relief and tat you have insulted ur own family for accepting me and now coz u found out that Gauri decived u, u want me back in ur life. Wat do u think of urself Mr. Jagdish Singh that love and marriage is all a child's play just like we were married at childhood. She goes on stating that she thought that jagya might have changed a bit after going through all the tantrums that he had gone through, but he has not. He is still the jealous Jagya itself who thinks only of himself and not about others. All that matters to jagya is he and his happiness, the rest of the world hardly matters, does not even matter to u even if they exist or not. She then goes back to Shiv, holds his hand, and brings him where Jagya and the rest of the family members are standing and states that I do not know wat gud thing I did in my life that I got a person life Shiv Raj Shekar as my companion and I am thankful to God that he chose him as my husband. He who consider a girl not just his wife but an equal in all respects and a person who chooses his wife's wishes before his wish. If u want to know wat life is, wat love is, wat a wife actually is Mr. Jagdish Singh learn it from Shiv. Anandi now looks at Shiv and talks that though we are only engaged now and I accepted this proposal coz my mother promised me, but I really understand ur value, the trust that u had on me, the trust that u showed on me, the time and the patience that U gave me to accept U and not forcing me, I respect U more, and today I say it in front of everyone that I love U and love U from the bottom of my heart and will always love him till the last breath. She states that U R MY LIFE coz wen I was in dark when there was no ray of hope for me to do anything, u came as the light and showed me the life. Shiv listens to all this and is overwhelmed and hugs Anandi and they both are in a tight embrace for few minutes which is disturbed by the ringing of the temple bell. After they break the hug, Anandi asks Shiv to take her somewhere for sometime where she wants to be with him all alone and says to the family that Shiv will drop her home and not to worry about her as she is fine as long as Shiv is with her and she trusts Shiv a lot. Shiv is happy and takes Anandi and leaves the family behind.
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dixie123 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one Kurup ! Love the slaps Anandi gives Jagya.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dixie123

Nice one Kurup ! Love the slaps Anandi gives Jagya.

Thnx Dixie. I am not that gud in writing like other talented writers here does, but I really want someone to write a script where Jagya is humiliated and slapped by Anandi and I even do not mind even if the Singh family also joins hands with Anandi.. Thnx a lot for ur valulable comment.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good one!
I am glad that the Anandi you created was strong and articulate to let Jagya know how he has tortured her.
Thanks for sharing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow...your OS had everything I am wishing for Kurup! Awesome job! 👏
I hope you write more soon! 😃
Edited by Vedo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kurup - good job. teensy suggestion - break it up into paras. it increases readability.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kurup.. 🤗 really a warm and touching OS. Loved it. Do continue soon... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnjanaYYZ

Kurup - good job. teensy suggestion - break it up into paras. it increases readability.

Thnx Anjana for the suggestion, Will definitely keep in mind for my future scripts if any.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow kya baat ha kash saach mein bv mein bhi aasa hi ho i wish
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fantastic, very good. surely update next one soon.

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