~Zindagi ban gaye ho tum~2nd pt pg7 - Page 7

Originally posted by: swetsurati

Awsomeee...OMG...ye dono beach pehi suru ho gaye...haila public place hai koi dekh leta to?...hahaha...lekin pyar jagah aur wqat nahi dekhta...

bilkul sahi kaha...;)and thanks for the comment...

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

lovely and awesome the feel the emotion was beautifully written i am looking forward to read some more of your work please write more because u r really talented😃

Thanks for the lovely comment Saira...shayad main talented hoon par aap logon ke jitni nahi:)n yes i already have planned to write more...

Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30

Thanks for the lovely comment Saira...shayad main talented hoon par aap logon ke jitni nahi:)n yes i already have planned to write more...

di u r really fab its really lovely and beautiful . i loved it. di ap tu chupi rustam ho ap tu itna acha likhti ho.

Originally posted by: princessmomo

di u r really fab its really lovely and beautiful . i loved it. di ap tu chupi rustam ho ap tu itna acha likhti ho.

really i loved it👍🏼

aww my sis thank you so much!:)

Lovely Update Vibha👏
You both sis write so beautiful...very impressive⭐️
This was what we all wanted to see in the original show😳
would like to see more of your writings👍🏼
and thanx for the om sweety🤗

Originally posted by: rubaarana

Lovely Update Vibha👏
You both sis write so beautiful...very impressive⭐️
This was what we all wanted to see in the original show😳
would like to see more of your writings👍🏼
and thanx for the om sweety🤗

thanx for such an awesome comment dear:)yes i will be writing more...

Originally posted by: princess_T

Amazing👏

Thank you:)

nice OS
Loved manyata punishment and their fun
Are u like serious they did it on beach :O..mumbai beach isnt a desserted place dear...hawww!!

That was really well-written..hoping to read more from you..loved it!😊