~Zindagi ban gaye ho tum~2nd pt pg7 - Page 3

Originally posted by: ishuj

Hiii... Shivani

hi dear:)sorry for the late reply..im sorry lekin mujhe ab jana padhega...sorry bye..:)

really loved it i mean it was much better than wt was shown in the show... i was actually going on reading and then i came across a line which said to be continued nooo y did u stop there really curious to know what happened. lol loved manyata punishment that she gave to uday and the chase was really awesome please update soon and thanks for the pm

Awesome Vibha 👍🏼
you just showed us what we wanted to see in the original show⭐️

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Originally posted by: sonam2801

😲 😲 OMG, OMG, Vibhu that was bloody brilliant yaar.😛Superb, amazing, awesome update Vibhu.👏 👏MINDBLOWING.👍🏼 👍🏼

If this was happened in the climax of DEK toh hum toh SA Maiya ko phoolon ki mala pahna dete 🤣nikamme ek idea tumse hi le lete humari Vibhu mana nahi karti.😆

I liked the update yaar & mostly that scene in your OS was not around the DEK KI ROUND-ROUND TABLE.🤣 Beach was the best place for show's ending because Manveer met first time on a beach & their first fight also on that beach. Tumne toh humare dil ki muraad puri kar di Vibhu.🤗 Jhappi pa le.🤗

I liked Manyata's punishments list for UV.😉

But what happend to UV in the last?😕

Now I'm waiting for the next part, Please update next part of this OS soon.😳

PM me ok.😉

Beautiful OS.👍🏼

HUGS.🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: Jarin04

Yay mera vibha ka os hai. Ye toh padh na hi padega. Will comment after reading

Originally posted by: killerashish

hmm finally meray vibha puttar nay himat kr kay OS post kr hi diya😆superb OS👏manyata

nay itni jaldi mahal chor diya lagta ha is bar soch soch kay nhn gaye ha seedha chali gaye ha 😆

hmm halkat veeday ko pata tha kay iss ki princess khain ho sakti ha 😳kia kehtay han dil ko

dil say raah hoti ha 😉mere fazol poetry😆manveer scene hayyee kia scene tha khoob enjoy

kia manveer nay beach pr ☺️ or manyata itnay handsome or hot prince kay samnay hotay hoay

us akash ko kasay yaad kr sakti ha 😡iss akash ko tou manyata kay khayalon may bi nhn ana

cahiay haan nai tou😆lovely update vaibha👍🏼cont soon 😃thnxxx for the PM🤗

Originally posted by: -Mayra-

Res its really awesome dear:)last meIn UV iss liye uth gaya na kyun ki Jo hota hein wo shaadi ke baadh ho because he is not like that A...:)pls cont soon:)

Originally posted by: Asmimelody

Sabse pahle bada wala sorry meine der se comment kiya aur iss browser mai like button kaam nai kar raha hai...aur OS ke baare mai bataun toh mere paas shabdh nahi hai yaar..meri kitten ye kya kar diya sabse pahle ek tight hug 🤗 love you Vibhakka 😳 you r awesome:)story tha fantastic 😛 sabse pahle jab Manyatha ne UV ko saza ki list di bohoth cute tha wo scene ⭐️ thab mujhe DEK ka wo dance wala dailog tum toh bohoth romantic ho Princess a hamme toh patha hi nai tha...yaadh aagaya 😊 phir bacche kaash itni akl unn CV's mein hota 😡 phir beech mai dodna haaye tumne toh dil ki Muraad poori kar Di yaar 😃 then usse uss Akash ki yaadh ayi uss mai ek baath acchi lagti ke usse laga o o nahi thi 🥱 uske baadh sab Wow tha 😳kya yaar emotional kar diya..DEK ki bohoth yaadh aarahi hai... thank you didi 😊 love you 😊 pls pls pls jaldi cont karo...

Originally posted by: Swini01

Mindblowing(soon will give a long comment).