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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Priyamvada



I'm excited abt the entry of hero.. but the title of ur next chap looks scary🤢 😆



😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: sukhi...

AWESOME 👏... havn't read it yet once i become free i wl read it for sure... keep it up dear... 👍🏼


thanks honey,please read it full because you won't be able to understand the story if you read it in the middle.take your time but read it from start.every mystery is connected to other.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Lovely Update !! Really Waiting To Know What Happened To Anu !!!


thanks honey,i am loving that you are enjoying it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: hemaDaganKhian

Moni dear one small request Character sketch scatterd in 4 places na so put all links in 1st pg it'll b easy for everyone to catchup full character sketch(sply lazycats like me😳)ur nxt chapter title sounds lilbit scary 😲


okay honey i will edit my first page and will make character sketch at one place.thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

thank you honey,its so nice that you are taking time out of your busy schedule,please comment long whenever you are free.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
chapter-5-a cruel death(note-there is a little violence)
she was all unconscious.
in her mind...
anu is wandering around a dark forest,suddenly she encounters that tree which she saw there.
there are two kids sitting there.one boy and one girl,suddenly she saw that that girl stands up and that boy's body torns apart,his ribs comes out,his head falls on other place,his stomach comes out.
anu screams..-aaa...
that girl who killed that boy has the same sad face like anu made.
anu wakes up.,she is taking heavy breaths.
jhanvi-anu,anu dear are you okay?😭
sunil-anu are you okay?
anu hugs jhanvi-mom,mom please save me,i am getting nightmares in my dreams.
jhanvi-sshhh..sshhh...sab theek ho jayega beta.
shekhar-aakhir anu ko ho kya raha hain?
maanvi-hum mutants hain,humein kise mutant doctor se puchna chahiye.
virat-i know a mutant doctor.
jhanvi-bas ab anu kal picnic nahin jayege.
sunil-haan mein bhe yahe kehta hun,anu picnic nahin jayege.
suddenly manvi had a stroke in head...manvi-ah...
virat-manvi?😕
manvi-oh its nothing,i don't think its right choice.anu ko jana chahiye,hawa paani badlega to wo theek rahege.
at same time...
nupur-she has made her move,now i have to save her otherwise the history will repeat again and the demon will come out.no...i will go against it,i will turn the fate.she is not a flower of hell though...
ashish thinks-it again begins...HUH VALKYRIE.
jhanvi-manvi ye tum kya keh rahe ho?anu ke haalat dekhe tumne.
sunil-dekho wo kahe nahin jayege.
manvi-anu tum batao,kya tum jaane ke halat mein ho?
anu-mommy i will be fine,muzhe waise bhe is jagah se thoda break chahiye,aur trishna maam ko bhe bura lagega,wo khud yahan chalkar aye the.
sunil-par anu...
anu-please let me go,please,she gently smiled at him...
sunil smiled-okay...to ab tum theek ho na?
anu-yes i am pefectly fine,muzhe lagta hain mere new powers kuch extra special hain.he he..
everyone smiled...
in deep night...
arnab in his room sitting in wheelchair...
he remembers..
anu-nice to meet you again and then he remembers her eyes.
arnab-nahin nahin,yeh kaise ho sakta hain,wo to...nahin,par...ah...muzhe yahan se zaldi bhagna hoga.sunil aur family ko lekar.
arnab started packing his bags...suddenly someone knocked at the door.*tak *tak*...
arnab-kkk..kaun??
sunil-its me...
arnab opens it...
arnab-kya hua sunil?
sunil-dad jaldi bahar forest mein chaliye,aapko kuch dikhana hain?
arnab-kya??
sunil-chaliye to sahe.
arnab went with him,sunil pushed his wheelchair.
sunil took arnab to deep dark forest,to the same tree.
arnab-kya dikhana hain sunil??
suddenly sunil faints...
arnab-sunil...
a person from behind the tree.
arnab shocked...
arnab-ttt...tum...?????yahan...sunil,sunil beta utho..
person started singing-na na na...na na...na na na...na na na...(elfen lied tune.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o_SChDmSedM)
arnab-tum tum waapas...
person-haan...
arnab-dekho,he started pushing his wheelchair back.dekho muzhe mat maaro...please i beg you.
person-accha yaad kar ke maine kitna tuzhse beg kiya tha,yaad hain tuzhe,nahin yaad...the person used its mental powers and it made a crack on his head.
arnab shouted in pain-aaa...
person-ab yaad aya...
arnab could not speak due to pain,he fell off from his wheelchair.
it came upon and stand on him.
person-enjoying?😈
it used its mental powers and pricked his eyes...(ouch)
arnab-aaa...
and then it pulled away its right hand.
arnab-aaa...
and then it totally ripped his body.
arnab died a very cruel death.then the person transferred its conscious into sunil.
sunil took some of his body parts and placed it on his bed.
and then sunil fainted.that person left from there.
nupur-sadness that always wonder in this forest.😭she saw everything and got very sad.
in morning...
jhanvi-ready anu?
anu-yes mom ready(it was 6 o clock in morning)
suddenly a door bell rang.
maanvi opens it...
it was trishna,her teacher...
trishna-ready honey...
anu-ready.
trishna kissed on her cheeks.
trishna and anu left for picnic.
jhanvi and shekhar waved them goodbye.
jhanvi-shekhar hamne theek kiya na?
shekhar-anu herself wanted to go na,so don't worry and she can take care of herself.
jhanvi-but her health.
maanvi-of ho,ab itne chinta bhe mat karo,wo school he to gaye hain.
jhanvi-school,maanvi anu picnic jaa rahe hain?
maanvi-picnic,kaise picnic??😕
everyone shocked.
virat-kaise picnic matlab?
manvi-muzhe kise picnic ke baare mein nahin pata.
jhanvi angry-manvi muzhe is tarah ka mazak bilkul pasand nahi.
manvi-i swear di,i don't know anything.
shekhar-manvi don't you remember,maam ka ana anu ke picnic ka proposal lekar,phir kal rat bhe tumne agree kiya.
manvi-i remember maam ka ana but...s
suddenly sunil and his family entered their house.
jhanvi-sunil...
sunil was crying like hell..
shekhar-sunil kya hua??
sunil's sister-kise ne...sobs sobs...kise ne hamare dad ko bahut bure tarah maar diya.tukde tukde kar diye unke.
everyone shocked...
manvi-kya????
jhanvi puts her hands on her mouth.
sunil-sobs sobs..sobs...ye kise telekinate(telekinetic)ka kaam hain.
shekhar-arnab sir ka kaun dushman ho sakta hain?Wo to zyada logo se milte bhe nahe hain.
manvi-hamein police mein jana chahiye.
all men left for police station where one police is a mutant.
surya and hrithvik...are in alaska.
hrithvik was shaving...surya was sleeping as she was tired because of last night.(😉)
surya suddenly wakes up and runs...
surya-hrithvik,hrithvik...she opens bathroom and hugs hrithvik from behind,she kissed his bared back.
hrithvik-i think last night was not enough for you.
surya-i saw a terrible nightmare.
hrithvik turns-accha kya dekha.
surya stern faced.
hrithvik-bolo kya dekha?
surya-ah nahe kuch nahe,she hugs him.honey do you love me?
hrithvik-ofcourse i love you,you are my love honey,after that accident 1000 years ago where my dad and sister died,you my cousin was the one who saved me.i still don't remember how they died but you,you saved me and gave me a new life.i love you more than myself.
surya crying.😭-she thinks-i love you so much hrithvik but i know the love you have for me is not real,you in your deep down heart still love her even if you don't remember her.she hugged him tightly.
hrithvik thinks-when i woke up,all i saw you surya,i was covered in blood and you gently took care of me,i couldn't remember how my dad and sister died but you,you gave me love.i love you but still i feel something is empty.
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
OH GOD!!!!!
lovely!!!
i really luved this part!!!!
hhhaaa...
esp. hrithvik n surya ;)
OUTSTANDING! n super dooper trooper mysterious!

Amazing!!!!
firstly arnab's death ws amzingly executed...

n Finally our Hero z here!!!!
yipee!!!!
i cn imagine him n mouni in d scene!!!
Amazing...
luved it!!!!
plz plz plz plz plz plz continue soon [although i noe u r super dooper fast!]
Once again i luved it!

All credits 2 u...i luv d mystrey dat u've created!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: coolfizzy

OH GOD!!!!!

lovely!!!
i really luved this part!!!!
hhhaaa...
esp. hrithvik n surya ;)
OUTSTANDING! n super dooper trooper mysterious!

Amazing!!!!
firstly arnab's death ws amzingly executed...

n Finally our Hero z here!!!!
yipee!!!!
i cn imagine him n mouni in d scene!!!
Amazing...
luved it!!!!
plz plz plz plz plz plz continue soon [although i noe u r super dooper fast!]
Once again i luved it!

All credits 2 u...i luv d mystrey dat u've created!!!



omg thank you so so much...
i am super fast because i had time today,when i don't have time,i don't update for months,sometimes stop ffs because of exams.by the way thanks,hope you are enjoying the story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
hey yar..

absolutely amazing part! I just loved the way u executed the whole scenes.. its like I can visualisze this... Poor arnab! that was so.. sad..

but the hrithvik & surya part made it up for me! awww amazzing work buddy

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Priyamvada

hey yar..

absolutely amazing part! I just loved the way u executed the whole scenes.. its like I can visualisze this... Poor arnab! that was so.. sad..

but the hrithvik & surya part made it up for me! awww amazzing work buddy

thanks for the pm


thank you honey.😳

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