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kavyasam thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
in hurry will reply all in the night.thank you for reading guys , 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kavyasam

Note : stay with me. 😛


NOT TO WORRY
WE ARE WITH YOU ALL THE WAY
ARJUHI KI MOHABBAT ASEEM HAI
BOTH ARE IMAGINING THE DREAM THEY HAVE DREAMT NOT KNOWING THE REALITY
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Posted: 13 years ago
I read it from 10 times from the morning
It was beautiful dream
I can't explain word
She jump one to another woweww
He lay downn smile n she also smile just amazing just like a pure water
Two more updates
M scared
At morning I didn't read your pm n click in hurry to link for updates
So as u say two updates left I have hopes
Again excellent
Sorry for spamming
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Posted: 13 years ago
do ppl like them exist in this real world??????????
the love btwn this arjuhi is out of this world...
one of the most beautiful updt i hav ever read😊
i totaaly trust u n waiting eagerly fr the naxt updt
thnx 4 the pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg kya kahon update k bare mai...i knw ye dream hi hoga but kis ka???...
plzz update jaldi karna
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Posted: 13 years ago
I feel agitated for some reason :(.
update is 80% ready, but cant get myself to complete it.
hopefully by tomorrow.
love you guys. thanks for waiting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Eagerly waiting!! Fingers crossed!!
Edited by zoya_naziya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
FINALLY i am here di :) .. i know i took to much time for this comment.. but yeah u know me, i am lazy :) ..

when i would now be in arohis situation i think i would totally freak out seriously.. and its soo hard to be in her situation.. when u dont saw ure love for a year and then only some minutes r left for this moment.. its just hearthbreakin.. and i have seriously no idea if its a dream or not.. but u described the first meeting soo beautiful.. i dont know, but i can feel the emotions :) .

i really dont know, if this is the reality or not.. but but its sooo beautiful written.. and actually i am confused.. i dont know 🤣..

its just damn beautiful.. how u desribed everything. i dont know what to write..

and that with the boy and girl scene.. is weird.. :|.. i dont got it.. but it was seriously awsoome written.. and this peom was for me a very important part of this update.. suuper ending

i am sure that its a dream, when not i have no idea.. seriously update soon di :)

i think that was the hardest chapter to comment i think.. :)

-shilpa
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 16


layers of bright white were slowly turning into cream to grey to brown to all dark, arjun's voice calling her changing with each layer, she felt like she was falling down some tunnel, 'arjun' she said feebly 'Arohi' she heard a choked voice. Her brain started to register. It was her mother's voice, she tried to open her eyes. saw her anxious mother in front of her. Her mother got ecstatic 'arohi, arohi' 'suniye arohi uth rahi hai' she called out to her husband who was trying to call a doctor. Arohi still lying looked around where did he go She thought arjun had come, then where was he?. Her parents made her sit down on the bed. Their faces had gone pale. 'ma' her mother could only hold her hand. 'arjun kaha hai?' Arohi's dad stroked her head 'arohi, thodi der araam kar lo' 'main theek hu papa' 'raat der ho gayi hai so ja thodi der' 'nahi, mujhe jaagte rehna hai, so gayi toh phir arjun se baat kaise karungi'. Arohi's mother was still silent. He signalled padmavathi to take care of aro and went out of the room. 'ma..' she started to say something. Her mother hugged her tightly. she wiped her tears 'kitna dara diya tumne hume' she said. 'kya hua tha, mujhe, main neeche kyun thi' 'tum gir gayi this beta, kya hua, theek se khana jo nahi khaya tha, kamzor ho jaogi' 'maa arjun aaya tha?'. Padmavati could not evade the question anymore 'Arohi mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai' 'pata hai mujhe. Arjun nahi aaya bologe na, call kiya hoga zaroor' she looked at the phone. she hit it twice as if it will make the call appear. There were none. She looked at her mom 'arjun aaya hoga, aapne bhej diya kya?' she said accusingly. 'yaha koi nahi aaya tha arohi' her mom said in a soft voice. 'phir mujhe kyun lag raha hai ki woh aaya tha, kuch yaad nahi aa raha hai bas ehsaas ho rahi hai' her mom's eyes were filling. This time arohi pleaded 'sach ma, mera yakeen karo' 'karti hu beta' she said wiping her tears 'yakeen karti hoon tum jo bhi bologi, bas tum khush rehna, theek rehna, aise phir kabhi hume mat daraana' now she cried. She had heard the sound of the chair hitting window, came running and found arohi face down. she had rushed to wake her up but it looked like arohi was unconsicious. she woke her husband up. they tried one more time then her dad went to call a doctor. About 10 minutes they were fear and grief striken. Arohi's mother thought the worst. What if arohi didnot wake up at all. how can she live without her daughter around. She kept calling her name. suddenly arohi had started to wake up. Now looking at arohi pining for Arjun, she thought only one thing, 'Let arjum come as soon as possible', she cannot see her daughter like this. seeing her unconscious had been the wake up call. what if tomorrow arohi takes her life. how can she forgive herself for making such a condition with her daughter and praying that she forgets him. Arohi was still looking pale. 'main kuch garam banake laati hoon' she got up 'ma kyun nahi aaya?' 'aajayega beta, arjun, mujhe bhi yakeen hai, fikar mat karo' she said assuringly. Arohi was still not convinced that her mother could say that. She watched her go out and looked blankly at her phone. dialed his number with shaking hands, it was unreachable, she tried again and again. she dropped the phone down. even the tears refused to come. Her got her some warm milk. She pushed the glass away, 'arjun ayega tabhi kuch lungi'. 'woh bahut dur hai arohi, itni jaldi nahi aa payega' 'kya, kaha dur?' 'woh yaha par nahi hai' 'matlab' 'woh america chala gaya hai beta' 'kya??' she could not believe what she was hearing. 'arjun? aap kiski baat kar rahe ho'. Her mother told her what she knew. Arohi went totally numb again. he went so far from her, then howcome she felt he is so near, was this why he told her in her dream not to look for him is this why her day times and night times toggled so she could speak to him. Why did he go so far, did he fear she will loose the will power and come to meet him thus spoiling it all, no that cant be, it is something more, so he is on his way, may be it is a long flight, may be it got delayed, why couldnot he come few days early, and be here on time, she had been waiting so long. how must he be looking now. she felt calm, she felt sleepy, now that she knew why he was late. She slept. She woke up fresh, she checked her phone, still nothing. she didnot touch her food all day nor did she drink anything 'kahan ho tum, kya kar rahe ho, jaldi aao na arjun'.

in delhi in a army hospital arjun was lying lifeless on the bed. A major who was responsible for bringing arjun there asked a soldier 'inke parents ko inform kiya? 'haan kar diya sir' 'ek aadmi kitne logon ki jaan bacha di' he added. The major nodded and asked 'ab tak hosh ayega bola tha' ek do ghante mein aajayega bole the sir. Just then arjun stirred once. 'arohi' he mumbled feebly. both the major and the soldier went near him. 'arohi' he said. 'kisiko bula rahe hai sir'. the doctor checked his pulse. by then arjun had gained consicousness. he looked around 'kaha hoon' 'how are you feeling' arjun held his head, a gut feeling was telling him arohi was calling out, she was here, something told him he saw her. 'mujhe jana hai' he tried getting up. 'no no aap nai jaa sakte abhi, u need complete rest, you are badly hurt, it will take some time to heal' 'kya time hua hai, mujhe jana hai' he tried again, the doctor had to be bit harsh this time 'we cannot let you get up let' 'but I have to go' arjun was not one to listen. 'dekhiye apko bahut gehri chot aayi hai, bahut dard hoga apko' 'I dont care, kuch bhi hone do, mujhe jana hai' 'u cant' 'you dont understand. woh meri intezaar kar rahi hai, mujhe jana hi hoga' 'kaun' Arjun didnot reply he got up. then he pleaded 'please I have to go, it is really important, varna woh apni jaan bhi le sakti hai aur uske sath main bhi' after a lot of convincing and arjun's stubborn ness they had to agree. They arranged a plane for him. His clothes had been changed for surgery, 'aap aise toh nahi jaa sakte' the doctor asked the soldier to quickly grab something other than the surgery clothes and finally he was ready, looked for his wallet and stuff 'rehne dijiye ,pura desh aapke aabhari hai, itna toh humari tarah se gift accept karna hi hoga'. Arjun had been hit on the side closely missing the abdomen. They thought they wont be able to save him, just as they thought he had passed out, his pulse had started to go on again. He was unconsicious for several hours. He had some amazing will power to able to hold back like that. And now he wanted to fly so far because of his love. Putting on his shirt over the bandage covering it arjun left to meet his love. 'aise bahadur logon ko army mein hona chahiye sir' 'filhaal toh unhe apne mohabbat ke paas hona chahiye' someone who saw all this asked 'kaun tha janab?' 'ek deewana'


Luckily at the airport in hyd he met his parents, they were already informed he is coming. his mom almost swooned seeing him safe and sound. When they had gotten the call that arjun is hurt and is critical, Ismail Khan lied to his wife that Arjun is stuck at Delhi and they have to go get him, it sounded wierd to her knowing her husband very well it took hardly any time for her to know what happened. since then she was like a dead person. But as they were about to board a plane to Delhi they were informed he is safe and is also stubborn. 'waiting with thousand eyes' seemed true in their case. And when they saw him, Ismail Khan just leapt ahead and hugged his son and started crying. He who never expressed such affection openly. Arjun was misty as well. he supported his mother made her sit, let her cry. They were worried about his wound, he assured he will be fine. Then they all felt better. 'chalo ghar chalenge' 'aap log jao, main arohi se milke aata hu' 'iss waqt tumhe toh araam karni hai' his mom told him 'nahi use jaane dijiye, uska waha jana zaroori hai' said his dad patting arjun's back. He took a cab and counted every second that passed by.


Arohi was as stubborn as she was since last night, nothing to eat. as night approached, she grew calmer, as if he was coming to take her she dressed up. she didnot know when he will come or if he will come before that night is over, but she felt like her wait will end. she went on the terrace. On and off rain had left it cool. She didnot know how long she was there or what was happening around her. She did not even hear the gate open.


Arjun opened the gate and was about to ring when Arohi's mother came out with a plate of food and a glass of water to take upstairs. Arjun automatically folded his hands as a greeting. She just nodded and said 'arohi upar hai', he felt like a music started in his heart hearing her name. he turned to go up 'beta usne kal raat se kuch nahi khaya hai, paani tak nahi liya'. he took it from her, neither had he eaten anything. when he was about to go she added 'uska khayal rakhna, bahut nadaan hai' before she could cry in front of him she went inside. He started to go up.

Note : simple and cheesy update next. may be by sunday. wanted to post it together but it is not ready so till then. will post it in next post. plus this update needs fine tuning will do it later. hope everyone is happy :D

Edited by kavyasam - 12 years ago
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Omg omg I luv the update I soo sooo luv it u proved me rong u r the best rite ever ! I luvv salam Namaste to the core
So much happened in this update I was so overWilmer by arjun n arohi both being alive !
It was one of the best chapterz ever !
Finally he is there ! Her mother realized how strong their luv was how she was rong bt den arjun came home

Thnx for update im waiting for ur next update !! Hurray
Edited by mansi_47 - 13 years ago

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