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this is my first os. babies on the board by crazyyfan inspires me a lot. so here i m


Arnav is standing outside the closed hospital door. His whole body shivering with fear. His love is inside the hospital room crying her heart out. His whole family is standing with him, trying to console each other.

After almost 1 hour he let by the doctor to see his love in bed. Trip's have been removed from her hand. Her hands r like soft roses. He looks at her from top to bottom. Her pink cotton dress enhanced her lovely, cute face. Arnav goes near her and took her hands in his and kissed lovingly. She moaned in her sub conscious state. And said him to smile for her. After 10 min she fell asleep.

Slowly arnav stood up and went out to meet the doctors. Once he is inside he starts his enquiry about her health in his ASR style. The dean who is his family doctor looked up at him and ask him to sit first. But her never listened. The other consultants and interns stood their like thief's caught by police watching him asking questions and shouting at the dean for ans. The dean took a deep breath and answers all his question with at most care. Once arnav got all his answer he went out without caring/acknowledge any1. The total doctors team watch the dean with open mouth. The world famous dr laughs at them and answers theis unasked question "the patient is his love, life, blood , breath. She is everything to him."

Out side the dr room arnav takes his phone out and called his home and orders op/hp /all servants to keep the house very hygiene. He informed his family that she will be discharged in two hours and ask them to go home and prepare everything for her and the doctors who r coming with him to take care of herself.

He completed all the discharge procedure in no time and took her in his arms. NK drove to home with arnav and his love in the back seat of the car. nani took aarati and he went straight to her room and put her in her bed and watched sleep peacefully. Payal comes with the food and ask him to eat. He simply look her eyes and she understood tht he will never touch food till his love wake up and feed him with her hands.

Once payal left the room arnav recalled the incident happened the very same day morning. Arnav was waiting for her to wake him up. But she dn't. Next what happens took his breath away. He found her unconscious rushed to hospital with tears in his eyes. The dr told him she is having viral fever and the house should be hygienic. Next second he order all the servants to clean the house clean and his family members scolded by him for their carelessness about her. He scolded himself for letting her sleep alone in her room.

Arnav's train of thoughts stopped when the person lying in the bed opened her eyes. She smiled at him and open her arms to take her. He immediately takes her. She kissed him on both cheeks and ask him to take her to her family. He simply obeyed her.

The whole family if sitting in the living room watching him with her in his lap. They never thought arnav will love some1 like this. His di watching him with tears in her eyes. And his wife watching him with smile in her lips. Aryan goes near arnav and try to touch her face. Arnav suddenly stops him and ask him to wash his hands. Aryan confusingly looks at him and goes back to his place. They all spoke to each other but arnav simply watch her talking to ever1.

After sometime she call him. 'PAPA'. Next second arnav knelling in front of her, she nodded her head to her mother and her mother brought a plat full of food. She simply took the plat and started feeding him as always. He never said a word/ argued her. He eats everything. His family looking at them lovingly. Once the plat is finished she try to move for washing her hand. But he never allowed her. He washed her hand with warm water and kissed her lovingly. They both heard nani 's commend. 'can u believe this anjali. The great ASR obeying small 4 year old girl. Hearing this commend he walk upto them and said " she is not a some small kid. She is my love and life. More important than any of u including u two di and kushi'. And walks to her room with her in his arms and his 6 year old son Aryan holding his fingers and smiling mockingly to the family.

Anjali and kushi looks at eachother and said this man is "unbelievable." Y is he doing this big drama just for fever. ( But they know his daughter is everything to him.) and look at her she is just 4 year old but she knows him well and without any1 saying anything she asked the food for him and feeds him. Unbelievable




(sorry for the mistakes i m not good in writing and this is my first one so forgive me if it is boring)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I always do conclusions before reading completely.IF writers realize me this.When I started reading its Khushi and last it came its his daughter.Simple and nice OS.Like it very much👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very sweet and cute story...loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow how different and amzingly written 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
You are a star well done, even at first i thought it was khushi then relised it was their daughter loool😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HE IS SUCH A CUTE DAD
AWW BLESS WASNT THAT JUST SWEET
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its lovely dear.And am honoured to know My SS inspired you to write 😊 thanks !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww. ... soo adorable...
arnav is such a loving father..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chooo chweettt...
i really really liked ur story...
u shud write more often...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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How cute!!! Well... He's a typical papa... Wonder what magic we weave on our fathers!!!!!! The relationship is just magical for most of us!!!

Goes to show even the mighty ASR is not immune to this !!!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I THOUGHT KHUSHI IS ADMITTED IN HOSPITAL FOR DELIVERY...BUT ITS HIS DAUGHTER..LOVED IT

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