Fan Made DEK Update: Episode 13: Manyata In Action - Page 4

Originally posted by: khalilshahista

Well done to the team. But 4 me personally shana that was one of the best fan made episodes. love ur writing skills and how u portray uday and manyata. Hope uday is safe, love manyata in rescue mode.

Originally posted by: saneha85

Priy Lakhek,

Apka karya uttam and sarniye tha...

thatha iss karyw ke liye apoke hardik shubhkamnaye...

Omg shana itni shudh hindi likh kar me toh thak gai ha nai toh...😉😉

Great work dear love uu

Originally posted by: shana0127

Thanks Chitra darling btw am still waiting for ur purplish critical analysis for my FF update as well

Originally posted by: CharmingAngel7

The epi was really fabulous!!! Loved it from starting to end... especially when Manveer meet up... starting from start i liked the way u started the epi n told abt AD's intention n something abt him which v didnt knew so now he's the main villian... Manyata & DS part was touching so DS has started to respond now good also nice that manyata tells her everything abt the daily activities... lolz Manyata back to her language n uday called 😆 Really really loved the ending sequence from the phone call to the very end how uday stopped n waited for her n was worried for manyata more thn himself so sweet... uday hugged her tightly n covered her to protect her n in the process got hurt so sweet of him... thn manyaat trying to keep him awake by telling all of their love story from start till now so touching & also how he was still trying to calm down manyata even in that condition shows how mch he loves her & she too😳 rightly shown no body now a days stop to help even if somebody is dying its a bitter truth now a days its really sad that v arent even able to help someone dying in front of us people forget it can happen nxt time to em as well!! uday motivating manyata was really good i really liked this dialogue of uday 'Princess don't cry for help, help yourself' rightly so!!! & There went our daring princess... I loved the build up from the start to the end really beautifully written epi especially the manveer sequence at the end fantabulous work Shana👏 👏⭐️

Originally posted by: shana0127

Thanks Angel your in depth analysis of the episode reminds me of our DEK days when we use to analyse,comment and criticize our favorite episodes...

Ur comment has made my episode writing an honour to me

Originally posted by: CharmingAngel7

My pleasure Shana! btw I m Mehwish (nickname: Wish) I tend to do this kinda comments n hve been thinking lately do i do a very very long comment as i wasnt sure its nice or annoying for a writer to go thru it... n reading ur reply is a relief...
Really glad to hear that... Its really an honour for me to hear this from u.. ur really an awesome writer.. I hve read ur FF married for riyasat except the pt2 of chappy12 which i will read n do collective comment on that one... cant wait to read that up n reach wheels of fortune,... so thnx Shana for sch amazing piece of writings u simply rock yar👏👏⭐️...
the whole of CC team is doing an amazing & a betta job at writing DEK epis!!!
PS: I love ur Ashish AVI DP😆