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Posted: 12 years ago
Raining of updates...
thanks yaar, poor maanvi..
curious to know what will happen next ...
continue soon and u are great yaar, so many updates in 24 hours
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update, u've described da emotions beautifully, wonder Wat manvi will do once she finds out why her mother gave her up
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg Zahara dis was awesome.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it
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Chapter Thirty Seven: Maanvi finds out
Maha Epi Part 2

"Priya?" Jeevika whispered. She kneeled down to her mother, "Ma. Maanvi is Priya right?"

Maanvi looked at her confused whilst Padmini let out a cry.

"Maanvi is my sister right?" Jeevika started to cry whilst the truth shocked Maanvi hard.

"Your sister?" She whispered. How did it get from my mother to Padmini Aunty? Maanvi thought.

"Yes." Padmini cried out. "Maanvi is your sister. Maanvi is the same girl that I gave up years ago."

"What?" Maanvi asked.

Padmini got up and looked Maanvi in the eye, "The last time I've seen you were when you just born. I myself gave you to Jhanvi. You were sleeping; you didn't even know what your own mother was doing." She looked at Jeevika, "Beta, you remember your Jhanvi chachi right? And you asked what happened to her own child?" Jeevika nodded. "Her baby died." She said softly. She looked at Maanvi, "And there I was going to give up Priya but then I saw Jhanvi and her dead child so I did what I thought was best. I gave Priya to her. I lied to you Jeevika. I told you that my child died and that Jhanvi went with hers. I lied to you Siddarth, when you were willing to marry me to give Jeevika a father." She walked towards him, "Because I never knew that my own daughter would unknowingly find me one day. I knew that mistake I made but what could I do? Jeevika and Maanvi are half sisters!"

"Half sisters?" The words rang in Maanvi's ears.

"Yes, my husband. My EX husband" She corrected, "And Jeevika's father had sold me for one night. And you're the product of that!" She looked at Maanvi and wept, "I hated you, I wanted to kill you but I couldn't. I couldn't."

"So, you sent me away with my mother?" Maanvi spat out. She looked at Beeji, "And you Beeji? You lied to me? What did you think, that you could just hide everything from me? My life! My identity!! You all took everything away from me!" She was completely broken. "The only person that supported me is Viraat." She looked at him in fondness but was overcome with anger, "My own family betrayed me. My real mother didn't want me. I can't take it anymore." Maanvi started hyperventilating and Beeji became concerned and went towards her. "NO!" Maanvi shouted out. "Don't Beeji. Don't."

Suddenly, Maanvi ran out of the house as Padmini once again fell on the floor, unconscious. Viraat ran after her.

"Ma!" Jeevika shouted and ran towards her. Viren and Siddarth helped her pick Padmini up and carry her to her room.

"Oh god. Everything that happened to Padmini." Swamini said, tears in her eyes, "Abusive husband, rape and giving Maanvi up?" She started to whisper, shocked of the truth that had been revealed.

Beeji looked around for Maanvi, "Maanvi? Madan, where is Maanvi?"

Madan looked outside but couldn't find her, "I don't know, she ran out as soon as Padminiji fell!"

"I saw Viraat ran after her," Vanshika finally said. "Please God, please make everything alright." She prayed.

"Swamini, Vanshika, you two go inside and see if Padmini is fine. I'll go with Madanji and Beeji to find Maanvi." Dadaji ordered. Swamini and Vanshika nodded and left.

"Let's go." He said and they walked out the door.

Meanwhile, Viraat looked everywhere for Maanvi. He had taken his eyes off her for a minute and she had gone missing. But this time, it was much worse. He was scared of what she would do to herself. He asked around whether or not anyone had seen her, giving them a clear description of her. No replies. He nearly broke down but realised that there was a canal near, and remembered Maanvi loving the water and the sea. He decided to check there to see if she was there.

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Maanvi ran and ran, her tiring legs kept going as she paced barefooted on the rocky paths. She came across a canal with a bridge on top, going past. Without thinking, she ran across to get there. Maanvi looked around: from the top she could see the buzzing sound of people in Delhi, the few birds roaming freely across the blue sky. She looked down and saw the freezing water, the quietness of the sea.

"I gave you up. I didn't want you." Words rang in her ears that made her want to go mad. Maanvi stood on the edge. "Rapist's daughter." That's what she was. Unwanted, unnamed. She should have died just as Padmini said. She looked down and decided that she couldn't live anymore. She took one step forward and another when all that was left was one step to death.

"Maanvi!" Viraat's sudden voice scared her and she tripped nearly falling into the water. She managed to hold on, only bumping her head in the process. She hesitated as she held onto the uneven side. Her fingers were slowly forming sweat and she found it difficult to hold on. In that moment, everything came crashing towards her: she didn't want to die, what she needed was Viraat, her only solace. She whispered for him to help her, she was scared, very scared.

"Maanvi, don't worry. I'm here." Viraat said putting his hand towards her. "Hold on."

She tried her best to hold onto his hand but her sticky hands were no good. She felt like she was going to die there and then. "Viraat." She whispered.

Soon he managed to lock onto her hand and pulled her up. She didn't let go one bit, blood dropped from her head as she automatically pushed herself into Viraat's chest, teary eyed. "Viraat." She whispered.

The broken Viraat who was distraught to see her wanting to kill herself was suddenly brought into conscious, "Why did you do this?" He shouted out. "Didn't you even think that there was someone else looking for you? That, that person would not be able to live without you?" He cried.

Maanvi looked at him innocently. "Me." He whispered. "I won't be able to live if you're gone." He said. And then he said the three words that Maanvi was waiting for. "I love you."

She smiled and then found herself going towards the darkness. Her eyes closed shut, unable to open. Her mind found itself frozen, all she could see was pitch black. Maanvi was gone.

Edited by ZAHARA. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Guys, the next part is updated...
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Sorry, if I PM you too much LOL!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woohhh finally finished reading all the 36 chap! Ur story its jus Amazing nd the suspense part of it is what attracted me to it!<3
Loved hw VirMan met then their NhokJhoks slow nd steady frndship nd then love nw im waiting for the confession <3 lol
I normally skip Virika part of FF's bt in ur story i evn enjoy reading them,infact i love ur J lol!
I love ur Vadhera's specialy SB who havent done anything mean yet!bt i doubt she will be happy with VirMan relation after knwing Manvi's past!
Waiting for the part 2 of the Maha epi!
P.S i read ur story from TMLS kushal Kritika one nd its beautiful:D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Lumzz

Woohhh finally finished reading all the 36 chap! Ur story its jus Amazing nd the suspense part of it is what attracted me to it!<3

Loved hw VirMan met then their NhokJhoks slow nd steady frndship nd then love nw im waiting for the confession <3 lol
I normally skip Virika part of FF's bt in ur story i evn enjoy reading them,infact i love ur J lol!
I love ur Vadhera's specialy SB who havent done anything mean yet!bt i doubt she will be happy with VirMan relation after knwing Manvi's past!
Waiting for the part 2 of the Maha epi!
P.S i read ur story from TMLS kushal Kritika one nd its beautiful:D


THANK YOU! Naw, I like nice Swamini! So no swameanie! :P


hehe thank you!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Zahara awesome update bt end... Update soon yaar. Lol.., m greedy u knw.

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