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Aukview

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Wow! So many emotions and so much pain...very well written. Loving Arnav's growing bond with mami :)

Awesome ending...waiting to see how Khushi reacts now...

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rashmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

it was WOW...

really superb job...this part was beyond amazing and awesome...

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Roshkolovemusic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Wow ! That was a mindblowing update.

Arnav's inner Turmoil ,his bitter past and what he is going through was written very beautifully.

What a talented writer you are...amazing.👏

They met and he saved her from the thugs.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks for the pm.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

That was so beautifully written. 👏

I loved it.

The way you have depicted ASR's emotions, his reactions to the nightmares, the self loathing.

The way he went back to what existed of his roots. Changing mam's name to mom.

That was a very intense chapter.

Him meeting Khushi in the end..

One of your best, I'd say.

Brilliant job.

Keep writing and update soon!!

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reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

id hav wrds 2 write abt dis stry..:)it ol strtd wid a teenage crush..juz lyk ol of us hav..n trnd in2 a nytmare..damn dt nyt..!!!well..i srsly dunno hw i cmae across dis stry..read it at nce..n loved 2 d core..2 btfl 2 dscribe..evrythin..Khushi's lyf b4 d trmoil..dn wen she jond clg..n met Anjali..later Aakash's weddin..n evrythin..:)i wishd she spoke abt dt incdnt 2 whr she wtnssd him makin lov 2 sum womn..n speakin..ova Aman..i wish..well evn d bracelet prt z yet 2 cum...tooo lovely..2 gud..last chptr made me cry..wen she spoke evrythin.:)thumbs up..!!!fab..do pm me wen u update more..😛😛😛thnxxx😊😊😊😊

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Tulipdulip

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

superb writing...absolutely..

the pain and emotion was well portrayed...

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

I really loved the story... just superb..

Loved that young teenage kushi.. and her moments with her parents... they were just so lovely.. sweet..😊 how padma used to get angry and sashi and kushi has to bear the punishment.. all that was just beautiful.. and kushi and her friends.. loved their friendship.. felt sad when they have to part...

Arnav character.. at first with kushi i also thought him to be good .. but then he turned out to be different than that which kushi had made him in her mind and her arnav world.. 😲just hated him at that moment ... i know he didn't do it intentionally to kushi but didn't like it to happen but can't stop from loving him as well, as a brother to anjali and as support to his family...and poor girl has to face the truth in such a way and there will be reminder of that day lifelong in the form of the scar...

And then her changing to a new person .. and her friendship with anjali... she became quite mature from her naive form... and then her meeting with arnav again... proves that the world is indeed so small... and all their moments during the marriage.. sometime cute when kushi used to show her anger to arnav and then loved how arnav used to be confused about her anger...then came the most awaited confrontation... really hated arnav😡 at that time how he threw her book in the fire..😡 😡that was just so meany...and glad that kushi said all those think... ufff.. it helped to reduce my anger as well..

and now i feel bad for arnav...poor arnav the way he passed those days.. didn't know that it have such an effect on him... the two hundred and ninety three days that he spend was pure torture.. but glad that due to this he understood about the importance of his family who are there for him... their meeting after a year was just so unique... and hope this time there will some progress in their relationship...

really really awesome update till now.. u r just an awesome writer.. hats off to you... and eagerly looking forward to the next part as well...

Do accept my buddy request.. and continue soon..

take care

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the_breeze

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Posted: 12 years ago

#598

First of all I'm sooo sorry for being so late on commenting... But I got held up with loads of work, at the same time I'm grateful to you for sending me PMs despite everything!! ❤️

CH 13:

I have just one word for Wednesday July 4^th, BRILLIANT!!! There are just so many things I'd like to point out and comment on but if I do that I might end up righting an update on my own!!!! Sheer fantabulousness'. Great portrayal of his frustration and how the entire family colluded with Khushi in ruining his wardrobe!! (I'm guessing she was behind all this!!) I was ROFLing for the major part here!!! LOVED it to bits dear' 👏

Description of the wedding was perfect to the T' I'm guessing that you must have taken some inspiration from your Cousin's wedding that took place recently' Ahhh, I Love Weddings!! Such wonderful union of families, the banter, the ribbing, the pranks, the teasing, the clothes, the dressing-up, the FOOD, the gossip, the tantrums and the dancing!!! Gimme more I'd say!!! 😆

So the much awaited confrontation about the past happened at last!!! That was very well written dear' Very moving and emotional' The last line had me zapped' 👍🏼

CH 14:

First of all, what a perfectly apt quote dear!! It's just unbelievably correct and so in sync with the story… Kudos on finding such a masterpiece to begin the Ch with… 👏

I have simply no words to describe what emotions this chapter has stirred in me… It was so painful to read the slow destruction of the man who was once indestructible… I cannot believe the effort it must have taken to pen this one…. But I must say this is one of the best things I have ever read…. Believe me when I say that… I seriously cannot put into words the impact that update had on me… It was beautiful, amazing, awesome, emotional, poignant, touching, heart-rendering, fabulous and out of this world… I feel so lucky to be on your PM list right now, to be part of something this amazing is just great man…. Standing Ovation to YOU 👏

I'm dead eager for more, please do continue soon dear and thnx for the PMs… Lotsa love and take care

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sharme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#599

chanduuu...

u nailed me...completely

awesome chapters... i feel bad that i missed reading them before... blame my bro

the way Khushi shouted at him... spilling her past- their past!!!

and the final line in the 13th chapter...

arnav thinking she took his peace too with her...

standing ovation from my part hon... that was incredible...

and allt he emotional mental n physical turmoil of arnav in the 14th chapter n the final peace after that scream... him changing step by step... beautifully described...

and the cheesy kind of meeting ... super-hero saving our girl...!!!!

loved it completely chandu...

now cant wait to read the reaction of Khushi at Arnav being back in her life...

looove u...

~~~ sam xoxo