A poem dedicated to all Dads

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay, so I don't know whether its allowed posting or not. Here's a poem I scribbled down for my dad on previous father's day. It's a lame effort by me on writing poems, but still my dad loved it. So, just thought of sharing it.
About the pessimistic approach to the poem, I would be really glad if you don't ask the reason😭
Just tell me, how's it😊

DAUGHTER TO FATHER

O father, you taught me to lead,

To ever succeed,

When pessimism drives the world away,

You smile with your own way.

You are the one, who nurtures, cares and sometimes scolds,

So that, day-by-day my personality moulds.

No laser beam, no spider legs,

Still you are a superhero.

Even in the moribund quagmire of life,

You were the one who strived.

With sheer optimism and a gentle spark,

You kindle the fire and fight all odds.

You inspire, aspire and perspire my dreams,

Saving me from the dangerous brims.

O lord! Give me the strength,

To make my father pride at my length.

-Nikita

Hope, it made some sense😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nikki poem was really touching it was straight away from one heart to the other
Each and every word aise laga ki dil se likha hai
i m surely going to preserve this one for sure
har ek daughter ye padhe i m sure every daughter is proud of her dad
hmm bohot kuch bolna hai har line kuch na kuch yaad dilata hai
but i wuld conclude saying it was beyond awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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include this too U have awesome writing skills Nikki hope to get more coz acche cheeze humesha padhte raho to bhi bore nahi hote

nd finally i m the 1st one to comment *patting my back* 🥳 🥳
Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awesome poem...very beautiful
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nikki I always keep telling u how amazing a writer u r but cant help repeating that each time I read sumthing from u...touching and heart-warming are the simplest words I can use to describe it...brought back fond memories (as my dad is no more) but each day and each moment, I feel him near me and that gives me a lot of strength to face life each new day with its challenges...thank u for reviving precious nostalgia😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: meevee

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#990066">Nikki I always keep telling u how amazing a writer u r but cant help repeating that each time I read sumthing from u...touching and heart-warming are the simplest words I can use to describe it...brought back fond memories (as my dad is no more) but each day and each moment, I feel him near me and that gives me a lot of strength to face life each new day with its challenges...thank u for reviving precious nostalgia😊</font>



Meera, I do share ur pains dear. My dad has also battled a tough disease, crying hard. Sorry if I hurt you...
Edited by nikita_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShravniC

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Nikki poem was really touching it was straight away from one heart to the other</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Each and every word aise laga ki dil se likha hai</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">i m surely going to preserve this one for sure</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">har ek daughter ye padhe i m sure every daughter is proud of her dad</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">hmm bohot kuch bolna hai har line kuch na kuch yaad dilata hai </font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">but i wuld conclude saying it was beyond awesome </font>


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Shravs, I cudn't get a better bestie than u. Glad dat u luved the poem.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was really sweet. Beautifully penned down. I hope your father have read this. He would be really happy and proud.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: marauder

This was really sweet. Beautifully penned down. I hope your father have read this. He would be really happy and proud.


Thanks Shishir, my dad read dis bcoz I gifted him dis on father's day. Pata hai, he even showed dis to his friends and said that Nikki, tu writer ban ja😆
But, being a writer wudn't fetch money, so I aspire to become an engineer.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MysticLight

Beautiful, heartfelt poem.. God Bless you and your Dad ..


Awwie, thanks⭐️

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