MG Fic : Loving her was a mistake - Ch1 Pg6

interesting and different... nice OS 👍🏼

geet adiring maan maan calming on seeing her

different story

wow loved it to d core..fab OS...

hmm nice OS a bit different too

nice starting...of course its nt an OS...there r so many things to know...i hope its only an prologue n u will turn it into a SS or FF...is this middle aged man actually M...

Originally posted by: paponecon

nice starting...of course its nt an OS...there r so many things to know...i hope its only an prologue n u will turn it into a SS or FF...y M is middle aged...omg u made maan a middle aged man...

wth man! This is my reserved spot btw. Oh my god m grinning so hard that my cheeks hurt
Edit:

Wow, I really have no words. Really. I always appreciated and loved stories which are taken from our lives and this one, my dear lady looked like a page from someone's life. No guesses however about the park experiences. Not exactly, but yes there might be an inspiration somewhere, haina?
Oh god, that man whosoever he was, was a gem. And G, I appreciate the girl. She's quite connectable. Aren't we (or maybe simply I) like this?😆
We try to see the whole world with a cynic vision but when we look at ourselves only then would we find what we truly lack. So, Bravo for that. And M, I loved a line especially.
He listened to his parents fighting everyday. Until it made no difference.
You show me that there need not be loads and loads of paragraphs but a simple sentence to say things effectively. Bravo man!
Oooh ooh I do want it to be a SS. Go on girl, Keep writing more and more and more OS/SS/FF and everything!

hey tht was a nice intriguing one