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Posted: 12 years ago
A PARALLEL LIFE







PART 2




Maan went into unconsciousness'' this was all new for him'.all the things that somewhere seems to be familiar but were looking absolutely opposite'he haven't seen his mother dressed in such a traditional manner'. And then his residence '.mansion doesn't seem to be to be the place where he spent his life differnt sweet and sour moments'enjoyable and sorrow of his life'the grief of loosing his parents 'the longingness to be with them'the craving to relax in his mothers lap'..how could he not remember his home''' maan not only lost his parents but his love'.his childhood friend , a true companion to be'. A girl whom he loved beyond any limit'..he lost his mishty'' his sweetheart geet'.. geet was ten when she left him alone'.from that time there has not been any single day when he didn't remember her '.somewhere he had changed himself to such an extent that no could affect him'his love will only remain to his dearest mishty''.

He had although reached the heights of success but the ache'the anguish of loosing his most precious gems had left him silent and reserved'he is hard'.and sometimes is a total spoilt rich millionaire who behaves as a casanova'.but the real maan who once existed was taken away by his mishty'..

Maan knew that he was not dead'..the moment he lost his conscious physically but the activity around him he can haer '.the panic among the people that were infront of him in the disguise of his mother and granny '.first he needs to find about them'..

Daadima and maan's mother were in a deep panic seeing their son'.like a lifeless body'..they called the physician'.. ( I think its called vaid )'.. he checked his pulse and heart beats 'there were not any modern gadgets like sthethoscope but he gave some herbs to his mom and asked to boil them and made him drink his water'.. his mother did as what the physician said'.. the herbs were indeed too bitter and within half an hour he regained his conscious'.maan was continuously murmering daadima'' coz he knew that if anything happens to him then his daadima will be alone''. She is living for him'..he is the sole reason for daadima's strength to look after him '.. if he is there for her she will be alright in everything'..sometimes she is a mother to him''and sometimes he is a father to her ''. He loves his granny dearly'and for her he needs to know the reason where he is ''

Maan was just staring at every single person persent in the room'.the room was just like his'.. but not modern bit old and all the things seems to be antique like taken from any museum''

Till now neither maan spoke nor the persons standing infront of him resembling his family members utter a single word'' the silence was broken by a girl '.merely sixteen or seventeen'.. wearing a baby blue colour sari'..in such a nice way'. With a gold chain'.. she came terrified in his room'.the girl was having a fair complexion'.with her features resembling someone whom he didn't recognize yet'. She came and sat near him '.caressing his head and tears were falling from her beautiful eyes'.

Girl: bhaiyya'' she couldn't speak any word'.. for her she is seeing her brother after almost twenty days'..

Maan was shocked hearing her and addressing him as her brother''

Not in his twenty five years of life he had seen her'' and here is calling him as her brother'.. before he could respond to her love and affection''..

The woman appearing to him as his mother spoke ''

Smriti ( maan's mother ): payal'' maan ko aaram karne dijiye'' dekhiye kaisa haal bana liya hai'.

Even his daadima seconds his mother'..

Maan never got the motherly affection from his mother''' so when he saw the concern and worry for him'.his heart accepted her as his mother though he knew that she was not his mother ''. The physician left '.maan sat on the bed after sometime the sweet girl his sister according the relations the is sharing at the moment was sitting with him'... silently shedding tears 'somewhere he didn't like her sobbing and wanting to wipe the tears from her face but his mind clearly refused asking him the logic'.the reason for his deed'..

Maan's mind: '.you don't even know where are you and you are at an unknown place'..

Maan tried to reason his mind's thinking'..

Maan: but I know'.i am at delhi'.i know this place this is delhi'' the very place where maan singh khurana belongs'' and mom'.mom is here ''..

Maan's mind: mom'.whom are you kidding maan''.your mom left you 'she left this world along with your dad when you were four'.do you remember''.daadima'she brought you up''and don't you dare to think that you are death'.and this is so called heaven'.

Maan was having his own conflicts between his mind and heart'..the genuine heart who readily accepted a mother's warmth and a sister's concern and on the other side a mind that always finds logic'the reason '.who is devoid of any emotion'..his mind clearly know that he is alive'.present in his blood and flesh''

But somewhere he can't see this girl crying that was somewhere due to him ''. He gently wiped off her tears and nodded in no ''. She smiled seeing him and politely said''.

Payal: bhaiyya humne apko bahut yaad kiya aap kahan the'jaante hai maa kitni pareshaan thi'..aap phir kahin nahin jayenge'.humse vaada kijiye''

Maan didn't knew what to say'''and replied

Maan: I promise payal'..i will not leave you ''

Payal didn't understand his answer probably she didn't knew English and in a worried tone said'..

Payal: bhaiyya ye aap kya bol rahe hai'..and then first time commented on his attire '..ye kaise kapde hai'.ye kya pehna hai aapne'..

He Looked at himself and knew something is definitely fishy'..and with a fake smile answered her in her accent''

Maan: payal main vaada karta hun '' aapko chodke kahin nahin jaunga''.

And very deliberately inquired about the date''

Maan: payal aap tarik kya hai''..kya aap mujhe bata sakhti hai'..

Payal: 24 th august bhaiyaa'.par aap kyun puch rahe hai''

Maan: nahi aise hi'.. kya aap pani la dengi mujhe'..

Payal nodded and went''

When payal went maan was in a deep fix'.. he couldn't relate anything '24th august the same date he was attacked by goons'..his car fall from the bridge'.. he saw the mirror hanging on the opposite wall '..

Maan: this mirror'..i have seen this somewhere '.but where he couldn't relate '' but suddenly he found something from his pocket'..

He looked at the date '.. 24 th august 1912''and same mirror'' but something was changed he had seen exactly same in an antique galary'but the design was opposite the rays that were hitting the mirror from west direction here '..he saw the same sun light rays falling on that mirror from east'..

Maan: OPPOSITE WORLD'''' I am in parallel world''. And 100 years back that too in a parallel world''.

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago




thank u so much
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update šŸ‘



thank u so much

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gawjusangel

awesome update

nice concept




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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW ARE YOU KIDDING ME HE IS HUNDRED YEARS IN THE PAST OKAY THIS IS GONNA BE EVEN MORE CONFUSING FOR THE DUDE THAN IT IS AT THE MOMENT
WHAT A CONCEPT I AM LOVING IT
BUT THEN IN THE END HE WILL HAVE TO LEAVE THIS PLACE RIGHT SINCE THIS ISNT WHERE HE IS MEANT TO BE
SO HE NOT ONLY LOST HIS PARENTS IN HIS CHILDHOOD BUT HIS MISHTY TOO HUH
WELL WHERE IS SHE SINCE THEY ALL ARE HERE THEN SHE TOO MUST BE SOME PLACE ABOUT
THIS IS GETTING TOO INTRIGUING TO BE TRUE BUT NONETHELESS I LOVE IT
CHEERS FOR PM
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

awesome interesting

plz cont. soon




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Posted: 12 years ago




thank u so much

i m glad that u like it...

suhaaana thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

WOW ARE YOU KIDDING ME HE IS HUNDRED YEARS IN THE PAST OKAY THIS IS GONNA BE EVEN MORE CONFUSING FOR THE DUDE THAN IT IS AT THE MOMENT
WHAT A CONCEPT I AM LOVING IT
BUT THEN IN THE END HE WILL HAVE TO LEAVE THIS PLACE RIGHT SINCE THIS ISNT WHERE HE IS MEANT TO BE
SO HE NOT ONLY LOST HIS PARENTS IN HIS CHILDHOOD BUT HIS MISHTY TOO HUH
WELL WHERE IS SHE SINCE THEY ALL ARE HERE THEN SHE TOO MUST BE SOME PLACE ABOUT
THIS IS GETTING TOO INTRIGUING TO BE TRUE BUT NONETHELESS I LOVE IT
CHEERS FOR PM




thank u so much

i m glad that u like it...yup maan has to go now the real thing...i m glad that u liked my concept

my pleasure dear
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Posted: 12 years ago



thank u so much

i m glad that u like it...

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Posted: 12 years ago

woohoo so this is a complete fiction story ..

maan being in 1912 ...!!!

but i didn't got the opposite world concept ..

means its just a leap of 100 yrs n people behaiving in accordance with the time n era or thr is some nature difference also ..

the rays that were hitting the mirror from west direction here '..he saw the same sun light rays falling on that mirror from east'..

i couldn't get this one ..

suhana dearo itni logical things aati kahan se hain tumhare dimag mien ..???


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