I'll bring ur smilebk kria Note Pg 39

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yaha exams sar par aa rahe hain and i got a new idea!!!...hope u all lyk it...
~~PART 1~~
The story starts from where smriti came to the college and saw rey and kria dancing together...she called kria...
Smriti-Kaha ho tum kria??...
Kria was quiet she looked at rey...who gave a smile...
Kria-Mom mein reyaansh ke saath hun!!!...
Smriti-Why???...
Kria-Mom...kal footloose compition hain jissmein i am taking part...debate compition jaisa kuch nahi tha...
Smriti-Tumne mujhse jhut kyun bola???...
Kria-Footloose dance compition hain mom!!!...mein dar gayi thi ki aap...
Smriti-And aaj hi kyun??...
Kria-Reyaansh ne kaha aapko sach bolne ke liye...
Smriti looked at rey who hits his head...
Smriti-Accha??..
Kria-Haan mom...aur aapse ek aur cheez kehna hain...jo mein aapko ghar bar bolungi...
Smriti-Aur kya bolna hain??...yeh ki tum reyaansh ke saath relationship mein ho??...
Kria-Aaapko kaise pata??...😕
Smriti-Guess kia...
Kria-Aap naaraz??...
Smriti-Mujhe usse baat karni hain!!...
Kria gave it to rey...rey looked at her...kria told him to talk...
Rey-H he hello...
Smriti-Kya gurantee hain ki tum apne dad jaise cassinover nahi??...
Rey-Umm...mein apni mom pe gaya hun!!!...😕
Smriti-Accha??...kria ko hurt karoge kabhi??...
Rey-Usse pehle khudki jaan le lunga...
Smriti smiled...
Smriti-Jhute ho...
Rey-Sach...
Smriti-Apne dad par gaye ho!!!...
Rey-Aap unhe jaanti ho?...
Smriti-Thi!!!...
Rey-Hmm,...
Smriti-Tumhe kria ke saath relationshiip continue kar sakte ho!!!...lekin...
Rey-Lekin??...
Smriti-Tumhe usse roz ghar drop karna padega...nahi toh yeh jhalli khudki duniya mein kho kar ghum ho jaayegi!!...
Rey-Sure!!!...thanks aunty...
Smriti-Your welcome...
Smriti cuts the calls...rey made a sad face...
Kria-K jk kya h hua rey??...
Rey-Tumhaari mom ne...
Kria-Meri mom ne??...
Rey-Mujhe kaha ki...
Kria-K k kiya kaha??...
Rey-Mujhe tumhe roz ghar drop karna hoga!!!...
He smiled...but kria had a confused face...
Kria-Matlab??...😕😕😕
Rey-Gosh...matlab she isnt angry with you!!!...
Kria smiled and hugged rey...rey shocked but smiled and hugged her back...smriti hits her head and went away...when kria reached home she hugged her mom...but saw her crying...
Kria-Mom aap ro...
Smriti-Kuch nahi beta...
Kria-Batao...
Smriti-Kal aap apna performance dena usske baad!!!...
Kria nods..
Kri-Your the best mom!!...
And hugged her...
~~PRECAP~~
Footloose elims...kria gets to know a big truth about her life!!...
Hope u all lyk it...😊😊...for pms add me in ur buddy list!!!...and should i continue??...
INDEX
PART 1-PG 1
PART 2-Pg 4
PART 3-Pg 7
PART 4-Pg 10
PART 5-Pg 14
PART 6-Pg 18
PART 7-Pg 29
Part 8 - Pg 35

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
Wow another FF
amazing start
loved it
kash d3 mai bhi aisa hota *sigh* never mind
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Another FF 😃...
Great start 👏...
Shukar hai Kria ki mom ko Rey se problem nahi hai 👍🏼...
Continue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
nice start
awsome update
do continue
update soon
thankx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
awww kriya ki mom ko rey se no problem
great start continue plz
what is the truth????
update soon
thanks for PM
Edited by smkaj1999 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
Awsome start ..!
Smriti accepted rey dat was d best part ..!
N wich truth smriti is gng 2 tell kriya ..!
Waiting egerly ..!
Update soon n pm me ..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
awieee one more ff yayyy

amazinggg update dear,,,,,,,,,i m loving it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
one mre??????😲
bt srsly amazing one 👏
yipie kriya's mom has no problem with rey nd her dance 😃
dats gud
nxt part updte soon
nd all the best 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
amazing start
and nice ff
do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Great Start! Please Update soon :)

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