FF:#2Intricate Knots / Ch8 : Sleepless Night + 15\ - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG !! What a Fast speed...😲 😲 😲. Un-reserve karne ka bhi time nahin diya...😳 😆. But,no problem... I loved to read both parts back to back 😊. Superb Update Nivi.👏 😊... Loved to read College scenes n their convo parts...😆

Part 1 :

Truly very sweet part... Class scene was so funny...😆 what a cute dio.😛 Uday ne toh marwa hi diya tha...😆. But,I liked Gunjan concern for Natasha. Very sweet.

Part 2 :

Gunjan-Natasha scene was high point of this update. You presented this part in very mature way...I love to read their convo. dio... Its looks so natural.👏 👏 👏. Gunjan advise is very practicle,loved it. MaJan house part was also good.Loved to read some light moments wid very normal way...😊OMG !! Discussion about Salman n Katrina... Masha-allah...😳.Precap is looking very interesting so,I am very excited abt. that...Please,try to update soon. 😊

Thanks a lot for the PM... 😳



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Update Nivi ! ❤️ & Love the name *The Intricate Knots* 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Guys.

I hope you all liked my New Title!

Nevertheless, I seek improvement in myself. And guess what, I am up here with the Third Chapter of this season ALREADY! I am really surprised yet happy on myself.

I hope this time my writing impresses more readers. I am sort of unhappy with the response I am getting, though It is completely my mistake and that is my In-activeness..!

And I just wanted to remind you, this is my last work here on IF! I may just stop writing, though I shall read everybody's updates.

Before that I would like to Thank :


Thanks for liking my Second Chapter! It means a lot to me.. =)

And without any further ado, Here is the Third Chapter !

Edited by NocturnalBeing - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 3 : Some Fun and Some Love...

After two long hours of drooling and plenty of begging, Natasha and Nupur finally stopped their Salman Talks.

The gang decided to have another round of snacks, all thanks to Uday's hungry stomach; therefore Gunjan went inside the kitchen to fetch some knick-knacks and coffee for the gang.

Soon MaNjan's parents came and wished good night to all of the gang. Seeing the time, all decided to stay over. All girls were given Gunjan's night dresses and boys, Mayank's.

While Gunjan fetched the snacks, and the girls changed into their favourite night dresses from Gunjan's wardrobe collection, the boys laid down the matresses in the hallway for making room for everybody to sleep. Pillows were brought, blankets were folded and sheets were laid.

Soon everything was done and the boys sat on the matress. The girls still hadn't changed.."Guys, I'm feeling a little thirsty, I'll get some water and also check on Chashmish once." exclaimed Samrat. The guys nodded and saw a retreating figure of Samrat. They all started to watch their favourite Football legaue "Barcelona V/s Manchestar" till the time the girls didn't decend.

*Kitchen*

Gunjan was busy preparing hot coffee. Samrat silently sneaked and opened the fridge to take out the water bottle and the very moment Gunjan turned to take out the cheese spread to make the sandwiches from the fridge too. Suddenly seeing Samrat in front of her, she jerked back and Samrat dropped some water causing Gunjan to slip.

But Samrat caught her in time, mid way her fall. She held him tightly and clutched his shirt in her hand. Her eyes instantly met his. They both shared a minute long eyelock. Gunjan explored the truth in his hazel brown eyes, and Samrat saw the innocence in her blue eyes. Some of her flick came to her eyes but as a reflex action, he put them behind her ear. Slowly Samrat put Gunjan back to her feet being careful of not breaking the eyelock. Gunjan and Samrat's lips were just inches apart when they suddenly realized what just happened. Both of them jolted out of the reverie. An awkward silence filled the kitchen room. Gunjan straightened her shirt in nervousness.

'What is happening to me? What just happened here? You need to control your feelings. What if it only turned out to be onesided love and shattered your dreams. It was just an accident, don't get your hopes high! Now straighten out and initiate a conversation. ' both the best friends felt and thought the same thing.

"Um, actually I was feeling thirsty, so I came here to take some water," Samrat said uneasily. To lighten up the mood Gunjan replied smilingly "It's okay Sam. No Harm Done. I anyways needed some help, good you came! Can you please take these biscuits, chips outside for everybody. Till that time I'll get the coffee and prepare the sandwiches."

"Sure, why not! Um wait," he excused himself and moved forward "here you go" he held the tray and proceeded towards the hall were the gang was sitting. "Close escape. Thank God things got okay before he/she got to know" again, the two thought the same thing.

*Hall*

The girls by now had decended from the flight of stairs. Samrat came with the tray and kept it on the centre table. Meantime, Gunjan came with the coffee mugs and sandwich plates.

The gang proceeded to help themselves out. Everybody settled on the mattreses with coffee mugs and snacks in their hand.

"Guys, let's play something." said Gunjan. "Yeah, even I am sort of bored" added Natasha.

"So, suggest what we can play!" exclaimed Mayank, looking at everybody.

"Truth and Dare" came the reply from Uday. Everybody looked at him with a plain look, suddenly Diya started to smile and nodded in affirmative "Dodo, what a nice idea!" she said.

Soon, everybody sat in a circle across the centre table. A bottle was brought and spinned. The question side came on Gunjan and Answer on Benji.

"Ben, Truth or Dare? Pick fast!"

"Um, um.. I think I will take truth."

"Er. Diya.. You want to ask him something? I pass on the question to you..!"

"Uh.. Thank you so much Gunjan. I really need it! I really wanted to ask Benji something since a long time. Hm.. So Benji are your ready?" said Diya.

Mayank chuckled and said "So, here we start *Sach Ka Saamna* with Diya Bhushan!" Everybody laughed at his comment.

Diya sighed and inquired "Have you ever been unfaithful to me?" Benji stared at her.

Precap : Truth and Dare Continues..!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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So now, I come to the END of my update. I know there might be loads and loads of mistakes. Please forgive me for that!

But I hope there are signs of improvement.

I will try my best to make the next update smoother.

Guys, please be true with your comments. Criticism is more than welcome! 😃

Love and Affection,

Nivriti! ❤️

Name of Next Chapter : Truth Or Dare?

Edited by SajanRox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice & sweet update! SaJan scene was very cute <3 Wow!! Truth & Dare! Very interesting!

Waiting eagerly for the next part..Continue soon Nivi :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update nivriti continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
wao it was great and sweet and simple the night stay great idea and the preparation while it was not a big scene bt i dont know why its was really fun to imagine that boys settling the mattresses and girls choosing the night dress :-) and then sajan kitchen scene was adorable their love each other bt just for the sake of the frndship hidding it the way their cover it up was great and then start sach ka samna haha mayu always have great comic tyming lets see wht happen nxt only one complain it was too shot hope to see a bigger post nxt tym bt i understand that u are busy so take ur tym and once again superb update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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