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SwaRon OS : HER EYES
guys this is my first os so do tell me where i should improve nd please try to forgive my mistake

she couldnot look into the green EYES . people said that they were one of the most beautiful and rarest EYES one had ever seen . She SharonRaiPrakash couldnot look into HER own EYES . she was so ashamed of herself . It was all because of him . It was because she had faith in him . it was because she trusted him . it was because she believed in him.but what did he do?he did nothing but shattered her hopes of someone loving her more than she could love herself. Everyone knew how much SharonRaiPrakash loved herself but only He knew how much she craved for love,how lonely she was . She couldnot bear it any more and the tear rushed down her soft cheeks that HE used to cuddle . Soon a stream of tears followed the first tear nd wet the cushion on which she had her head on . She cried profusely nd screamed her heart out - "I hate you swayam shekhawat I HATE YOU!



He knew what he had done . He knew she had seen and heard him . He had seen her running from there . But he had to this . Only because he was selfish because he loved her . only because he wanted to see her . only for her sake . but he and only he knew why he had done so and how difficult it was for him to do so . how much his heart ached while breaking her heart . but above all he knew only one thing - " i love you Sharon . I love you more than anything else in this world."


She had lost everything she had . there was no reason for her to be happy . The once beautiful world had become a dustbin trash without him . when he was with her she became the sharon she always wanted to become. She remembered all her moments spent with him even every single eyelocks she had with him . the more she recalled the more hurt she got.Finally she decided to do what SharonRaiPrakash couldnt do but only Swayam's Sharon could do . Her eyes had swelled because of continuous crying but still she could clearly read what the bottle in her hand read " sleeping pills" . she once again remembered what she had seen swayam doing and saying
Swayam was flirting with a random girl
the girl said " everyone says you love sharon more than anything else "
Swayam : do you really think this is true . i swayam shekhawat would love a bit@h . huh ? have you lost it?
girl : but then why are you with her ?
swayam : I really hate being with her . I am only with her because she has the thing that I don't have and that is Money.


She closed her eyes , the memory being unbearable . She used to live a black and white life until he came. he filled her life with so many colours she had never heard of and, when he became her life itself, she never knew. now that her life had betrayed her what will she live ? she quickly gulped down the sleeping pills. HER EYES closed never meant to open again.


He shut his eyes remembering the hurt in HER EYES when she heard him saying what he had never dreamt of saying . suddenly his chest started paining heavily . He knew he was repaying what he had done to his Sharon . but he had done the acting only because he loved her . He had requested the girl to do as he instructed her to. He knew how heart wrenching it was to say those words about sharon . But he had to this . He was having the best time of his life when one visit to hospital changed his life forever . The doctor had diagnosed him with a tumour in his lungs .He was in the last stage. From then he decided to do the short play which absolutely was not a child's play . He accepted to see hatred for him in HER EYES than tears in HER EYES . Now he was breathing his last breath . With all his power he uttered the six lettered word that meant the most to him "SHARON" . He closed his eyes with a smile on his face remembering her smiling face - her swaying hair , her perfect nose , her godly nose and HER EYES .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os !!
beautifully written 👏
it was heart wrenching 😭 but it was a fantastic piece of writing ⭐️
do write more on swaron , will be waiting ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanukaswaron

awesome os !!

beautifully written 👏
it was heart wrenching 😭 but it was a fantastic piece of writing ⭐️
do write more on swaron , will be waiting ...



thank you so much for the first comment it made my day ⭐️ and surely write more on SwaRon if this OS gets a good response and if only my stupid brain gives me an idea 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautifully written 👏..waiting...next par plzzz fast write😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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SwaRon and sad endings are scary for me...as it is they hardly r shown happy...but that does not take away any bit of credit from ur work...nicely written first OS...liked the way u chose to focus on Sharon's mesmerizing eyes to convey ur tale...do write more and PM when u do

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nature2

beautifully written 👏..waiting...next par plzzz fast write😊


It was an OS and both of them have died
how can i make them alive again😆
thanks for liking it 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOME!!!! loved it!!! hey,u surely can create amazing pieces on swaron,keep writing...;);););)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Already d3 main swaron sad. i m not watching it from like a month or more..ab OS bhi sad wale :(
but then coming to this one IT WAS AWESOME!!! i liked wait loved your style of writing.. do write more par happy wale..

teh wale bhi MAST HAI!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ah that was one touching OS...Swayam making Sharon hate him cause he is dying was😔
Beautifully given the context of her eyes, well done
Do write more.
PS: i have doubt Sharon too died kya cause of excessive sleeping pills intake?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome os
It was really beautifully written
Do write more on swaron n next time with a happy ending pls

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