Ishaan- Pari - a perfect modern youth story

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Hello friends ...
First of all I won't do any regualr analysis of all the stories here... but this is the analysis I am doing only for avi's story... Well But one thing I wanna say is I am doing it not as a Avi fan, but as a present day girl... who see many love stpries around her in her regular college day life...So please read it with a open mind. I wish my friends don't beat me after reading this 😉.

The First introduction scene...
1.Pari and Ishaans meeting and the Pari who listen his song joins her voice along... Ishaan looks at her and he comes forward. Many people finds Ishaan flirting with Pari a bit OTT but exact;y to say... Its Pari who joined her voice first, which made Ishaan looj there. And Ishaans way of posing when he was playing the guitar it self gives a feel of a teenage junk. And what else can we expect from a teenage junk 😉 other than flirting.
2.Ishaan was very confident that he will win... Should I say that it was an OTT, Well it was said later that he already won it two times...It will be a normal Tashan (I am using word of directors sorry) which will be present in any guy who was used to winning.
3.And his jarrorat he said it very start that he has to win it for the sake of album and for the sake of money, which indicates us very well that he was a poor guy who wanna grow up in carreer and was a one who gives much importance to money . 😊(Other wise he should never had gave the name of money at all)
4.After he says it, she says then U have to win... It felt me like she was attracted to him in very falling, And people here saying that his character was flawe but for me Paris character was also flawed here. But Rather I would say that these two characters are representing two youngsters in our daily lives... Its my feeling,
5. This was the scene which stood out for me...
Ishaan starting to feel nervous after listenign to pari's song. This guy was not over sonfident of himself, he can estimate the others too to a good extent. And the sudden expression change on hsi face, Avinash potrayed it well (Should I say it that tis first time... becoz not at all ) . When a persons confidence is drained and a person who was used to win gets to know that he will loose ... what he gets is anger. And indeed a person who was used to winning never even likes others showing mercy on him. This is what I liked, When Pari said that she will leave the show for him to win he said that "he doesn't want her biksha" this scene was good and ishaan showing his anger. he first behaved like his pretty choclate was being taken away by some one and later he got his tashaan back and he was like, I doesn't need ur pardon and I can do it on my own. It was a good scene, but haan Pari felt disturbed when Ishaan held her by shoulder it was a sign of losing ur own control, and here again it said that Pari was week minded than Ishaan,(Now I am expecting ur chappals) . But Pari need not say that she will leave for him to win, becoz its like disrespecting others ability. But it was a normal mistake which oungsters of thse days do.
6. Then Ishaan sayign sorry It was again balncing... what ever he did was in rage of losing but again he reslised it and he said sorry . This was one thing which I liked becoz... it was rarely scene. This guy loses his control when he was in anger but had capablity of reslising hismistake and rying to get over it again
7.Next the develoment of friendship... Thsi was a bit ott for me too. but yeah it can be seen some times becoz... its a normal psychological fact that if we feel that others had same equal interests as us friendship will be easily developed. but it can or can't be love.
8.Now the competiton... should I say that I lvoed it... I loved it some where and I hated it some where... I loved it when Ishaan lost his smile when reality strucked him that pari was gonna wn, but he again composed himself and smiled for her when she was singing. He showed the variations there perfectly. he lost his smile when he came to now he was losing the competition but he again smiled when he was suporting his friend to win the competition. I can't say it as a sportive ness,,,,, but yes It was shown very good that the fighting between the friend (AAshique) and the competitor in him was happening. The director showed the develpment of relation between Ishaan and pari here, becoz when Pari first sang Ishaan was angry becoz he was losing. he had nothign for pari then but here he was fighting with in him self... this was the thign I liked. And I hated when Pari stopped singing , she was smiling then when she stopped it gives any one feeling like she was purposely losng competition but she said that she was thinkign of him and was feelign bad that she will leave him. It doesn't go good well along with me,
and later the scene f tsk tsk... I loved Ishaan anger thinking she lost it for him. the competitior in him was back again... and now the tsk tsk scene whhen she said she love him... it was a thing which was not acceptable to me as an avina fan. 😉 but going theough the character at that instant the expression of ishaan was good and finally the aashiq won over the sompetitor.
9.The next mornign again that competitor raised up... But Ishaan not agreeing there was what that made me give a high fi... becoz... he was awakened from hsi bubble world and came into reality then. He said that he doesn't have himmat in him. this was where I liked it becoz, there are many less people who agree their faults and his reaosning was also right, he said he need time it was agreeble becoz, if ever he marry her he will have many responsiblities for which he need money. and the money is what he does't have and which he needs... I can say that it was agreeble. So he was agreeing to take responsibiltiy but he wanna take it in a perfect way. I can't say that it was perfect or good... but I can's say it as bad and worst too. The director should have given a perfect execution there...
10. Pari running away ... good potrayal by the actress regarding breakign down... but thechain scene 😡 Is this needed? Why... why ... they are killig our avina scene here.
this reminded me of our Avina scene as Radev where Dev keeps radhikas payal with her. It may seem romantic for some one... but I didn't liked it... I was like no.. don't copy avina scene here...(Cool hari... cool... don't let the avina fan raise in u , u has many more to write. )
11. Ishaan feeling bad the he let Pari go... cvs maintained that personality of him who was a guy who do mistakes and loose the control over him in split second but realize his mistake later...I loved it. and he breaking his guitar... 😲😲😲. is it the meaning that he was losing his passion which reminds him of her did he take that Pari left him completely. There should have been more explanation by cv's to make it clear.
12. Pari scene was a bit OTT for me when she says in home like a statue... but theres no explanation there. but her bonding wiht her nani... was shown good. And later when Ishaan calls her to say that he was leaving for US. There I felt like he was saying her this becoz he expected to listen some thing from her . Other wise he said he doesn't know any thign abt her then how come he know her hosue number. It means he tried for it and he came in call wit her to losten some thign from her,. When she replied that good and all the best, he might have mis understaned that Pari was moving on in her life...
I felt that CVs gave good explanation to ari but they didn't give that to ishaan 😭 which made him like a one dimensional character.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well Here I am continuing... Sorry for the late confusion we had power cut problem here...

I am saying it after leap onwards becoz, there's nothing in between...
It starts with Adi's intro... Wow my deepu is back as Ady to rock 😳. And here we come to know he was dumb, but why I hope directors would have cared to see it. But khair chod. He was cute and naughty. , He was insulted by the boys and he questions his mother abt his dad, when she says that he left her and he never even know abt u, the expression on adi's face was truly superb. This guy loves his father a lot... may be at that time Pari realised what she did was wrong, she prayed to god that let Ishaan come into their life and thought God never listenes to her. But poor girl was wrong nded god listened her, Many of us think hat God never listens us especially youngster s when they fail in some thing... but god listens us always.
Now Adi returned India and the shot there... They mixed his return along with the Amans entry... I felt it a bit off becoz... people will be expecting ady coming to pari's house but when some other comes they will be a bit off... but ti was an indication by cv's that he was probably the man who came to take ady's place😉
Ady coming to his dost house and his dost mentioning that u were like Majnu and u still didn' forget her. Adi said he wanna forget her... but why? Did he truly become a devdas or Majnu?😲 I truly wished that they explain more abt Ishaans thoughts ...😡
But this Ishaans character is a very complex character which I loved to the most... Adi was a cute guy I loved very much, but for me the star was Ishaan, and avi who potrayed the role with very ease.

And Adi's first meet with Ishaan... should I say that it was a dreamy. (Arey chup yaar, dreamy will be between two lovers, these two are father and sn) But still it was such a cute meaning and Ishaan getting inspired by Adi... that truly stood out for me... and Yeah here Ishaan for the first time took him self as low... 😉 This Ishaan character was a slow evolution,

and next every thign was such mooth like pari saying adi that ggod will never let wrong happen and every thign... it was just as usual normal.

But thanks to cvs who showed a logical convo between pari and Ishaan, he understood every thign as soon as he saw pari. This guy truly believe her hence why he doesn't even ask her that is adi my son?

I should mention Aman though he had a minimal screen space his role was good

and Tera hua song... The other tely song whihc stood out and was able to take a place in my heart after' Har raah tere'😳

Though the cvs gave less space to Ishaan and potrayed the story as pati's story it was more of Ishaans story for me and the evloution of his character can be well observed with th equal evolution of Pari's character.
And truly to say the roles of young pari and Ishaan are the characters whhc I found to be very regular... so over all it was good,.
But wish there could have been some more good execution in direction.

And Avi indeed rocked as Ishaan ⭐️

😳 So my ratings (I used to give them in cb forum which I am giving here too)
Young Ishaan -4.5/5
Young pari-3.5/5
old ishaan-5/5
old pari-4/5
Adi-5/5

and acting ratings...
Avinash-4.5/5(Becoz my prince used only 1% of acting skills he used in CB)
shafaq-3.5/5
boy who did adi - 5/5😳😳

Edited by harianjana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Harianjana, what Pari left behind at their departing scene was not her payal, it was her chain wit locket. I am glad it was not the payal otherwise it was like copying a patented scene
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u dear... I was confused reading in WU that it was payal
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Posted: 12 years ago
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completed fully... waiting for ur 2 cents
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved yesterday's TMLS.It was wonderful to see Avinash comeback with a bang. He played the role of Ishaan very convincingly.Loved the chemistry of Ishaan & Aditya,but wasn't happy with Pari. Didn't have any feelings for Pari,even in the emotional scenes. When a person makes you cry & laugh along with him/her,it means the actor/actress has done his/her job,but with Pari I can't say that.Infact I was trying to analyse what she's doing.Loved Avinash throughout.He was fabulous as a college guy & post 8 years as a Father. The wait was worth it & I hope that soon we'll see Avinash with Rubina in a new show.
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Hari I have mix feelings. I loved seeing Avinash playing Ishaan's character but was uncomfortable seeing him doing romantic scenes with somebody else.
My impression of the story is that it was a good and Avi acted good as Ishaan and so did pari. I feel that the fault was with the director and the editor. They were unable to put the scenes in a smooth and flowing manner. Also, the way it was scripted, it demanded some questions and certain emotions were not clear.
I have seen this story 3 times now so definitely feel that Avi did his part very well. Pari failed to generate any chemistry with Avi so did not convinced me that she loved him. As a mother and sole scenes she was good but not as a lover.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

I loved yesterday's TMLS.It was wonderful to see Avinash comeback with a bang. He played the role of Ishaan very convincingly.Loved the chemistry of Ishaan & Aditya,but wasn't happy with Pari. Didn't have any feelings for Pari,even in the emotional scenes. When a person makes you cry & laugh along with him/her,it means the actor/actress has done his/her job,but with Pari I can't say that.Infact I was trying to analyse what she's doing.Loved Avinash throughout.He was fabulous as a college guy & post 8 years as a Father. The wait was worth it & I hope that soon we'll see Avinash with Rubina in a new show.<div></div>



agree wit u,the actres failed in portryng the emotns well..first f al she s not gud lookng wit avi as a pair..secndly she wasn't near avi's talent...we knw well hw we cried n laughd along wit rubi in emotnal scens..here nothng like happnd..avi alone did it n we felt only wit his words..n adi was good too..but not pari..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

I loved yesterday's TMLS😊.It was wonderful to see Avinash comeback with a bang.agree with u, our prince came back with a bang as a rock star He played the role of Ishaan very convincingly.👍🏼Loved the chemistry of Ishaan & Aditya,but wasn't happy with Pari.😉complete agree Didn't have any feelings for Pari,even in the emotional scenes.complete agree. but I had no expectations on her as I saw her acting in subh vivaah. so I doesn't feel irked. she did it better but not best. When a person makes you cry & laugh along with him/her,it means the actor/actress has done his/her job,but with Pari I can't say thathahahahah, the only scene of her that strucked me to some extent was she geting diturbed when Ishaan and ady hug each other on road. that one scene I liked it, but I should say there too may be the scren play was nice. .Infact I was trying to analyse what she's doing.😉😉😆Loved Avinash throughout.👍🏼He was fabulous as a college guy & post 8 years as a Father.👍🏼especially as a father I loved him a lot... and I wondered seeing him doing a flirty college boy role. Becoz its first time avi doing it The wait was worth it & I hope that soon we'll see Avinash with Rubina in a new show.agree...😳😳

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Originally posted by: zam123

Hari I have mix feelings👍🏼. I loved seeing Avinash playing Ishaan's character but was uncomfortable seeing him doing romantic scenes with somebody else. 😉I felt a bit off at starting but we should give him some space. he's an actor. So i controlled my self, indeed there was no more romantic scenes there. becoz the chemistry wasn't that good for me
😉My impression of the story is that it was a good 👍🏼and Avi acted good as Ishaan👍🏼 and so did pari😲. I feel that the fault was with the director and the editor.👍🏼 They were unable to put the scenes in a smooth and flowing manner.👍🏼 Also, the way it was scripted, it demanded some questions and certain emotions were not clear.👍🏼agree I felt that they should have given more screen space to ishaans character and his explanation instead of showing some unnecessary scenes of pari ... but its a one and half story so they rushed it...
I have seen this story 3 times now so definitely feel that Avi did his part very wel👍🏼Me too... and my grandmaa who always used to say why are u watching it again she too watched along with me for the sake of Ishaan-adyl. Pari failed to generate any chemistry with Avi 👍🏼😉well I expect the same from us all becoz after seeing Rubina with him as Radev, we doesn't think of any other girl having good chem with him. but basically also she failed to generate any chem with avi. Agre with it so did not convinced me that she loved him. As a mother and sole scenes she was good but not as a lover😉😆 she always did smiling only. the emotions were not that good . but I hardly saw any love track there. 😉.

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