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Kitni Mohabbat Hai..



A/N : huge huge thanks to all my buddies, who liked and commented. Your comments keep me going.. thank you😃 Keep supporting :) hope ya all like this part as well

Part One



Summary : Daljeet & Sahiba meet Ranvir & Jazz while Jazz invites the duo to her home.


Tears streamed down her face, as Sahiba stood there, watching the couple as they hugged.

There on the stage, the duo was so happy that they failed to notice the girl a few feet away.

"Mujhe laga tum mujhe propose karnewaale the!" Jazbir bit her lip.

"Oh.. toh the great Jazz, a brit citizen.. mujhse shaadi karna chahti hai?" Ranveer raised a brow.

On the other side Sahiba had enough! She wiped her tears, and she ran. She ran as fast as she could, trying to erase that memory of Ranveer & Jazbir and their mutual looks of adoration.

"Kyon Brits shadi nahi karte hai kya? And You.. tum, tumhi mujhse shaadi ki baat karoge.. first you will ask- okay?"

Ranveer laughed, enjoying her discomfort. Oh he loved how her cheeks turn faintly pink when he was around..

"Acha baba.. maan liya! Chalein?" he offered her an arm & together they walked out.

~ Outside the mall


Someone caught Sahiba by her arm & pulled her back.

"Sahiba ji.. Kya hua? Aap ithni udaas hai.. Kyon?"

It was Daljeet. She knew it. Fresh tears leaked from her eyes.

"Kuchh nahi.. woh -" she tried to lie.

"Boliye toh kya hua?" Daljeet was so persistent. But his voice was sweet, almost laced with concern and.. something else she couldn't point. Was it love?

She shook her head. She was being so lovesick these days. After what happened inside, she was feeling so lonely.

"Rani mausi nahi mili kya?" Daljeet began in a slow tone, "koi baat nahi! Hum kahi aur, kaise bhi karke- "

Sahiba sobbed hard, "Rani mausi kabhi nahi milegi! Kabhi nahi... "

Daljeet was shocked, "sahiba ji kya-"

He couldn't continue his sentence as Sahiba engulfed him in a tight hug & sobbed into his chest.

"Yeh sab ki horaha hai mere saat? Kyon Daljeet Ji.. Kyoun!"

He patted her back, feeling hot tears in his eyes. She was so weak, he couldn't see her this way! And heck he couldn't even ask the reason, what if she became even sad?

"Sab theek hojayega Sahiba ji.. don't worry!"

Sahiba hated herself. She had enough. She ditched her parents, lied to a gentleman like Daljeet Ji, fooled everyone.. did everything for Ranveer! And he.. he left her!

Oh she deserved this for hurting so many people for him. She deserved it for betraying Papa Ji, for telling lies to Daljeet Ji..

"Its okay! Calm down sahiba ji.. aap akeli nahi ho Ji.. Rab ji toh hai aapke saath! Humesha hai.. aur main hoon.. " Daljeet was trying to calm her down. He needed to do something to cheer her up. An idea struck him.

"Aap yahan baithiye.. Main aapkeliye ice-cream leke aata hoon! Okay.. phir hum gurudwara jaasakte hai.. yahi bench pe bait jayiye."

Sahiba wiped her tears and released him, before she could say anything. He ran towards the ice-cream shop on the other side of the road.

~

Ranveer & Jazz stepped out of the mall when the latter demanded for an ice-cream.

"Oh rehne de madam, apne paas pounds hai pounds.. haan, meri kamaai se khilaadoon aapko? Kyoun.. "

Ranveer smiled as he held Jazz's purse, stopping her from taking out her money.

"Mera treat.. Okay?"

Jazz smiled, "okay.. parking area pahunch jaana, main wahi rahoongi.. "

"Rab ne sab kuch diya.. paise hai, pyar hai.. bas ek cheez baaki hai.. " he whispered.

"Kya?"

"Sahiba se maafi maangna.. I hope ki woh samjh jaye.. jo bachpan ki dosti aur apnepan ko hum pyar maan rahe hai.. woh pyar nahi hai.. hume usse milna hi hoga.. Usi ne toh milaya hai hume.. "

"Main tumhare saat rahoongi Ranveer! And I'm sure woh samajh jayegi.. " her smile dropped a bit, "I wish woh maan jaye.. "


~

With that Ranveer turned around. His eyes widened at what stood there a few feet away from him. The thoughts of ice-cream vanished & he ran to her.

"Sahiba!"

Sahiba took a deep breath. That voice, the last thing on her list was to face Ranveer, yet he was here, calling her name!

"Sahiba.. "

She quickly wiped her tears, "oh Kutte tum? Milgaya tujhe tera pyar?"

Ranveer's smile dropped, he paused mid way, trying to hug her. Did she saw him earlier? Wasn't she surprised to see him?

"Kya .. " he asked in a low voice.

"Wohi.. London?"

"Haan.. sahiba.. milgaya, mujhe mera Pyar!"

Ranveer didn't know what to speak. He still couldn't believe, she was there.. talking to him.

"Tum.. yaha? Kaise.. aakhein taras rahi thi tujhe dekhne.. Tu toh meri bachpan ki yar hai! Teri ithni yaad aayi.. ithni yaad aayi-"

Sahiba gulped, she wouldn't break.. not in front of him.

"Mujhe bhi teri yaad aayi.. "

He smiled.

"Bahut si baatein hai.. tum yahan? Akeli ho kya- matlab.. "

"Mere husband ke saat aayi thi.. "

Ranveer choked at her words.

"Tum ne shaadi karli?!" he was shell shocked.

"Woh rahe.. humare woh- " she pointed towards Daljeet, silently praying RabJi that Ranveer must not ask any more questions.

"oh.. I'm happy for u.. hmm.. toh.. " he dint know what to say, "kal tum.. kahi milogi mujhse? If ur husband is okay with that? I mean.. Hum dost hai right?"

Sahiba laughed loudly, "dost, haan!"

Daljeet on the other side began to cross the road with two ice-creams in his hand.
Jazz too approached Ranveer, just to check on him.


"Sahiba... ?" Jazz looked at Ranveer and then at the lanky girl who was dressed in typical punjabi attire. She must admit though the girl looked pretty.

Sahiba nodded.

"Yeh log kaun hai Sahiba Ji?" Daljeet piped in.

"Dost.. " was her meek reply.


"Uh.. Hi, mera naam Jazbir hai and this is Ranveer .. Sahiba is like a best friend to us.. so.. " Jazz began awkwardly.

Daljeet glanced at the duo and then at Sahiba, who looked sullen.

"Nice to meet you Ji.. Par Sahiba ji ki tabiyat kharab hai.. If u don't mind hume chalna chahiye.." he finished for Sahiba.


Jazz smiled, "that's okay.. Aap dono kya kal mere yahan dinner karenge? Plzz.. "

Sahiba nodded. Daljeet called a taxi & they left quickly.


*Daljeet's home*


Sahiba plopped onto the bed, wiping her tears that seemed to be unstoppable.

Daljeet handed her a glass of water & a tissue.

"Ek baat kahoon Sahiba Ji.. aapne kabhi mujhe nahi bataya ki London mein aapke dost hai! I mean woh toh personal hai par.. main aapko udaas nahi dekh sakta Ji.. Koi baat ho, toh aap mere saat share kar sakti hai.. "

Someone knocked on the door, Daljeet answered, thinking it might be Chacha Ji.

"I'm sorry. peecha toh karna hi tha na.. Shayad aap logon se dobara milna mumkin nahi hota.. Kal main aapkeliye gaadi bhejungi.. Aap plzz mere ghar aana! Its my sincere request.. aage aapki marzi.. " Jazz smiled as she handed him a boquet, "this is for Sahiba Ji.. can u plzz-"

"Ya sure.. thank you. "

Jazz left with a smile & Daleet closed the door.

Sahiba grabbed the beautiful boquet of roses & threw them into garbage bin in anger.

Daljeet was confused.

~

Hope ya guys liked this.


Next part :


Sahiba was roaming in Jazz's home, what seemed like a huge palace.
She stepped into the library, her eyes immediately falling on to the dairy lying on one of the tables.
The title was crisp & clear, it said, "Journey of our Love."
She flipped a page & there was a signature 'Jazbir Pal Singh'.



Edited by Priyamvada - 13 years ago
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