Hi Folks,
I have observed that the series has taken a dive since the Park Road Raaz was revealed. I think the writers really did not have a clue as to what it should have been. Come on !!! Bani cannot blame Jai if he was at the wheel of a car that killed her mother. He did not do it intentionally, it was just an accident. He did not know her mother. It could have been anybody for that matter.
This is what the Raaz should have been........Read on
About 10-12 years ago Jai and Roshni are dating. Jai is in love with Roshni and she is young chick just playing games with him which has always been her nature. He is serious in his relationship with her, but for her its just another thing to do. She flirts with other men in front of jai just to get him mad and all worked up. This is thrilling and exciting for her. She dances and shows affection to other men at parties in front of Jai. At other times she tells him that he is the one for her and would like to marry him some day. Jai makes numerous marriage proposals to her but she declines all of them. She says that she wants to have fun before she settles down with Jai.
This goes on and on. Jai is not able to break away from her . When he is ready to do that she gets him back telling him how much she loves him and would like to spend the rest of her life with him. Just has Jai exactly where she wants him.
During one of her flirtations, Roshni meets up with an older man who is having trouble in his marriage. Roshni is not aware that he is married. She flirts with him just to make Jai jealous. But this time it goes a bit too far. She starts spending time with him at the Park Hotel. One day jai catches her coming out of a hotel room with this man. Roshni denies anything serious with the man and gives Jai her usual confession of her love only towards him. Jai and Roshni have a physical relationship all this time.
The second time Jai catches Roshni with this man in the Hotel, he gets very mad and decided to investigate who he is. So he follows him to his house in Mt Abu. While making enquiries he comes to know that his name is Nisshikant Dixit, married with 3 daughters. He tells Roshni this, but she refuses to believe him and continues the relationship. To get revenge and stop Roshni from this affair, Jai decides to tell Nishikant's wife about her husband's affair. At first she does not believe it but she notices some signs that gets suspicious.
She talks to jai and he tells her that he can give her the proof. He tells her the hotel (PARK)and room number where her husband and his lover(Roshni) could be found.
One Rainy night Nishikant's wife decides to visit the hotel. Roshni and nishikant are in the room. Jai is at the bar drinking and feeling sorry for himself. On one hand he wants Roshni. He remembers spending the night with her just a week back and now he knows that she is spending the night with another man.
He notices Nishikant's wife going up the stairs to the room where her husband is spending time with Roshni. He sees her knock on the door. The door opens and the woman goes in. He can hear loud voices coming from the room. Then he sees Nishikant's wife run down the stairs in tears, followed shortly by Nishikant adjusting his clothing. Then comes Roshni from the room. She notices Jai at the bar. She pulls him out and frantically asks him to leave with her. She is scared and upset. She says to jai that she is sorry and did not believe him when her told her that the man was married. They go towards Jai's car and get into it. All this while they are arguing with each other. Jai scolding her and she saying how sorry she is. They drive away form the hotel. jai is not paying attention to his driving as he and Roshni are yelling and screaming at each other. Suddenly, the car hits something. Jai gets out of the car and notices the lifeless body of a woman. On further scrutiny he sees that it is the body of Nishikant's wife. they panic. While deciding what to do, Nishikant comes to the scene. Seeing his wife's body he breaks down. She is taken to the hospital where she is pronounced dead. Nishikant is very upset and blames himself for his wife's death and not being able to handle it takes up drinking. Jai feels responsible for the death as he was the one who told her that her husband was having an affair. roshni for the first time sees the result of her game. All three are shattered and feel guilty.
Nishikant returns to Mt. Abu to his daughters. Roshni leaves the country and does not return for years. Jai in the mean time tries to understand his role in all that has happened. He tries to help Nishikant cope with the past by giving him money to survive and promises him that he will take care of his girls if anything happens to him.
Well how is the Raaz so far??? Does it make it more dramatic and sensible? This way they have something more logical. The story can be continued with Roshni actually having a child. The suspense is nobody know whose child it is. Jai believes it is his(with Roshni). But in actuality it is Nishikant's. They can do so much with this story line.
Well, This is just my thought!!!!
Anupamaa
