NEW FF: HUMSAFAR character skech

Ok so now I m ready for ur tomatos, chapals, and ur shocking reactions towards my first FF. I know lots of very very gud writers in here say they r the worst one but to be honest they are amazing writers and I don't know how they comes up with the stories, characters, scenes and dialougs . hats off to u all the writers. And ya m not a gud writer I cant even write an essay so an FF is door ki baat. But I still tried it because I belive in that ( If u don't try something then u will not get the success ) so here I m trying writing an FF based on hindi movie (AUR PIYAR HOGAYA) BUT BUT I have made lots of differens to the characters

So here I will post the prologue first:

a story of manyata who travels to Switzerland from india to see and check out the person who has been selected by her father for her marriage. But but destiny has another plans in store for her which she has to face it and accept it. SO would she will find her true humsafar in switzerland or not. is he goign to be a perfect humsafar for her or not.

M: 21 YEAR OLD, fun loving, friendly, honest, stubborn and head strong girl , who lives with her grandma and her dad she is the only daughter of the kapoors family therefor she is a bit spoiled by her grandma who loves her the most and completes her every wish, she spend her dads money like water on her friends, she is graduated and has come of age to get married, but she is not in rush to get marry to any one whom she doesn't know really well and believes in knowing the person before getting married to

him.

UV: 22 year old, a good human being, a good boy who doesn't drink, smokes, go to pups and casinos. He lives in Switzerland and has a garment business. (which is going really well)

M's DAD Kailashnath kapoor: M dad is a serious type of person who doesn't talks that much and only talks when it is necessary. He also likes her daughter M but he doesn't likes her one habit that she is a headstrong and stubborn girl.

Great Idea Dewa I'm sure you will do a great job

dewa why are you worried so much and giving so many explanations believe in your work and everyone else will please don't think u are bad at writing everyone improves with time and everyone has there own strengths and weakness so don't worry now enough of my lecture and philosophy class coming to the update or i must say prologue it was really nice i loved it i am really looking forward to read this FF please update soon and pm me if possible😃

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Great Idea Dewa I'm sure you will do a great job

Sounds very interesting do post character sketch and 1st part looking forward to it.. luv the title of ur ff

Cont Soon

gr8 title cont soon dear :)

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

dewa why are you worried so much and giving so many explanations believe in your work and everyone else will please don't think u are bad at writing everyone improves with time and everyone has there own strengths and weakness so don't worry now enough of my lecture and philosophy class coming to the update or i must say prologue it was really nice i loved it i am really looking forward to read this FF please update soon and pm me if possible😃

Originally posted by: DAPS

thankxxx anam di

i was so sacred when i saw that u commented and i was like lets see whats ur reaction gud or bad

@ anam thanks di

ohhh dont worry dear

First of all Dewa believe in urself n b tension free dont worry at all cuz u'll b ok... jst as u said if u'll not try something thn u'll not get the success so u try from ur side n everything else will b alright... from the prologue which u hve so far written i can say ur not a bad writer so dont say that... it was nicely written n sounds interesting.. so continue soon lookin forward to character sketch & part1..
thnx for the pm😊