Yeh Ishq Hai Ya Dard(Part 7,8 page 9,10)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Iam silent reader of all the ff written from long time iam also wishing to write but i dont have experience at writing but last week i saw a movie and feel to pen it down so i need ur help i dont know it will be a ss r ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Prologue

Its a traingular love story of Arjun Arohi n Prem
Arjun is an orphan n artist
arohi is eye of her family and lives with her father mother n her dj she is the only child
Prem son of a multi millionarie but doesnt like that way so he wants to live simple so he plays guitar in local pub he is the only child n mother expired in his childhood but he is like his mother

The story is how this three lifes get changed when arjun n Prem meet arohi n main thing is how one sacrifices love n one sacrifes his life for each other with out knowing each other




Spare with my mistakes this is the first time ever iam writing if any of ur intrested plz tell so that i can continue if i will stop it here
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nic prologue dear...eagerly waiting for the update!!!!😳 dont forget to pm me!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sreeja_rox

nic prologue dear...eagerly waiting for the update!!!!😳 dont forget to pm me!!!😊


tnx for the reply i will sure pm wen i update may be tommorow
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Originally posted by: Karnika4ever


tnx for the reply i will sure pm wen i update may be tommorow

wow...that's great news...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely intro...
please do start writing we all love reading ffs/ss on Arjun-Arohi...
And ya do add me to your pm list...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 1
Prem Is standing near his bike waiting for someone then comes a charted plane n an elderly person gets down prem calls him Mr.daddy its the way he calls his father n goes n hugs him he mr.rudra verma one of the top industralist in india n having his business all over world he observes his son n ask a cigarrete n prem gives it to him n both proceeds to their house which they use only when rudra visits him bcoz prem stays in a small rented house n even he dont take any financial help frm his father on the way rudra tells prem i was just testing that u quit smoking r not but u didnt n prem says i want to confess one thing to u that recently he started drinking bear rudra tells him dont drink too much it will spoil ur life mean while they enter in to their mansion located on the beach side. Father n son in the lawn n rudra asks y r u doing this by staying on ur own do u even know thae share value of ur company its above 800 crores n ur working in a pub playing guitar then prem replies dad i like my life this way i cant even imagine that iam rich rudra tells him that all my frens are wat r u doing wat should i tell them that ur playing guitar in a pub then prem tells him that iam playing guitar for my pocket money n rudra tells him that u can buy that pub with ur pocket money but prem denies their convo ends rudra was ready to go then prem asks him dad can u give me 50000 rupees just to make his father happy rudra immediately comes to him n tells that he is waiting for this day from many years n this is a cause of celebration n asks to get him a bear n both start drinking n rudra tells premm ur just like ur mom she is also same like u wants to be simple this is wat i loved in her that wen my journey started and iam here now at this position she is not with me but she left u as her sign she is my angel in my life savita is my angel u will also come across a girl n u feel she is ur angel n u feel that u cant live with out her n u feel u can die for her that day will change ur life.Next day rudra leaves n prem goes to his rented house.
In Play ground kids r playing football while playing the ball goes on the road kids watch a girl in white chudidar walking they smile n call arohi di please pass the ball but she doesnt pass the ball so all kids at a time start calling arohis name as if thay r chearing her she turns back n gets ready to kick at the same time comes her father sudhir alluwalia he is Sub Inspecter of Police a honest one indeed hands over her hall ticket n asks her going to exam n u forget ht at home n asks her is she afraid of exams then arohi answers him that she is not bcoz she studied well n they both r ready to leave but arohi turns back n kicks the foot ball hard towards the ground but its goes n hits a person who is passing on his bike n he falls down n helmet falls down n its prem on the bike arohi watches this n start to walk fast prem calls her frm back but she doesnt turn back but he fell in love with her at first sight bcoz of her innocence n fun loving nature n everything he also leaves n goes to pco to make call to rudra n he calls but he doesnt lift the phone so he calls on office land thinking he might be in meeting operator attends the call n he asks to connect rudra but operator says tht he busy in meeting so he tells the operaotor this is rearding his son imeediately operator asks is this abt prem sir then he says yes n he is dead operator hearing this immediately connects to rudra n prem talks to rudra n tells him that he met his angel n she is same like mom infact more beautiful than mom then rudra tell prem to hold on then he asks his father is he jealous rudra laughs at says that he is happy for him and asks her name but he says he dont know her name
Two months Later
arohi's house she is sleeping phone rings and she picks up and hear i love you from other side n she asks arjun u tell me this every morning so tell me some thing new so he asks her that promise me u love me like this way forever n never allow any one in ur life arohi teasingly says sorry i will not promise so arjun shouts from other side i want to see u know but arohi says she wants to sleep but he says if u will not come i will die so arohi says so my life will change in just 5 minutes so arjun asks wat do u mean by that she answers how much time u want to die arjun cuts the phone n arohi is thinking ways to manofy arjun


precap

Arohi shouting Arjun's name
Arohi in complete blood fighting for her life
I want to tell u before first few chapters it will be more about Prem N Arohi But not of Arjun n Arohi So i think plz u have to tolerate me
Edited by Karnika4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice beginning dear
do continue soon
pm me too
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start...

pls do pm me wen u update again...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pls cont dear n its ok if the 1st few chp r on aru n prem
bt end me heroine humaare hero(arjun) ki hi honi chahiye😳

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