MN.NEW..PARICHEY...CHP24 LTH#2 at Index Pg 1 - Page 73

Originally posted by: shobhakaimal

Lovely update. Continue soon.

thanku
will update ASAP

Originally posted by: ...angel...

nice update
thnx 4 d pm

thanks alot

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Loved this part loads dii...
MN were too cute here, be it with their fights or lil romance...I loved the way they wr here...
Loved it loads..
Cont soon...

And Happy Eid-Ul-Fitr dii...hope to get all the happiness and success on this holy occasion..*hugs**

thanks alot dear
glad ur enjoying it
lol...loved u liked them..
will cont ASAP..tumhain tu pata hai eid hai

hey

Eid mubarak to u to...hope u have lovely days ahead...hugs 3 times😉

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

beautiful update

mayur's first fight hehe

now waiting 4 the holiday plan

thanks alot dear
ya there first fight

Originally posted by: Irum.

I think both have realized and felt wt is lacking in their marital relation.It is bothering them and creating insecurities.It ws their first fight after marriage.Hope it wil help them to take next step towards their marital relation.

im i kinda disagree with that..maybe gestures are msiing yet the step is far in consideration in both of them POV...
hopes so

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

Superb update

Loved mayur roothna-maana n their talk...So cute

And mayank confessed that he is falling in love with her...GOOD GOOD

thanks alot dear
glad u liked it n enjoyed it
thankuuu

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

beautiful update fiza ./
i loughed out loud when he said YE KAYAMATH K NISHANI HAI
hahaha seemsall over d world muslims have tendancy of saying so ...

fab update

thanks alot dear
lolz...han hum sab kuch addatein same to same hain

thnku

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

wow Fiza...i really liked this update...this was so realistic...

P.S sorry my like button isnt working

thanks alot dear

thanku for calling it realistic

its oky kisi k bhi nhi chal raha tha ab chala hai

Originally posted by: drmaha

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its just an awsome update ...

i hate that diya...how disgusting she is...

but the mayanak defend for nupur ita amazing...

love it... :)

thanks dear
lol...relax...us k itna hi role tha

glad u liked it

Originally posted by: shafyyy

nice part

thanks alot

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update..

loved it lodsss

loved it to d coreee...

uff!!! yeh aurat!!! arhhh..let her be ab adat ho gayi ase logo ki...HUH!

hayeee...wht was that!!!

hain nah ab tu addat hojani chay woh kuch achsa keray tu baat hai

apne meri WWU ki Diya api ka kya haal ban diya...😆

bt god!! she was so mean!! himmat toh dekho 3more chances my foot!! uski toh!! arhhh
lol..woh behan thi yaha woh chance per thi...😉

bt i loved d way Nupur answered back!!

waise ohh-ooo someone was jealous!!! n behaving like a Wifey!! hmm...😉

Awww...i loved d teasing part...

waise han ase koi kahega toh bura toh lagega hi na biwi hain woh toh khyal toh rakhegi na waise accha maja chakhaya bechare ko..😆

awww...bechara mera MAyank...he was cute!! bechare ko bhook lagi hain n deko toh chai nhi mili toh kuch bhi nhi khaya...awww

OMG!!!!!!! loved d way MAyank answered dat Diya...n awww Samrat watching them was utterly Adorable...😍

glad u liked it..us k andar ki biwi ko jaga diya ksis ny ab ty yeah hona tha nah
kyun bola yeah sav gaalt timing per..
gladu liked it,..
they are cute na SaUr..i always loved then

loved it sooo much!😳

loved Gunjan n Samrat convo too...n awww

loved MAyank-Samrat convo a lottt!!!!

so kisi ko apni biwi sabji wale se gawana gawara nhi wah wah! 🤣

loved it sooo very much!

m sure they r gonna enjoy der weekend!

loved it lodsss

love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

thanks alot dear for liking
hope u all too enjoy there weekend

Hello Guys

Sorry but couldn't fulfilled my promise to unfold a mystery' yet will try in this week'

This week maybe a delay update due to Eid'

Rplyd to u all

WISHING U A VERY HAPPY EID DAY, WITH ALMIGHTY 'S ALL BLESSINGS..

Chapter: 21

Past:

It was the evening when all of the have decided to go to the cinema for spending sumtime together ..mayank even said yes and said as soon as he will cum they will leave..

Samrat: yeah mayank kaha hai yaar….

Nupur: pata nhi…kam mein behass gaya shayd…mein call ker k dekho…

Gunjan: shabssh poch tu asay rahi hoo jasay apny nhi kisi aur k shoor ko phone ker rahi hoo aray pocho nah….

Before she can dial his no…his call came..

Nupur: aur us k agaya….hello ..mayank kaha hoo

Mayank: im sorry nupur.. mein nhi ap pao ga …. I am really sorry… yaha ek masala gaya hai ..mera wait maat kero tum log…tum log jao… mein try kerta hoon k beech se join kerlo tum logo go…sorry..

He was pretty upset with it as it was right they haven't spened any good time together from so long, and he was hating neglecting her, he had done all to gave her whole time od his, yet this lat min trouble made him so irritated..

Disappointment was so clear in his voice, and she knew he was…so not make things worse for him

Nupur: its okay..tum kam dekho…

Mayank: per tum bhi jana thik hai..mein join kerta hoo I ll try ….sorry

Nupur: mayankk..its oky… AH…

Shilpa: kya hua phir nhi araha hai yea..aur tum …tu datat nhi laga sakti usko

Nupur: choti maa woh asakta tu aja ta….ek kam kero tum dono jao…woh kah raah hai k ajay ga..tum hum tum dono ko beech se join kertay hain

Gunjan: aray tu tum tu chalo nah

Nupur: nhi na mein us k sath ajao gi…pakka tum log jao…go now…

Samrat: fine…

They went away and nupur got involve in her daily routine…. She didn't went with them not to spoil there quality time, and they will be so engrossed in eacth other that she will stt missing him terrible so its better to stay and wait for him….

He came home in evening though much earlier than he was usually cumig…and found the house empty…he sigh this wasn't good…he lost a moment to spend good time with her…..but he will make it.. just than a galss of water appears in front of him and he looked at her stunt who was standing there with a smile…

Mayank: tum gai kyun nhi..nupur yeah galta baat hai nah..sigh…meri wajha se tum bhi ghar mein hi band hogai ho

Nupur: aray tu is mein kya hai… its oky..aur mjhy acha nhi laga un dono k time spoil kerna…

Mayank: han mein tu already humara kerchuka hoon…

Nupur: she chuckled at his cute pout and irritation…its oky mayank..is mein kya bari baat hai…khabi baad mein chaly jay ga….

Mayank: no…he mailed and turned to her.. ek kam kero… mein half n hr ki nap layta hoon..jab tak tum ready ho phir hum dinner kerny bahar chalty hain….

Nupur: aray its okay tm thak way hoo

Mayank: yeah mein tah kero ga k mein thaka wa hoon k nhi…chalo utho..

Shilpa: bulkily…chao..lay kero jao meri bahu ko…had hai kayal hi nhi hai tumhain…

Mayank: addab … aur pls ap mjhy aur n guilty feel keray .. I know mein time nhi day raha …aur ab ap daat ker mera time nhi zayda kero phir kaho ki mein sogaya aur apki bahu ko kahin lay kern hi gaya…he went up to his room to have a quick nap …

As she reached her room she chuckled knowing he slept so he slept…he wont be able to wakeup in an hr..and even she donot want to..he was tied pretty much..and she has no issues with it..the time they were spending with each other maybe wasn't to much…but its was sure the quality time they can ever ask for…

It was an hr when nupur was reading a book n alarm rung and she turn around in surprise…mayank put an alarm and on first buzz he woke up.. is he was so serious…

Mayank: asay kya dekh rahi hoo..abhi tak tiyar nhi hoi…chalo utho taiyar ho…pass ek cup chai pila do..mjhy buhat sooti arahi hai..eh stretch his arms n yawn… mein shower layany jaraha hoo… jab tak ap bhi taiyar hojay..wifey..he patted her cheek n left her dam excited…

It has always been fun going out with him but today they will be going as a couple, it seems be like there frst date.. chuckling with her thought ..she hited her head wit hand and went to bring out her dress and his…. Got ready..adn went down to make him sum tea…

He came inside in kitchen getting ready in record quickest time every he has…and saw sumthing new, sumthing tht he has nevr seen, Nupur putting efforts in dressing up was so sumthing that amaze his heart with so much pleasure… and left him in daze..the added part was that she did it all as his wife…as his…for him….he didn't know right now what he is feeling he was lost in all this…so much tht he even didn't realize tht she is calling her..

She can feel his presence behind him and turn to look at him and get back swallowing a lump.. the intensity with wch he was scrutinizing her was making her dam nervous…and making her heart beat with triple speed and tht ultimately cause the blush to crept on her cheeks making him more crazy…

Nupur: kya baat hai mayank aj tu tum itni jadli ready hogay..wah..

She was just talking seems like to walls..he was no over here..all in her..

Nupur: yeah lo chai pee lo aram se buhat garm hai…. Mayank… mayank…

Mayank: han…

Nupur: chai…

He look at her with a smile and corss his arms around his chest..

Mayank: wht u have done to urself… he asked with the same smile..

Dam..this is wht is bad about getting married to ur best frnd…u cant hide the slightest new thing u have done..the little effort she has put in getting ready was caught thought she prayed sumwhere to get escape form it…she herself don't know all of sudden why she wants to look perfect when she is beside him in public, she want everyone to look at them as the perfect couple..

Nupur: kuch nhi..woh bus..

Mayank: bus??...

Nupur: asay hi.. tum itna time lay rahy thy tu mein ny socha thora taiyar hojao…tum chai tu piyo….

Mayank: he took and …acha socha… wasy bhi green mein tum hamehsa achi lagti hoo… but aj kuch alag hai..

Nupur: nhi..err..kuch alag nhi hai…

Taking the last sip, he placed the cup aside….

Mayank: hmm..kuch alag nhi hai…acha…. He lean to her looking strt in her eyes…Some one is looking quite beautiful..n slightly rub his thumb on her cheek… mein car mein wait ker raha hoo..

Saying so he left leaving a completely lost nupur to get her self back on position… she just couldn't do any thing smile more widely and touch the blush he has just pointed out… and rush not make her husband wait more.. she has suddenly start look forward to the night ahead…

Moving towards the unknown destination he look the person beside him who was smiling and look out the window…

Mayank: tu kaha jana hai khatoon-e-khahna ( the lady of the house)..he said quite dramatically and she burst in to laughter n he to join her,..

Nupur: had hai mayank… khatoon-e-khahna….kitna bahri baharkam naam hai…(such a heavy name)…

Mayank: chukled..acha bolo kaha jana hai….

Nupur: mjhy kya pata..hamesha tum hi decide kerty aj bhi tum kero…

Mayank: nhi..yeah har bara tension mein kyun lo….chalo batao aj tum decide kero… n pls hum pehly kahin ghomny nhi jarahy hain…mjhy buhat bhook lagi hai…

Nupur: tumhara naam na bhokay miya hona chaiy tha… ktini bhook lagti hai har waqt…

Mayank: how mean… waps liya mein ny ap k naam… shohor ki koi fikar nhi hai…

Nupur: hmm.. yeah tu kafi problem hai.. koi asai jaga jaha hum dono ki pasand k khana milta hoo…

Mayank: aur woh definitely aj mall k food court nhi hosakta ..hum yeah risk nhi lay sakty… aj pata chal koi humara hi mazak ur raha hoo…

Nupur: kyun tumhara irda koi us ki ki harakat k hai had hai

Mayank: kis kism ki harakat k….

Nupur: china town chalty hain… Chinese tumahin kafi pasand hai aur mein bhi kah layti hon..

She completely change the topic as she knew today he is pretty much in mood to trap her in her own words…and tht so so mischievously mayank let it go knowing he is nt inviting to much of teasing neither awkwardness.. he wants to have the best the time he can…

Mayank: thik hai…

The evening went more than just superbly..strting from the point he park his car in plaza , the way he hold her hand till they were seated, to there little sweet talks on the dinner table..to the most perfect moment as the pay the bill and stod up…

It was as the roof top they took the seat, so the moment the slip in elevator it was a bit crowded, not to much to his pleasure…already he can pretty well see the way people look at his wife, and now this dam irritating crowd… he pulled her from her arm and made her stand the other side, so tht she not even by chance get touched to anyone…making her go red with the closeness they were sharing ……….. to her surprise as soon as the elevator touch the ground floor, he slips his hand around her waist and held her close to himself…

She looked up to him who has a slight frown , it was weekend so the place being quite popular was over crowded and he has to be protectively make way for her to safely came out..

She loved the feeling of being so close to him..in his protectiveness and to add the way he was looking all around making way for her..his care his protectiveness has always been there but what has added is the possessiveness he is holding for her… the way he was holding her as close as possible, not even letting her go a sec, making it quite clear to evey one dont u dare came near my wife was such an amzing feeling…it was so peaceful…felling that now she has nothing to worry in her life..just to enjoy the life with him so close to her…

With her daze feeling they came to the parking area and she sat down…driving through the busy roads.. sumwhere she want to demand sumthing…

Nupur: mjhy beech jana hai…

Mayank: nhi lay ker jao ga…. He mimic her rhythmic tone…

Nupur: tumahry tu achy bhi lay ker jay gay…

Mayank: nhi tumahin meray boray k sath jana hoga…

Nupur: mayankkk…

Mayank: nupurrr……

Nupur: chalo nah plsss…

Mayank: nupur kitny sall hogay Karachi mein rehty… yeah rasta kaha jata hai dear…

Nupur: okay…tu seedhy seedhy bolo nah….

Walking on the beech has been her favorite thing yet it was perfect sumhow…

Mayank: aj inti khamsohi kyun hai….

Nupur: asay hi…. Tumhara project kab floor per jay ga…

Mayank: pass thoray din aur… phir kam start hojay ga… aur phir chuti…

Nupur: kyun chuti…kam nhi hai kya…

Mayank: yaar phir tu sab kam hochuka hoga nah… phir itna ni hai kam..jitna aj kal hai..aur apky bhai sehbab…aj tu daat paray gi us ko tai jaan se mein nhi bacha sakta..

Nupur: kyun kya hua…

Mayank: nupur woh thora tu serious ho…. Mein manta hoo nai nai shadi hoi hai us k dil hai time spend kerny k gunjan k sath tu aleast office hrs mein lag ker kam kerly…. Aj tumahin pata ahi woh ek meeting per pocha hi nhi.. yeah kah diya he isn't well…. Tai jaan ny ghar phone kiya ami ny bata diya k woh tu cinema ja raha hai…. Bus ab tum dekho kal us ki class hogi..

Nupur: tum Samrat ko samhjo nah… had kerta hai…

Mayank: nhi mein soch raha hoo ab k gunjan se baat kero woh zayda samhjdar hai …NUPUR…

He pulled her closed to him self and turned around hugging her with his arms… a biker who was having fun by pass them extremely near, if mayank wouldn't have turn her around she might got hurt….

Mayank: wht the… ur okay nupur…. He look down keenly at her…. She just nooded in yes… her hands were still resting in his chest n his on her shoulder….knowing she get scared pretty easily he wasn't satisfied with just a nod.. he cuped his face with one hand the other was still holding her from waist.. and asked again yet she whispered yes again…still not satisfied he

Placing his finger under her chin he made her look up.. it was a terrible bad idea he thought or it was the best .. the moment her eyes meet his, all the feeling she was having from so many days and today making them more ignited …….. right infront of him… there were so many things than just trust in them.. they were dreams, faith …faith of seeking perfection with him…dreams of holding this and many more moments ahead weaving them…. For him it was the best sight he can evr ask for..all the little bit apprehensions in his heart that maybe he is moving to fast disappeared in thin air.. he felt so content just looking in them.. and pretty well knew his eyes are convey much more than she has every thought….he slight brushed his fingers on her cheek..making him shuddered under his touch

Boys: wohooo love birds…..

The comment that the young boys bypassing on bikes gave them made them move bit away and cum to earth from heaven…. He looked every where and her and than he didn't know wht to say or do.. she has turn her face to face see to avoid the sight of him.. she was already blushing like any thing….

Mayank: chalo,.. its …….late .now….i think humain chalna chaiy..

Nupur:: han…

Reaching home they found Samrat aur gunjan waiting for them….they enter the home chuckling on sumthing.. finally getting sink in the feeling they have just experience…and Samrat raise his eyebrows..

Samrat: aay aay… apki tu office mein meeting thi…

Mayank: ji thi… kam kerta hoon apki tarah nhi meeting chor ker agay…had kerty hoo Samrat..

Gunjan: oh heloo…abhi apki class hogi… agar tum dono ko DATE per hi jana tha woh bhi akelay tu wasy hi kah day ..hum kaun sa mana kerny waly thy…

Samrat: batao zara hum soch rahy hain tum log ab aay tab aay….

Gunjan: Samrat humari fault hai humain samjhna chaiy tha..akhir they also need to spend quality time…

For the first time mayank was loss of word,,indeed he was looking to spend quality time with her, and the evening has turned out to be more than just quality time… it has given them moments of life time…. he touched his forehead trying to hide his smile….

Samrat was sumwhere extremely pleasantly surprise to see such an expression on mayank's face.. he sems to be actually caught..red handedly.. he was OMG a bit blushing… he looked to his sister and wht her eyes showed was amzing….

Samrat: acha thik hai..thik hai jao maf kiya…. Mein tu thak gaya ho..Good nite…

Mayank: sigh thank god Samrat speared him…han maybe Good nite….

Gunjan came in her room finidng her husband smiling lost in his thoughts…and came and hugged him from back placing his chin on his shoulder…

Gunjan: kya baat hai miya ji… itna kyun muskura rahy hoo…

Samrat: gunjan tum ny aj nupur ko dekha tha….

Gunjan: han…kyun…wasy mjhy tu mayank ki shakal dkehny mein zayda maza araha tha..pehly bar us ki botli band

Samrat: nupur ki ankhon mein wohi wali khushi thi jo mein hamesha se dekhna chahta tha… kuch khawab jasay… us ki ankhon mein be fikar khsuhi thi gunjan bullkil bifikar khushi….. she seems to be like..like

Gunjan: like in love….

Samrat: he looked at her.. haan..n smiled…

Gunjan: behan ko tu dekh liya bhai ko nhi dekha… uski ankhon mein bhi wohi wali khushi thi Samrat… I told u..woh apna rasta bana lay ga… so unhony bana liya…. Bus is baaat k ehsaa undono ko bhi hojay… tu sab perfect hai…..

Pyar tu woh apni dost se buhat kerta tha… aj biwi se bhi kernay laga… aur jatny bhi laga hai

Samrat: n I m so happy….so so happy…

Present:

Samrat: kya matlab

Mayank: teri behan tujhy yaad ker rahi hai…mil lay us se aker..

Samrat: han mein ata hoon….foran ata hoon…

Gunjan: kya hua….

Samrat: pata nhi ek tu aj kal yeah mayank mjhy bulkily samhj nhi ata..khuda khir kery us ki awaz zaroroat se zayda pursukoon ( at peace) thi..kahta hai nupur se mil lo aker…yaad ker rahi hai

Gunjan: matlab

Samrat: pata nhi chalo foran..mera dil kahbara raha hai…

It has been few days from the nupur woke up..yet mayank didn't told Samrat knowing this news will reach tai jaan to and she will again cum with a wicked plan…nupur was still weak yet she was recovering very speedily…

Samrat enter the room and found her lying with closed eyes wht made him a little worried was her bed was now in bit sitting position.

Samrat: mayank…

Mayank: jao us se baat kero..

Samrat was feeling mayank has gone crazy..yet wht he heard next made him shocked…

Nupur: bhai…a faint voice called him and he looked at her …who was looking at him with a smile…

Samrat looked back to mayank and he gave him a faint smile n noded in yes she is fine now…samrat rushed to her and hugged her closed to him…and let his fear droped from his eyes….

Samrat: tum thik ho na… tum thik hoo…. Ur awake… tum sach mein thik ho…he cuped her face and she closed her eyes in yes

Gunjan came in and she placed her hand on mayank's shoulder… and smiled at him…

Gunjan: tum thik hona..

Mayank: hm ab thik hoon….

After so long all four of them sat together and chat a bit… though the awkwardness was still there yet, they have a reason to celebrate…

Gunjan: wasy nupur had kerti ho tum itna kaun sota hai… humara nhi tu is bechary k hi kayal ker layti …tum ny tu is k record of all time soto thor diya….

Nupur: aur bhai k,…she said in broken voice…indicated Samrat as much bigger soto than mayank…

Samrat: acha tu tum aj bhi is k side loog …nupur yeah thik nhi hai…

He didn't said it offensively but sumhwere it hurted him so badly…there was pin drop silence in the room..

Mayank: mein ata hoon tum log baat kero mjhy Dr.nadir se milna hai…he was about to move when she hold his hand to not let him ho anywhere…. He smiled and hold her hand back…abhi ata hoon..2mins…

Tai jaan: tum kahin nhi jarahy hoo…. Ab tu tum apny anjam ko jao gay…

Mayank felt her nails digged inside his hand in fear that now its time ..they will have to leave …yet he hold her hand back firmly assuring …he wont move anywhere…

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Ending at bad place but us mein past maat bhool jana I want comments on tht too….next update will not have present …after tht u will have present… thanku

Eid Mubarak

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