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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#741

Awesome update di..loved it very much...

and Eid mubarak❤️

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#742

this was amazing...and i am loving Gunjan...honestly...very well written

and Eid Mubarak

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Mini4

@Mini4

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#743

Hey Fiza!!!

EID MUBARAK!!!🤗

BEAUTIFULLY DESCRIBED N CUTE PARTS👏..

MAYANK N NUPUR MOMENTS IN BOTH PARTS HAVE BEEN WRITTEN BEAUTIFULLY👍🏼

❤️loved d lift wala scene n beach wala scene also😉

thanx fr d pm

continue soon!!!

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parul_bansal

@parul_bansal

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#744

awesome update..

the past was as usual beautiful..

n present wanna knw soon wat will happen after this...

thanks 4 the pm

EID MUBARAK

may allah bless u

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#745

Beautiful update

Loved how mayank was coping with his professional n personal life and giving his time to nupur for spending some time with her...Loved it

And the beach part was totally romantic...Staring in eyes...How romantic, but that bikers ruined their staring session...Chal lo koi baat nai, know that after some time we will see more of these romantic moments of mayur in future and tai jaan bhi kuch nahi kar paegi...The last part, where four were together was really nice.And samrat-gunjan are so sweet

Looking forward n written very nicely

Edited by love.mayurarti - 13 years ago

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#746

my gosh u made me smile yet left wid suspense...

awsome update ...mayank and nupur moments wow... 😍 i was so heavenly the way mayank protected her hayei maar jao ..:)

but yeh tai jaan kaha se agei aur ab kia chal raha hai n k demagh mai pls pls pls update soon aur yeh kia k present wala update next to next mai huga... 😔 thts not fair...

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mahek

@Star_001

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#747

eid mubarak fiza 🤗🤗🤗

past bohut acha hai

mehandi lag gai aapki aage peche dono taraf lagai

kaise lag rahi hai

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#748

kya fiza... cliff hanger pe chod diya!
bt the past ws soo good!😍

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#749

awww tasu- very nice idea
but fiza is right- she wrote Eid festive on mayur in one of her ff
but we wont mind another in this ff- whats say????
fiza u can write it in a different if u want to do it..
btw way now coming to ur update- it was mind blowing part- no doubt in it.
GOSH loved the past so much.i've read this part already 5 times
loved the way u've developed their relationship slowy and gradually..
loved the magical changes b/w them..
Thier dinner date was superb- amazing
awww mayu become so possessive abt his wife- haahahahaha i loved his possessiveness-after all isse uska pyaar dekhai deti hai...
OMG mayank was blushing while sam was talking abt thier date..lol lol lol.. poor mayank jaida maat satao use
the present was also good- errr wanna kill taijaan :( :( :(
fiza i want more past-i want to enjoy their sweet hubby wify relationship.they r so understanding and adorable- just made for each other
weldone fiza- we r proud of u
keep updating...