OS : anijal first day in mazumdar House

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Tejal's first day in mazumdar house

Aniket and tejal's room :
Tejal woke up wen the golden sun rays fall on her face.Her face was glowing magnificently.She saw the clock which showed 7.She realizes she was still holding aniket's hand.She smiles but remembers Fai baa's words of becoming an ideal bahu so gets up immediately and goes for a shower.Within 15 minutes she was ready with a magnificent, beautiful Dark blue saree.She was looking nice and pretty.She woke up aniket with a sweet kiss.Aniket was mesmerized seeing tejal in the saree.He complimented her saying: "Tejal Good morning! u r looking very beautiful."
Tejal " Common get ready aniket ...its already 7:20 ...get up and go n get ready.I hv already kept ur kurta pajama dere. get ready ".Aniket says:" First give me a kiss and den i ll go". Tejal "Shut up go aniket ". and den dere was a knock at the door.
Aniket goes finally to get ready and tejal goes to open d door.

It was Susla bhabhi.She came dere to give dem tea.
Tejal : "Arrey bhabhi maa Good morning...y did u bother. U shud hv called me, i ws coming downstairs only"
Susla " Devrani ji ...dont worry i m dere for u, i hv brought tea for u with khakhra chaat ...hale hale aave ..." " come fast ...we r waiting for both of u for pooja"
just den aniket comes. wearing a Brown color sherwaani.
Susla" Aniket bhai after having tea come fast"
Aniket " ok bhabhi"
tejal and aniket have dere tea and come downstairs.

Mazumdar House's hall:
Ever1 is waiting for dem to perform d pooja.
Tejal first takes "ashirwaad" 4 m papa , maa and baa. She also hugs foram and b4 she cud go and wish Dat shashwat ...he moves out of the room.Baa asks tejal to perform d pooja and sing sum famous gujrati aarti.Tejal was in a fix as she didnt knew how to perform pooja or aarti. Seeing tejal worried , susla comes dere and explains her wat r d steps and also
gives her a book in which aarti was written.Tejal thanks bhabhi maa.

After performing the pooja,all assemble in the dining hall. Sushila was serving every1 Samosa and dhokla to every1. Tejal offers her to help but sushila tells her to sit and have her breakfast. As every starts having d breakfast. Dey found dat samosas are sweet.
Sanyukta" Sushila beta y r d samosa's sweat ...y u hv added sugar to it beta!" Susla" arrey baa today is devrani ji's first day ...so i thot to start d day with sumthing sweat ...Hale hale Aave!!! baa"
every1 gives her a smile.
Every1 was chatting in the hall and den baa tells about d traditional pooja in which d new bride enters the kitchen and after performing d pooja cooks something sweet for every1 in the family.
Tejal was a bit worried as wat she shud cook as she knew only to cook maggi.
In the kitchen:
Tejal goes in the kitchen along with Sanyukta and sushila.
Sanyukta " beta tejal do as i say ...". tejal " ok maa". Sanyukta helps her to perform pooja and she also notices the tension on her face. she understood d problem. Sanyukta : "Tejal dont worry ...sushila and i r here ...we are here to help. i'll teach u myself . How u shud cook the food.For now u r just suppose to make kheer".Tejal : " maa but i dont even know how to cook Kheer". Sushila:"arrey tejal ben dun worry... i ll explain u and also help u to cook kheer. We'll do it 2gether. now smile ok. Baa dun worry i ll help her out".Sanyukta goes from dere after d pooja.

In the dining room:
Every 1 is having dere lunch and sanyukta informs dem about tejal who prepared kheer for all of them. Tejal ,who was sitting next 2 aniket ,was a bit worried about every1's reaction. She was having her lunch and suddenly she realizes Aniket holding her right hand under the dining table. She luked at aniket who was blushing. Tejal signalled him to leave his hand but it seems he was in no mood of doing it. Suddenly Nikhliesh asked tejal" Arrey tejal beta y r u eating with ur left hand". Tejal fumbled a bit but she managed to give an excuse: "Papa actually i like eat with my left hand". Aniket was smiling and tejal was signalling him to leave her hand. Finally he left her hand and tejal was relieved. Nikhilesh: "Sanyukta i m dying to eat d kheer which tejal has prepared!". Tejal stood up and tells every1: "i just bring it 4 all of u!". She brings in the kheer for
every1 and then began the tasting session.

Tejal ws standing tensed. Every1 enjoyed having the sweet dish.Sushila:"Arrey tejal ben !kheer is Tabtod fantastic! It is very tasty". Nikhilesh and sanyukta also blessed her.



PS: It is my first OS "ever" and a special thanks to dhruti di for inspiring me to write sumthing like dis.Do tell me how it was or press d like button ...if u seriously liked my work !!!😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arrey mere Taani Partner.. U write so well.. 😲 Wah Wah!! Mujhe to Pata hi nahi tha. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
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This was a superb scenario created Taani.. I loved it.. And Tejal is carrying out all the housework.. Hmm. I could almost visualize it.. Well done.. Keep them coming.. 😛😛😛😛😛👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome os
love ur one shot u should make more Tani !!

Aniket holding Tejal hand under the dinning table aww Naughty boy 😆

I can image Aniket holding Tejal hand under the dinning table n asking for Tejal to kiss him 😉!

Great work 👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Debalina_Paul

Arrey mere Taani Partner.. U write so well.. 😲 Wah Wah!! Mujhe to Pata hi nahi tha. ⭐️
⭐️
This was a superb scenario created Taani.. I loved it.. And Tejal is carrying out all the housework.. Hmm. I could almost visualize it.. Well done.. Keep them coming.. 👏

thanks partner
i cant believe sum1 can like my work!!!
thanku 1ce again
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArnavKiiDeewani

Awesome os

love ur one shot u should make more Tani !!

Aniket holding Tejal hand under the dinning table aww Naughty boy 😆

I can image Aniket holding Tejal hand under the dinning table n asking for Tejal to kiss him 😉!

Great work 👏👏


Thanks amrita
for liking my work
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tani23


Thanks amrita
for liking my work


yuhr welcome but do write more ur writing is well n i love ur work as Dhurti work!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏Its a total mesmerising scene that you have imagined and you wrote it so beautifully. Reading this made me smile as I could imagine all this actually happen.😍

Then I became sad as I realised that stupid ShaMoni have ruined everything for Anijal and us.😭

Keep them coming, Tani.👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mili27

👏Its a total mesmerising scene that you have imagined and you wrote it so beautifully. Reading this made me smile as I could imagine all this actually happen.😍


Then I became sad as I realised that stupid ShaMoni have ruined everything for Anijal and us.😭

Keep them coming, Tani.👏


Thanks a lot for liking it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww your writing is amaziingg! Awesome OS! You should definitely write some moreee, they are too goodd! I could imagine the whole scene in my head and alll of it was sooo cute! And I can so imagine Aniket holding Tejals hand under the table and everything! Woww, this OS is amazinngg :) x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is wonderful, you are good writer :D :D

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