MG-HEAVENLY LOVE(PART4-PG23) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
i think..lets fall in love nd baki sab bhi acche hai but i lyked dis 1.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Wow wat a unique concept yar.
Y dont u name it "cupid strikes"
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
amazin start luvd it plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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buddies,
again problem
actually two name are taken mostly by you all
heavenly love and lets fall in love??

now vote for them..
ek name ke liya etni dicussion, but kya karen...😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-2

both reached the place where it was decided

yash- so how was it?

meera remembered it and blushed

meera- voh voh

yash- voh voh matalb, i know teri baat maan liya hoga, you know boy are so easy to explain, but you girls

meera- what happened? lagta hain she didn't fall for your charm

and started laughing

yash- maza araha hain na, you know how stupid she is, i told her that i am angel, she called me bhoot and started laughing

meera also started laughing

yash- hass tho asa rahi ho, that you succeded..what ever ab

meera-should i go to geet?

yash- nahi, pata nahi after seeing you she will go mental, we are here to make them fall in love, not to make them fall in mental hospital

meera- than, fir kya?,

yash-you know i have seen some movie

meera- kab? without me?

yash- ye rooothna and maanana we can do afterward, so in that movie i saw the girl falling and guy catching and they stare each other and fall in love

meera- so?

yash- so , we will do same, i will bring geet, you do something to bring maan..okk

meera- ok done

...

next morning

geet(thought)- kal i have so strange dream, i saw a ghost following me, and calling himself angel, geet tu bhi nah, stop seeing fairy tale, if someone will hear he will laugh

she stood up from her bed, when she heard

yash- so finally you are awake sleeping beauty

geet- ahhh, you idiot, what are you doing here

yash- you want me to start again, from where i left yesterday

geet- why are you following me, and tameez name ki koi cheez hain, so early in a girls room?

yash- is that bad

geet 'o' shape mouth opened, and she started throwing shoes and everything, everything just crossed his body

yash- yaar why are you wasting you time and energy

geet- what you need

yash- kuch nahi, can be be friend?

geet- you want me to be friend with a ghost?

yash(flustrated)- yes

geet- ok, friends

yash- finally, i will come back in hour, some work to do..

...

1 hours later

geet was ready

geet(thought)- geet chal you have to find a job

yash- what will you do?

geet- tumhse matalb, i am going

yash- hain chalo

geet- oh hello, tumhe kisne bulaya

yash- mein bore ho gaounga, so i will come with you

geet went out , and looked her room

yash followed her

...

meera- i cant go in front of him, what will he think, but i have to face him,, but not now for sure

meera- he is leaving for his office chalo lets follow him

maan leaves and meera also

...

geet was sitting on bus

yash poked her

geet- kya hain

yash- you dont have car

geet- i am not some princess

yash- you will soon be, maan's princess

geet- what

yash- nothing

they walk on road,

geet(thought)- eis road par straight mera office hain, where i have interview

yash- kuch karan parge, maan will not come in this road

yash clap his hand and tree fall

geet- shit, ab mein kahan se jaanungi

yash- other way..

geet gave him glare

...

maan- jaldi office pahuchu...

meera- he is going wrong way kuch karana pare ga

meera clap her hand,

driver- dir, lagta hain, acciddent ho gaya hain

maan- take other way

driver took the other way

meera saw yash and geet coming

she again clap her hand

maan- what happend

driver- some problem in car, i will see

maan- came out

the road was muddy, mud was all over

yash and geet were coming in the same way

geet reached near maan, when a loud horn made geet lost the balance

yash and meera high five each other

yash- dekhna we will sing, mahi ve mahi...i saw that in movie

but, maan saw her falling and cared none, he put his hand back..

and she fall down in mud, she was covered in mud.

geet- stupid meri help kyun nahi kiya, idiot, dhust danav

maan-why should i help you, are you miss world? vaise bhi tumse khubsurat har larki hain eis duniya mein

geet- hain hain, ap jaise ko mein jaanti huin, lafanga

maan- asking help from lafanga, and lafanga kisko bola, chudail

geet- chudali, gadhe

maan- gadhi, ullu, moti

geet- moti kisko bola, larki baaz

geet smriked and maan was irritated

and went away ,maan also went away

meera- ye plan flop, ab?

yash- no worry, kuch aur karte hain

and he went with geet...

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG first time in Geet history Maan didn't catch Geet while she was falling...Yash and Meera's plan fail...

now what they will do next...

awesome and hillarious update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
hilarious update...
bechare angels...kitni mehnat ki milane ki ab pata chalega waise bhi milne wale the as he was boss and she was going for job
galis they gacve to each other were too good..the way Maan reacted was so like when he threw her down after saving from the lake...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kamaal ka update hai buddy & the superb names dat maaneet gave to each other...I jst cant stop laughing...And Ooopppsssyyy...geet fell & maan didnt catch her & she landed on mud...very funny update indeed.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG First time in the history Geet fall n Maan didn't catch her...

Poor angels they have to work so hard...
I'm sure Geet will get job in Maan company...

Awesome update...
Fnatstic job...
Update soon..
Thnx for the PM...:)

Love Sonia
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
poor angels bicharo ne kitni mehnat ki but sab mitti me mil gayi
loved it..

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