MG-HEAVENLY LOVE(PART4-PG23)

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~HEAVENLY LOVE~

The waterfall was coming of the clouds, the benches were made up of clouds, the floor is of white clouds, the scene of sacred, beautiful, it was one's dream, it's the most beautiful place in this whole universe, the people here were covered with white cloths , have a beautiful crown in their head, they were having wings at their back, flying from one place to another, living together in peace and harmony. some were eating apple from the tree, while others were laughing and giggling with each other, one always dream of coming here, why shouldn't one dream to come here, here in HEAVEN..

The music was covered all over the place, not the hard music, but the soft one, which can touch anyone's heart. The people who lived here was called the ANGLES, there were seeing the world, were life exist. A boy was sitting on bench made up of cloud, thinking something very deeply, when he felt a hand on his shoulder and heard the melodious voice.

"what happened?? why are you looking so lost"

the boy smiled and said " just nothing, was seeing the earth, people over there are so stupid, they call some stupid emotion very important for their life, you know they call it love"

The girl angle smiled and said " you are saying truth, this is a useless emotion, when will they understand"

and after that they heard a soft bell, which is a type of alarm for them, it means they have called by their queen. They quickly flew to their queen, and knock the door of the beautiful castle.


queen smiled and opened the door for them

they entered and bent down before queen

queen- welcome my angles

boy- queen, have we done something wrong that you called us?

girl- queen, we are sorry if we had made any mistake

queen smiled and gesture them to follow her, they saw the earth yet again.


queen- what happened?

boy- queen what you want to tell us?

queen- i want to tell you that this earth you are seeing is made up of love

girl- queen, sorry but i feel that this is useless emotion

queen yet again smiled.

queen- i know, i have heard you both, but this time you are wrong, love is beautiful and sacred

boy- but queen this a mere emotion like other emotion that exist

queen gave another smiled

queen- you have to understand the importance of love in this mortal world and you both have to understand that love is important emotion had human should have in them, not like other emotion

boy and girl are yet again confused

queen- i will you 3 months, you have to make two human beings who don't believe one, means you have to make them fall in love

boy and girl smiled

queen- they are there

boy and girl seen towards the plate that showed the photo, the photo was of a boy and a girl

boy- where we will get them queen and what are their names?

queen- they live in india, they are GEET HANDA and MAAN SINGH KHURANA

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boy and girl nodded


queen- go meera and yash make me proud and return after you work is finished

yash and meera flew away to earth

the queen smiled, she was queen of heaven, she was old, but beautiful and elegant, she was SAVTERI DEVI..

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so buddies?

do you like the concept

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i know i have so many work, actually not so many but so so many, but what can i do, i just cant stop writing

so here the journey begans...

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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congo, concept is completely different
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful 😊
please cont soon ...😃... waiting for it
Edited by kuhu18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it nd thnx for pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats...

interesting concept dear...
is it OS or SS or FF dear?
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept.
its very different from others.
something like fairytales.
update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start...
congrats for the new story dear..
continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yeh toh literally out of dis world ho gaya yaar...very new concept,angels meera & yash making earthling maaneet fall in love & savitri devi being d queen of heaven...,...superb...cont soon & thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting this concept sounds cool
two angels have to make our maneet fall in love now this is gonna be challenging
looking forward for more
thanx for pm
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PART-1

They both entered the zone of the mortal world, they saw people running here and here, so busy, noises all around.

yash- so finally we are here, hey look, i am looking dashing man, i like or dont like this world, but i love there dressing sense, she i look handsome in this shirt and jeans.

meera- true, look i look sexy, in this knee dress, acha tell me can they see us??

yash- i dont know, lets do small experiment

meera ' ok

they went to a old man and started calling

yash- hello

meera- hello

the man went in his own tune and they screamed

yash and meera ' they can't see us..

and started jumping

meera- acha now lets concentrate, we have task to do

yash- ya right, so you will be with geet or maan?

meera- i don't know

yash- but i know, i am going to geet, see she will easily fall in my charm

meera- what ever

yash- acha i am going to geet, you go to maan, we will meet here again, any problem call me

and winked her and went away

meera- after coming here, he is acting like one of them, chal beta meera 'work'

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geet(thought)- what the hell i am doing here, these girl's i tell you, all the time, love is so beautiful, so cute, so romantic, do hell with this word love, it seems they dont have work other than this, if i get pinky alone nah i kill her, she brought me here saying, you will enjoy, enjoy, i am hating myself coming here,i am smiling like an idiot from 1 hrs, please save me, i hate this emotion called llove

that time yash entered and heard her

yash- you are right, i also hate it

geet(thought)-tu sahi mein pagal ho gayi hain, now you are hearing voices also

yash- arre i am not some voice, see i am here

geet(thought)- who is this, reading my thoughts, ghost?? nahi geet what are you saying

yash- she is really mad, saying me ghost, i pitty maan

geet(thought)- will you shut up and who maan, you stupid ghost and saw yash

geet- pinky you said its a girl's meet than is this boy doing here, he is reading my thought

pinky saw the whole room, there was no boy

pinky- geet are you all right?? there no one??

geet- i am alright? you go and have an eye check up

pinky- you gone mad geet

yash started laughing

geet- why are you laughing, see you you won't go out i will call the police

yash started laughing more, while pinky and other were making wired faces

yash- acha stop, listen geet i am yash, and best part is only you can see me

geet- i am yash, and only you can see me, you find it a joke

yash- listen cool down

geet- pinky i am going home

and she went outside

yash followed her

geet- stop following me

yash came in front- acha listen i am here for some task and you can only see me

geet- shut up

yash- geet come on, we can be friend

geet- ya right friend with the ghost

yash- ghost nahi angel

geet started laughing and yash started making faces

yash- what?

geet- you angel, hahahaaa

yash- stop it

geet started laughing more and yash went away

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meera was hell nervous to meet maan

meera- ye yash bhi nah, i am going to geet you go to maan, what will i say to him

meera entred his room

maan came out of the washroom, he was just in his towel, he saw meera and started screaming

maan-ahaaa

meera turned backward

meera- sorry

and went away all sharam se pani pani

maan checked the room door, it was locked,

maan(thought)- maan lagta hain you are becoming mad, who was she??she saw me...

and me was hell embarrassed

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 12 years ago

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