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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
superb os shoba ..

why 4-5 parts u can countinue it after also
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Posted: 12 years ago
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eagerly waiting for next
pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good one shoba...mysterious as always..waiting to see who is behind all this,and what exactly happened between maan n geet..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
awesome start
poor geet and poor muskan
muskan is suffering and maan mu geet
what happen
oh no
pls pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome:)

plzz do pm me nxt updates:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Looks like it is going to b sad one with a happy ending.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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like anything related to maan n geet n it should have a happy ending...

awesome n beautiful starting...

loved it to d core...

thank u very much fr d lovely os...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

Why Geet why did you do tat. How could you even think about aborting our love? You kept me in dark for four long years and if I would have not accompanied you and Muskaan tat day at hospital than I would have never ever know this hard truth about you.

Flashback
Geet: Maan, can you just wait for sometime here with Muskaan I will meet Dr. Shilpa and come. It's been ages since I met her.
Maan: hmm.. But come fast as I have to attend a meeting back and till than I will get some time with my princess.

Geet moved towards Dr. Shilps's cabin. Dr. Shilpa though was Geet's gynecologist but first she was her best friend. Shilpa was glad to see Geet after a long time and welcomed her with a sweet smile.

Shilpa: So Madam did get time to meet her long lost friend haan.

Geet: wat can I do. Being Maan Singh Khuranna's wife and a mother to Muskaan Maan Singh Khuranna is not an easy job. Both father Daughter don't let me away from their eye sight.

Shilpa: hmmm can understand after all you belong to one of the richest families in Delhi. So how come you here.

Geet: Nothing much, Muskaan had a regular check-up and poor Maan had to leave his work coz of his princess.

Shilpa: Geet, you still haven't answered my question yet. Wat had made you to take tat drastic decision even after knowing tat..

Geet: Please Shilpa.. Don't. It was my foolishness tat I had decided tat but now m glad tat I was wrong.

Shilpa: foolishness.. Whom do you want to fool Geet. do you even realize tat you had decided about aborting Muskaan and even you had taken Maan's signature on the form without his consent. And you say it was your foolishness.

Geet: I know Shilpa, tat I was wrong but tat time the circumstances were like tat which forced me to do tat, but later I got to know tat I was wrong.
Shilpa: Oh, come on Geet just shut up. Do you even realize, if tat day you would have not changed your decision of abortion wat would have happened and on top of tat you haven't yet told Maan anything about it. How could you hide it from Maan, Geet. How can you do tat. wat was the reason of doing all tat.
Geet: I cant tell you anything Shilpa. Some secrets are needed to be kept deep inside your heart so tat you keep your relations strong.

Shilpa: I don't understand wat you say but I still feel Geet tat you tell Maan all tat, its not good tat you hide it from him.

Geet: I cant and can never or else he will loose everything Shilpa and I cant see him breaking down

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Maan who had been waiting for Geet since long was getting a bit late for his meeting and even Muskaan was searching for Geet, he reached near Dr. Shilpa's cabin and had heard the half conversation about Geet having decided to abort their love and had even taken his signature without him knowing it. He could not bear to here anything else and tighten his hold around Muskaan as if she would go away from him. he looked at her face and kissed her to soothe his erratic heartbeats but still the mere thought of abortion was taking a toll on him. he walked as fast as possible carrying Muskaan in his arms without waiting for Get. He drove the car straight o the KM and without replying to anyone, he went to his room and locked it from inside. Here Geet was quite shocked upon not finding them and called him bt his phone was coming off. She panicked and called at KM only to know tat Maan and Muskaan had reached home. She did not wait any longer and reached home but found tat Maan ha locked the room from inside. She called out to him for long while others heard her voice and came upstairs. All of them banged the door to open but Maan was way to lost in Muskaan and hugging her closer to his heart. They screamed for him but there was no answer from Maan's side and could hear Muskaan crying for Geet. Geet by now was in tears, fell down on her knees, and waited for Maan to open the door. It was almost three hours and Muskan fell asleep. Geet heard the door click open and she at once stood up and tried to go inside but was shocked to see Maan closing the door and blocking her way. She tried to argue but Maan just dragged her by holding her hand downstairs and pushed her on the floor while others ere shocked to see Maan.
Dadima: Maan, wat the hell was tat. do you know it has been three hours you and Muskaan were locked inside while Geet was crying for her.
Maan: she and crying for Muskaan.. no Dadima she only knows to fake it.
Geet: Maan….
Maan: why Geet why you do tat. how could you even think of aborting our love our Muskaan.

The word abort was enough for all to freeze while Geet felt her earth beneath was leaving her. She could not say word but just stood there with tears in her eyes.

Maan: do you have anything to say on this truth Geet. do you have anything to defend this decision of yours.

Dadima: Maan, wat are you saying. Abortion Muskaan.. how can it be.

Maan: why don't you ask your Geet Dadima. She would give a better answer for your question.

Pari: Veerji…. How can you say tat. we all know Muskaan is her life and she will die before even dreaming about all this.

Maan: don't fool yourself Pari, you don't know wat type of woman she is. She never loved Muskaan nor anyone of us and all of that she had hidden this truth for four long years.

Dadima: Geet , is it true..

Pari: bhabi plzz just say it once tat its not…

Geet: its true Pari..

Tat was it the next moment Geet was on the floor with Maan's slap. Maan could not bear the open truth tat his Mishti wanted to abort their love their Muskaan. He could not even think straight and pulled her up holding her shoulder while least bothering about her pain.
Maan: Why did you do tat. wat was missing in my love tat you had decided to abort my child.
Geet: our child. Our baby.
Maan: don't.. She is only.. MSK.. Blood and you don't have any right on her do you get it. She is only mine.

Geet: Maan.. plzzz listen to me.. m sorry.

Maan: Sorry, for wat Geet. For deciding to abort my baby or to hide this truth for four years. I hate you Geet I hate you. Why did you do tat Geet. why.
Geet: I cant tell you the reason I cant and can never. I cant se you breaking your relations.

Maan pushed her away and once again fell down.

Maan: Fine. You don't than be ready to leave me and Muskaan forever.
Dadima: Maan.. yeh app.
Maan: No dadima.. none of you will say or do anything this time. I can't let this woman to stay in this house nor go close to my daughter. Its final tat I will divorce her but until and unless tat she will have to stay here at KM but away from Muskaan and me. She is not allowed to come closer to us.

Geet: please Maan.. don't do this.. I will die.

Maan: you should be thankful to me tat I did not throw you out of my house right now. Ohh don't think tat I have given you a chance, its just tat I don't want people to say tat MSK has thrown you away without giving you anything. you will get your share of property after all my name is attached to you so enjoy you last few days here before making an exit from our lives. And mind it tat you are not allowed near Muskaan and don't ever show me your face when m at home.
Maan left the place while Geet sat there crying. Pari ran t her but Dadima stopped her asking her tat she deserved it.

Pari: But Dadima, Bhabi can never do tat,there will be some reason for it.

Dadima: I know Pari tat my Geet can never betray us but when she does not want to tell the truth than its better tat she leaves us and go. Lets go from here.
They turned to leave but dadima turned and said.
Dadima: Geet, think about Muskaan or if not than think about Maan and tell the truth or else everything will destroy.
Flashback ends.

Maan was brought back from his thoughts with the ring of his phone. He looked at the screen and a small smile played along his lips and said Muskaan. He received the phone and was about to say hello but heard Muskaan crying.

Maan: Muski .. why are u crying Princess.
Muskaan: Dadda… Mumma… blood.. Dada…. Mumma.. fell…. Down..blood… hospital….. Dadda.. mumma..

Maan could not make out a word from her mouth and asked her once again.

Maan: Muski .. beta stop crying and tell me wat happened.
Muskaan: Mumma… blood….. Badi Dadi…. Mumma.. hospital. Dadda… Mumma blood.. Muski scared…

Maan: Please Muski… I cant understand anything.. is Badi dadi there..

Muskaan: No… Nakul… Kaka….
Maan: ok give the phone to him.( Nakul took the phone). Nakul why is Muskaan crying and where is Dadima and Pari.
Nakul: Sir… Sir……..
Maan: Nakul top saying sir and speak up.
Nakul: Sir.. Badi Mam and Pari beta is is hospital with…
Maan: Hospital is Dadima alright. Wat happened.
Nakul: Sir.. She is fine but Geet Mam… she slipped and fell down is severely injured and taken to the hospital.

Maan's shivered with Nakul's words and he just ran from there and reached the hospital within no time. He saw his Dadima, Pari and Vicky were waiting outside the emergency room. He slowly reached near them when he saw the doctor coming out.

Doctor: I need to talk to MSK, can you please call him.

Vicky: He has not been yet informed doctor. Is everything all right.

Doctor: Than you need to call him urgently.
Maan: Doctor m here..
Doctor: I see.. Anyways I don't need to know much tat why your wife's health is not so good Mr. Khuranna when she needs to be healthy enough. Do you even know tat this accident could be dangerous for her as well as your baby.

Maan: Baby….

Doctor: Ya.. baby.. do you even know tat your wife is pregnant and it was not less than a miracle tat she just hit her head and her stomach was saved but.. it could be so dangerous for her. I never accepted this type of behavior from you Mr. Khuranna.
Dadima: How is she now Doctor.
Doctor: both are fine Savitri Deviji but Geet is not so good. Her body has been starved of food and the baby is getting affected. I don't know why its like tat but I warn you Mr. Khuranna, if this continue we wont be able to save your wife nor your baby, so please take care of her.

Maan: hmmm….

Pari: Doctor can we meet her..
Doctor: right now Dr. Shilpa is doing some test and later you can.
Maan: She is pregnant and she did not even tell me about this. Why Geet why do you do this again and again.
Dadima: Just stop it Maan just stop. Stop blaming her for everything and I can tell you tat Geet is herself unaware about her pregnancy or else she would have never done this to herself.

Maan: don't defend her Dadima, she does not care for anyone of us.

Before he could ay anything else Dr. Shilpa came forward and asked them to meet. They all went inside and saw Geet touching her tummy feeling her baby when her eyes met Maan's and she could se his anger, which made her to shiver.
Geet: Maan… our baby..
Maan: Stop it Geet.. its only mine and once again you proved tat you did not care for the baby at all..
Geet: I did not know tat I was pregnant Maan. I ..
Maan: wat do you mean by tat. There was s life breathing inside you and you say you were not aware… please stop all this drama..
Geet: No Maan.. I swear.. I did not know about the baby.. how can you think tat I will harm the baby.

Maan: You have done Geet and once again you were..

Geet: Please Maan.. believe me I did not know.. its our love Maan… Muskaan and this baby is our love and how can i..

Maan: Love and tats why you were ready to kill Muskaan and this baby right Geet..

Vicky: Stop… just stop it Bro.. why do you always accuse bhabi for everything. Do you even know why she did tat.
Geet: No Vicky, you cant. You promised me tat you will not.
Vicky: Promise.. I don't believe it bhabi. Its high time tat Bro knows the truth or else he will give you death with his rude words. I can't see you and him like this.

Geet: Vicky.. you know wat will happen after this.. Please Vicky don't…

Vicky: I don't mind even if Bro kills me now. I deserve punishment for my mistake bhabi.
Maan: Mistake… punishment for wat Vicky.
Vicky: Yes bro.. Punishment.. It was me who was responsible for all tat. it was me tat Bhabi had decided to abort Muskaan long back. It was my blind faith tat Bhabi was ready to abort your love and it was due to me tat she was hiding the truth so tat I can stay with you all.
But before Vicky could even speak further there was a loud sound of a slap which Maan and given to Vicky. It was so loud tat Geet shivered with his level of anger and she just said "Mann."

Maan raised his hands towards Geet, which indicated tat she does not have any right to talk, but still Geet spoke.

Geet: Maan.. Please it was not his mistake.. Please calm down..

Maan: Shut your mouth Geet, I don't need your explanations any further. You have done enough of hiding so its better you don't speak a word anymore.

Maan turnes and grabs Vicky by collar and shakes him.

Maan: how dare you Vicky, how dare you force my Geet to abort our baby. Why Vicky why did you do tat. Kaunsi Dushmani nikal di tumne.
Vicky: Sameera….. Sameera Singhania.. Bro.. My friend Sameera.. who loved you god knows since when….

Precap: Wat did Sameera and Vicky tell Geet tat she wanted to Abort Muskaan…

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome
loved it
maan hurted geet tooo much
nd vicky cheap
deserves more slap
update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb update.. loved it... update the next part asap...

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