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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 27: Pensieve IV

His finger mindlessly skimmed his chin while he stood facing his closet with his other hand firmly placed over his waist. The grey shirt was in view and gently twisted from side to side about the pivot of the hanger from which it was centered among his other good shirts.

There it was, her finger marks over the left side of the shirt and it once again disappeared as if it was hide and seek that it played with his line of sight just as his thoughts were.

"Maan baba...Can I take the laundry out?" Nakul asked and he shifted, his stance akimbo while he sighed aloud catching Nakul's attention as he did.

"Fine!" he removed the shirt and threw it into the pile of clothes to be washed.

Soon after Nakul left, he sat down by the window seat and picked up her letter. His gaze passed over her words, but nothing registered then as a flash of pictures from that evening instead rose to his memory: the sound of her bangles that had echoed from the empty walls of his house as she'd stirred the chocolate; the flutter of her lips when he'd cornered her by the refrigerator much to his own surprise; her constant care to keep the side of her waist covered; the tumble of her straight hair over her face that'd caused him to hold his breath for that beat, which was an unexpected response from him as was Anshu's act; his troubling reluctance that he'd sensed before he could let her hand go.

Above all, it was when she'd asked him if New York included him, that he'd begun to give any thought to what had heedlessly transpired on that swing.

Everything from that time seemed like a sepia toned photograph, the images burnished with an exaggerated glow of warmth. He didn't even remember everything then as he sat unseeing at the clip that she'd left forgetfully left behind on the swing. Or was that the part of him which refused to attach any bearing to that moment, in the thread of life?

The next instant, he stormed out of the room in a blur, calling to Nakul and threw open the laundry open door casting the poor man into a fit of tremble from the urgent agitation in his voice.

"Where are the shirts I gave you?" he muttered even as he sieved through the baskets and got hold of the one he was looking for.

"Umm!" he rubbed his forehead and paused awkwardly at the threshold, "Sorry, I didn't mean to scare you," he placed a hand on Nakul's shoulder before he left the man still wide-eyed and cowering in a corner.

Well, there wasn't much he could do, when he stunned himself into such impulses at the most unexpected of times.

Taking the shirt back to his room, he smiled and threw it in a hanger, before he moved it to the least used section of the closet.

The things he did because of her...

Shaking his head, he smiled again before falling into bed for another long night that awaited to take him away from the reality that was slowly dawning upon him.
Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arwenish

Instead of Tide she should ve given Surf excel with tag line dhag to achay hotay hain... lolzzz..

I m liking the pace of story... me is hooked to it... yarr I can't write serious cahracter or story analysis uskai liay ap ho n others... so don't mind my useless blabbering...


I didn't know Surf excel was still around...😆

Nice song, I will hear it out...

Write what you can. Every addition matters.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmmm... so wind is whispering a lot of things...

Wind is saying... demon dev is a bad bad husband... n damsel in distress needs rescuing from her Devil husband... knight in shinning armour Maan is getting closer to the reality of her merriage...

Ye ishaq nahin assan
Bus itna samaj lijiay
Aik ag ka darya hai
Aur qood kai jana hai...!!!!!!!! lolzzz


I haven't click like on all the upadtes... But I liked all the posts n ll click like button when I ll get laptop back from clutches of my brother...

Update Sooonnn... N give Lambiii wali upadte...


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Posted: 12 years ago
I just did two updates today. You are kidding me, right? 😛
Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another update... wooo hooo...

Love indeed make people do carzy things n grey cells jsut stop functioning rationally...

MK just scared nakul out of his wits just to take back the soiled shirt... which is precious because its has chocolate stains from Geets hand... hahahahaha...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

I just did two updates today. You are kidding me, right? 😛

Hahahaha... saw the 2nd update after posting that comment... n waisy bhi I meant... give lambiii wali update in the middle of the week n weekend pai to u ll update... Hainaaa... me greedy greedy... lolzzz... n InshAllah u ll get loads of free time from work n home to update...

Reading FF is interesting... but this upadte wala chaker left me craving for more...




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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful beautiful story!

Love it to the core!

The characters, the emotions, the confusion, the reluctance, the shackles...amazing!

My heart beats faster than usual when I read the updates.

You truly are a wonderful writer.

Maan is truly DD in this! :)))))))))))))


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Posted: 12 years ago
We are at 136...Can I expect Chat pe aa sakte ho, to be said by Geet in a new thread?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: coolgal49

Beautiful beautiful story!


Love it to the core!

The characters, the emotions, the confusion, the reluctance, the shackles...amazing!

My heart beats faster than usual when I read the updates.

You truly are a wonderful writer.

Maan is truly DD in this! :)))))))))))))


Welcome to the thread :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I enjoyed reading P4. I think M's thoughts and actions conveying his state was very well written.
I also liked the Karwa Chauth dinner interaction, and reality dawning upon him. Cant wait for the next chapter.
To me this is a whole new NYTs- loving the new scenes and perspectives.

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