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Posted: 12 years ago

IMP: This is total imaginary and any one who believe in fate and destiny will agree as its very much superstitious.. I don't want to force anyone but its totally my version of an anokhi….. unique destiny… fate.. so please don't take it so seriously as its just fiction and not reality …

Part 7

Maan: why Sameera, why only me (sameera smirks and soothes him). Why can't I just forget her, why does she still affect me?

Sameera: Maan, she does not Maan.. Please calm down.

Sameera distance herself from Maan and slowly kisses his forehead eyes and was about to kiss him on his lips when he gets up in anger and shouts.

Maan: No Sameera, I will not let her to affect me. She does not deserve my friendship, as she never valued it. I was dumb and mad tat always though tat Geet would never betray my friendship and would accept my other friends but no know she was and will always be jealous. Its just coz of her tat my own family my dadima, dad, mom , Vicky and Annie treat me like a stranger and just talk with me for formality.

Sameera hugs him tight smiling.

Maan: she will pay for all tat Sameera, she will and I will prove it to my family tat she is a fake person who knows to fake love and nothing. I hate her Sameera I hate Her. I hate you Geet Handa, I hate you with all my heart.

Sameera tightens her hug while Maan too reciprocates. Sameera moves her hands on his back and brings him more closer. She guides his hands to her thighs which were revealed due to her ever revealing short dress while her hands try to unbutton his shirt. Maan holds her hands in between trying to stop her while taking the opportunity she smacked her lips on his bringing him closer and kissing him. She deepens the kiss while Maan's holds her by her waist getting carried away in the kiss and ultimately Sameera succeeds in unbuttoning his shirt and taking it off. She leaves his lips and trails her lips and tongue downwards from his shoulders to his bare chest while her hand busying with his belt when Maan instantly backs off and turns his back and says.

Maan: Sameera, this is not right, we cant just flow in passion like this.

Sameera: Why Maan, why cant we, we both love each other than why cant we make love.

Maan: Sameera, I know tat we love each other but I don't want to use you for my body pleasure and moreover everything has a right time.

Sameera comes in front of him and hugs him while placing kisses on his chest.

Sameera : Why Maan, why cant you love me the way I want. Why do you always keep this distance between us.

Maan pushes her away and says: Stay away Sameera, we will regret this later.

Sameera: Regret, why will I when I don't you flirting with other girls openly than why would I regret our love making when I know tat you may flirt with thousand but you heart and you only love me.

Maan: Than why do you want me to break our limits? Why cant you just understand tat its just a matter of few months and than we will get married and I will make you mine ( he cups her face and says) listen baby, I would also want do love you but I want our first to be very special and tats when I make you mine in front of the whole world. Just few months dear.

Maan hugs her and kisses her hair while Sameera thinks.

Sameera(ST): Tats why I cant risk anything now, I have come a long way to come here and I cant lose anything now. I promise Maan tat I will make you mine before hand so tat by the time you get the control over KC you will be forced to marry me by hook ya crook and neither tat bitch nor your family will be able to take you away from me.

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Mohinder saw his wife clutching the most hidden secret of their life in her hands as if trying to believe tat their past was a mere dream, a dream which not only scared the Handa's but Khuranna's also. The truth that they are hiding from years from the two

person who should be aware of it but they could not. Mohinder slowly went near Rano who did not even feel his presence and was totally lost in her world. Mohinder slowly placed his hand on her shoulder bringing her back from her thoughts and tats when he saw tears in her eyes while she just stared at him and spoke without even blinking her eyes.

"He will be her destroyer… but he himself will be her saviour.. no one can change wats written for them.. no one.. they are meant for each other.. but will he even realize it or will he take her life this time."

The simple words shook Mohinder from inside but still his heart did not want to believer it but how could he not when they had witnessed the changes.

Rano: Will he destroy her, will he destroy our Geet, will Maan destroy his own wife with his own hands. Say na will Maan destroy my baby.

Mohinder hugged Rano tightly as he himself did not know wat to say to prove her wrong. He himself did not know where their life was heading, was their destiny playing with them or will their fate destroy them.

Mohinder: No rano, he cant. He will not…you know na he loves Geet than how can he do tat.

Rano pulled herself away from him and spoke.

Rano: Love… is there any love in them. Seven years I have seen my Geet changing to someone who she was never. The blankness, the pain and the loneliness in her eyes is scaring me and now we don't have an y more time.

Mohinder: I know Rano tat we hardly have three months as they are going to turn 23. But how can we when they…

Rano: they wat.. don't you know tat we have to do tat, how far we are going to keep them away from the truth tat they are destined to be together to stay alive, tat they are destined to get married not us but their fate has written. How will we explain to them tat they are meant to be together even if they hate each other. How can we forget wat happened in past, the day when I was 71/2 months pregnant and Shikha was nine months. How can we forget the day when we were made aware of their life when we did not even know tat I was carrying a girl and Shikha was carrying a boy.

Flashback.

The Khuranna's were very happy tat after many prayers Shikha was expecting and the most beautiful news was tat even Rano was nurturing her second child after Yash. All had decided to seek the blessings from the famous Dragah of Delhi so they all went there but as soon as they reached there they heard a Fakhir Baba whom people believed saying

" Koi nahi badla saktha inh bacho ki kismat.. koi nahi badla saktha inki zindagi.. ek hoga rakshak tho dusrauski barbaadi ka karan hoga… par wahi hoga jo ushe bacha sakega. Koi nahi badal saktha inki yeh anokhi Kismat joy eh leekh ke aye hain."

Rano and Shikha instantly hold their tummy in a protective manner while others were shocked to hear wat Baba said. Mohinder and Raj were hell angry on this crap and were about to shout when Savitri Devi stoped them but there were left speechless wat they heard next.

" Tumari khok mein ek aisi ladki saas le rahi hain jo ( pointing towards Rano) ish khok mein saas le rahe ladke ki ( pointing to Shikha) har waqt jaan bachati rahegi. Ek aisi rakshak banegi uski leki yahi ladka uske maut ka karan bhi hoga. Ek aisi zindagi dega ushe jaha yeh ladki apni har khushi kho kar jeeti rahegi aur. Aur jis din inke rishte ki aakhir dor thoot jayegi.. wahi din iska aakhir din hoga"

Mohinder and Raj were now very much angry aand bursted out in anger: Yeh aap kya bakwaas kar rahe hain. hum inh sab baato pe vishwaas nahi karte.

" Vishwaas.. yeh inh dono ki kismat hain beta. Na aap badal sakte hain na who uppar walo. Inki zindagi na chahte hue bhi ek dujhse se judi hui hain, na yeh kabhi dur jaa sakenge na kabhi paas aa sakenge. Hum tho sirf ush maula ke fakir hain jo unki khwahish aap tak laa rahe hain. Har ek mod pe inhe apni zindagi se ladna hoga, ek aisi ladai jaha yeh dur tho honge par hamesha ek dusre ke saath honge. Koi nahi badal saktha inki kismat.. koi nahi.. yeh hain ush maula ke anokhe bache aur wahi jantha hain ki yeh kab saath honge.. hum tho sirf aap sab ko sathrak kar rahe hian ki inh dono ka jeevan saral nahi hain…. bahut baddi badaheye honge jo inhe dur karge aur barbaad bhi.. par yeh ladki ish ladke ki har taraf se jaan bachayegi aur yeh ladka ish ladki ke barbaadi ka karan hote hue bhi yahi ushe bacha saktha hain."

Now it was a limit for Mohinder and raj and they decided to leave from there while Rano and Shikha stood rooted seeing the fakhir baba walking away but not before he said.

"Inka janam lena ka waqt aa juka hain.. inki kismat ne inki zindagi go gher liya hain aur aaj hi yeh dono ish duniya mein saas lenge, jao ush maula se pooch lo ki ushne aisi kismet kyu likhi hain inh dono ki…. Par koi jawab nahi milega.. nahi milega.. kyun ki woh khud nahi jaanthe ki unhone aisa kyu kiya hain… aaj hoga inh dono ka janam aur aaj hi unki kismat karvat legi….. muallaaa raksha karna ind dono ki.. raksha karna.. inh do bacho ki jinki aapne aisi anchahi kismat leekhi hain."

All stood there watching the baba going away but were scared hearing Shikha screaming clutching her tummy. Shikha was in pain and she held on to her mother in law who tried to support her while Raj and Mohinder ran to her. Raj picked her up and asked the driver to drive the car as fast as possible while the others followed them. They soon reached the hospital where Shikha was taken to the labor room. They could hear her screams that were filled with pain and pain. Two hours had passed and there was no sign of the baby and finally whe they saw the door opening and doctor stepping out of the room they ran to her only to hear the worst news.

Doctor: Mr. Khuranna your wife is fine but.. the baby I mean your baby boy is not well. He is very critical and his heartbeats are too slow and I don't feel tat he will survive.

Raj felt his world being crashed down and he hit the floor on his knees while Mohinder tried to support him and Rano consoling Savitri Devi but soon they heard the nurse calling the doctor.

Nurse: Doctor.. the baby .. I mean.. he is…

The doctor ran inside the room while Raj instantly stood on his legs but before they could say anything or do anything Rano screamed for Mohinder holding her stomach in pain. No one understood why and wat was happening as Rano going into labor was highly impossible but she had. The doctors instantly shifted her to the room while one side the doctors tried to help Rano and other side the baby boy was being treated. No one was in his or her proper state. It was almost an hour now and there was no news about Rano or the babies. Mohinder heard a faint cry and tat when the doctor came outside from the baby boy room with a bright smile on her lips while Raj and Mohinder ran to her.

Doctor: I don't know Mr. Khuranna tat should I say it's a miracle as this cant be even in the history of medicine.

Raj and Mohinder were shocked to hear utterly confused wat she was saying when they heard her once again.

Doctor: Mr. Khuranna, you baby boy is all fit now. We had lost all our hopes for his survival but looks like there is someone who fought for him, someone due to whom he is breathing. No one will say tat this is the same baby whose heartbeats were slow when he was born, no one will say tat he was the same baby who was hardly breathing but now he is all fine. You are lucky Mr. Khuranna and your son is luckier than anyone else is.

Everyone was delighted with news but was waiting for the other news of the baby and soon saw the doctor coming out from Rano's room with a tensed face while Mohinder's heart skipped a bit with the news she gave.

Doctor: Mr. Handa, congrats it's a baby girl but as the baby is premature its really difficult to say anything right now. We have kept her in the NICU and would be keeping her for observation unless and until she recovers from preterm.

Mohinder: Is anything-serious doctor.


Doctor: As I have said tat its preterm, its really difficult to say as the baby its not so healthy but I hope as time goes by she is fine but right now we need to keep her under observation.

Mohinder and Raj may have forgotten the words said by the Fakhir baba but Savitri Devi was shocked surprised by the way things were happening. How each word said by the Baba was turning true, how his prediction tat Shikha would give birth to a boy and Rano to a girl and now all this had made her to think deep about his words. She just thought tat would it be possible tat there are meant to be together, was it possible tat the baby girl would be the savior of baby boy and would it be possible tat the baby boy would be the result of her destruction but he would also be her savior. She just sat there thinking and thinking.

Days passed by and now its was a month but there was no improvement in the girls health. Preterm birth had affected her growth and now it was taking a toll on her. Rano and Mohinder were all broken but somewhere Shikha and Savitri Devi knew the reason for it. They knew tat she was born to save the boy and vice versa her life was in danger. Shikha and Savitri Devi dedcided to once again go to the Dragah and meet the fakhir baba where he once again told them the same thing and he hinted tat no one could save the girl expect the boy. They could not understand how could he save her when he was just a month old but Fakhir Baba just smiled and said tat no one could do anything. After meeting the Baba they both returned to the Hospital with Maan to see Rano and Geet when they were informed tat Rano was feeding her. Shikha slowly went near her holding Maan in her arms and sat down to see the fragile baby in Rano's arms who could not even have her feed properly but unknowing to them, she was getting better by the touch of Maan's Hand who was moving his hand and it was touching Geet. Baby Geet was smiling and smiling while his hands touched her again and again and Rano at an instant felt baby Geet moving her hands and legs in air. Shikha and Savitri too smiled to see the fragile Geet doing some small movements while the nurse who was helping Rano was shocked to see the miracle happening and soon called out to Doctor who herself was shocked and surprised to see two miracles happening in her hospital. She could not believe tat one day Baby Maan was born and had no chances to survive and when Baby Geet was born she survived for one month but had no improvement and now she was all fine. No one could understand wat was happening but the look on Shikha and Savitri Devi's face made Rano to believe and understand wat was happeneing.

Mohinder and Raj were informed about Geet and they were shocked to know wat Shikha and Rano said. Though they did not believe in it but, the incidents from the time since they had been to the Dragah proved tat the Fakhir Baba and his words were true. They smiled knowing tat their children were born for each other and they would turn they friendship into a more sacred relation but an unknown fear lingered in them.

Flash back ends.

Mohinder: Rano.. I was so happy tat mine and Raj's friendship would be taking a new name but there was always a fear in us and tat fear was proved right when Maan and Geet turned five and we had almost lost Geet in tat accident. I still remember the day when..

Rano: why did god write such a fate for her where she is always on the door of the death to save him. to save tat one person who hates her now. We could not even let them away as it would result into something which would be very dangerous. Please ji.. do something before its too late I cant see my daughter suffering all the time. Ist time now they….

Mohinder: I know wat you are saying and trust me, me and Raj are trying to find the best way for it. How can we let them die Rano, how can we let them die..

Rano gets angry and stands screaming at her husband for the first time in her life.

Rano: Don't you dare say a word.. they wont and will never.. I will not forgive Maan this time if he puts my Geet in any danger. I don't know anything about wat the panditji has said. I don't know wat you and bhaisaab will do but I cant wait any longer. Its high time tat we forget about Maan now and think about our daughter.

Mohinder was shocked to hear her words but he knew tat she was right and he had to save his daughter this time before it's too late.

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Geet was all lost in her own world while Armaan, Abhay, Vicky Ridhima, Piya and Pari were discussing about there Sunday outing. It had been long since the whole gang had enjoyed together so Vicky had decided tat they will be enjoying this Sunday when Armaan noticed Geet was not at all paying attention to wat they were saying.

Armaan: Lady Don, where are you lost?

Armaan touches her but there was no response from her side.

Vicky: Geet, are you fine… he jerks her and she was brought back to the reality.

Geet: hmm..

Abhay: So Geet did you finish dreaming about ur Mr. dreamy.

Ridhima; Mr Dreamy.. Whose tat?

Armaan: off course its Maan Singh Khuranna. Don't you know tat these days our Lady Don dream about him a lot.

Piya: Oh my God Geet, is it true I mean tat hotty Maan Singh Khuranna. But he is dating Sameera than.

Abhay: so wat Piya, cant Geet dream about him.

By now Geet's anger was rising and Vicky could sense it but he could not do anything.

Armaan: Piya, don't you know these days our Geet has been teamed up with your hotty MSK so its obvious na tat she will be lost in him.

Geet: just shut.. why the hell do you have to bring him in your talks.

Armaan: Our talks, why Geet why cant we. Do you even realize wats going through us when..

Geet; when.. wat..

Abhay: forget it Geet just forget it.. when you don't trust us than why should we..

Armaan and Abhay turns to leave when Geet stops them.

Geet: from where does this trust come?

Armaan holds her shoulders and says.

Armaan; Why were you crying yesterday Geet, wat was it tat made you cry when you look so strong. Do you feel tat we would leave you alone with tat b******..

Geet gets angry and slaps Armaan hard and says: Don't Mr. Armaan Malik don't you dare use tat word for him.

Abhay: Why Geet, why cant we use. He insults you in front of the whole world and tat bitch Sameera wat did she say.

Geet: Tats none of your business.

Armaan: none of our business.. than tell me Geet who are we… why did we break our childhood friendship with Maan just to be with you. why did we leave Maan thinking tat he was wrong and hated you. Why did we throw him out of our life to be with you Geet?

Geet: did I say to break it..

Abhay: You are right Ms. Handa, we were mad tat we broke our friendship with Maan 7 years before. We were crazy tat without knowing anything wat happened on tat birthday night we blamed Maan for everything.

Vicky who was just listening to them was scared now, as he knew tat Geet could get wild with it and he tried to stop them.

Vicky: Armaan, Abhay please yaar.. Just leave the matter na… lets go from here.

Abhay: leave, why Vicky..i feel pity on you Vicky tat you being the brother of MSK you support her who is your brother biggest enemy but still you trust. Why Vicky don't you want to know the reason behind it. Seven years is not a small time Vicky.

Vicky: I don't want to know anything..

Armaan: why don't you say tat you have blind trust on Geet than your own brother? I even have heard tat she has misbehaved with you dad and..

Tat was enough for Geet to boil as Armaan had touched the weakest point of her heart. She holds Armaan by his collar and shouts.

Geet: Don't you bring him here.. don't Armaan or you will pay for it.

Armaan pushes her away and shouts with equal intensity.

Armaan: Why Geet, wasn't it true tat you misbehaved with Khuranna Uncle, isn't it true tat just coz of you we are against Maan and he hates us due to you. isn't it true tat you have made Vicky against Maan..

Vicky: Armaan please yaar.. stop it.. please..

The three girls were just watching the fight between the friends, as they did not know anything about it. Though they knew, tat Maan and Geet hate each other but they knew nothing.

Abhay: No Vicky, its high time tat she tells us the truth. do you even know tat she was crying yesterday.. no na… coz we have seen her.. seen her running away from Maan unlike her.

Geet: than why don't you all leave me and go.. I don't need anyone of you.. just out f my life..

All had their eyes wide open and though Geet and they had fights earlier but she never spoke to this to them which pierced their hearts and unknown tears made their way.

Armaan: How can we Geet.. how can we as you may not require us but we do need you. We need tat girl in our life who was once the happiest person but sadly, she is lost somewhere in her own misery. We are not the ones who would leave you and go Geet an mind this Geet we still hate him , we still hate Maan for those seven years of your pain and will continue hating him Geet.

Abhay: yes Geet, you may not tell the truth and we may even not force you anymore but our love for you and hatred for Maan will never decrease but will only increase and trust us Geet the day we get to know wat Maan has done tat day he will face me and Armaan , he will face us and our anger.

Armaan and Abhay hugged Geet while Get to did reciprocated their hug. She knew tat she was wrong and could not stop them from hating Maan and breaking his friendship but she also knew tat they loved her more them him. it was due to her tat Maan, Abhay and Armaan had been friends and it was due to her only tat they broke their friendship. The other four just stood them watching while Vicky was proud of being a part of them where Armaan and Abhay would always stand by Geet and will always. He wiped his tears silently praying tat his brother and his Geet get closer again.

Precap: a dirty game... will he claim her death...

Hi all…. I will not say tat m getting less likes and comments as I know the story needs time to pick up and the way you all liked my previous works this one will also catch up.. so no worries from my side as I know you all are liking my work…

I have started showing some past but would do it slowly…so do like and comment

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely going .what is this past which is so bitter and painful and created a havoc in each and evryone life . precap sounds very scary . continue soon .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hermoso

lovely going .what is this past which is so bitter and painful and created a havoc in each and evryone life . precap sounds very scary . continue soon .

thx dear.. i would just say wait for it
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Posted: 12 years ago
slow abit..want more maaneet moments
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesm bt painful
hope maan does not proove to b d cause of her destructn
do updt soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg.what a twist.. the story is getting very interesting..pls cont soon.. very sad to see geet's pain.
sameere😡😡😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
it awsem update maan didn't let sameera came close to him sameera planned something big to make maan hers in past waiting for more past to be revealed



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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update...past is so mysterious ...i guess sameera would have messed up..waiting past to b revealed,precap sounds scary...
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Posted: 12 years ago
ossum dear
loved it
but i wann geet to be also the destroyer of him dear
may be he will claim her to death dear b ut he will be her ranger dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
its getting more n more intersting..w8ing 4 precp

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