MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
wow interesting richa do cont soon...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
superb update
richa INDEX update kar
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
nice part... so dats y maan is like this... hmmm
so nw geet is also born... naan wants his geet n will find it...
bt itne jaldi nai milegi maan...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so first part of pure soul has touched sword and Maan is effected by its black powers...

but the second part is pure without any blemishes...

Maan is searching for its other part...

awesome updates...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
ab geet ne b janam paya
superb going richu
hum toh apki writing ke kayil ho gaye
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
part 3
nice part dear...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
*DEMON'S ANGEL*

PART - 4


DAYS start passing.Maan's mother fall ill when he was only 6. She died due to her illness. But before she died she take promise from Digvijay that he will take good care of their son. Nevr scold him for his any mistake and protect him from all kind of danger. Digvijay was in great pain. He gave all promise to his dying wife. She died in front of both. Maan was soo small to bear all this. He cried alot and its bcm very difficult for Divijay to carry him alone. So he send him to Gurukul(school for worriars),where he learnt all the necessary subj and arts of fighting. In Gurukul Maan learnt many things but he forgot about his true identity and his seperated part of Soul. He only know that he is a prince of Aryanagr and become King very soon. All his people are his slaves. He return after 12 years from Gurukul. But in these 12 years he in not only bcom a true worriar,but also a proudy,mean, cunning and self centerd person. He was completely a bull head. No one is able to match him in bravness. He scared of no one. All wlcomed their prince,but they dont aware of the coming danger. King Digvijay welcomed his son with grand celebration and decorated whole Aryanagar with flowers. But it was a start...all are happy with his arrival. Digvijay gifted him a private palace of his own,in which no 1 is allowed without his permission. Slowly 2 time start passing and his true colours start showing to everyone. People of Aryanagar threatend with his name as he was very cruel. If he get angry with anyone he beats that one brutually. And if he find any girl beautiful,he made her his own for atleast one night. Casually he fed up easily with any girl so he follow the rule of use and through. He think all girls are like tissue papers ment for his use only. His men kidnapped the girl which he selected and placed her to his private palace... Where he use to do his lusty activities. Most of the time he was drnked and enjoyed girls around him. And if he need some adventure,he went to Jungles for hunting. Pepole complaints to Digvijay,but in his blind love he ignores all pleads. He only trying to convience him lovenly,but dis doesnt affect him much. Situations going worst and as his terror increased people scared of do his complaints. Soon Maan is going to 25. One day his evil eye catch some local girl. He ordered his man to placed her in his bedroom for tonight. His men follows his order and kidnapped that girl for which he ordered. Girl cries alot but no one come for her help as all afraid of his terror. His men locked her in his room. She patted the door continously but all behave like deaf and dumb. Maan is busy in drinking before he went to her. When he done he went to his room. His eyes are dizzy and turn red. His dark brown eyes filled with lust. He only wants to fulfill his physical need only. He get inside and grabbed her. She cried for mercy but its doesnt affect him soo much. He ignored it completely and lifts her in his arms. She wriggled badly and trying to free herself from his grip but it was not posiible for her to fight with his huge and hard frame.

GIRL cried alot:yuvraj kripya kar mujhe chhod deejiye.aisa zulm mat keejiye.

MAAN:chhod dunga mujhe konsa tumhare sath puri zindagi rehna hai. Bas sirf aaj ki raat ki baat hai kal tumhe jaha jaana hai tum ja skti ho.

GIRL:do dinn baad meri shadi hai or apne hone wali pati k siva main or kisi ki nahi houngi.

MAAN:yaha nirnay(decision) lene ka adhikar(right) kewal hume hai. Or humne kaha na sirf aaj ki raat or uske baad tum mukt(free). Ab humara samay barbad karne se achha hai ki humari baat maan lo.warna hume dusre raste b aate hai apni baat manwane k liye.

She denied him and trying to ran from there. Maan catch her and threw her on his bed. She trying to slipped from another side but he clenched her legs and dragged her under his hard frame. She trying to push him over her,but no so easy. Somehow she push him with her full strength and stand from bed. But Maan again follws her. She saw a knief and hold it in her hand and warned him not come closer to her.

MAAN laughed evily:agar hum tumhari ye baat na mane to?

GIRL;aage mat badiye rajkumar.

But Maan ignored her warnings and step towrds her. Seeing no other option when Maan clenched her arm she stabbed herself wid dat knief to end her life. Maan leav her. Bt b4 iying she cursed him.

GIRL:aaj apki wjah se mujhe meri jaan deni pad rai hai. Aaj jaise main majbu thi ek dinn ap bhi honge. Ek dinn apko b sach me kisi se pyar hoga or use pane k liye ap tarsenge lekin wo apko nai milegi or use pane k liye apko apni jaan deni padegi...

She cursed him and died on d spot. Maan made face in disgust for spoiling his mood. He had no regrets for this. He called his men and orders them to threw her body out. His guards folow hs ordr. He felt bad as she died b4 fulfilled his desires,so he drank more and went to sleep calmly...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Maan is so cruel. Superb update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
awee maan.is so bad... me sad...
so dat girl cursed him.. so according to thst maan woll love geet bt they both will nt meet.. n he will die...
well seeing masns character i would b happy if dont get hr... bt maaneet k pyaar mai mai majboor hu n a small part of my heart wants them to b together...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Be patient see what i keep for u in a store... Unth kis karvat baithega ye koi nahi bta skta...

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