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Warning: Beware this update contains some extreme parts.

PART 19

The Raichands had well settled in India and their business was growing much easier than they had expected. Dev Raichand was keen on starting a new branch of Raichand Hotels in India and he had a perfect plan for it. He approached the KC, and was finally succeeded in getting them to handle his project of the hotels in Delhi. He was on cloud nine as he was slowly getting closer to his target. He knew tat getting close to Geet was highly impossible and this was his mere first step towards it. Khuranna's were his way to get close to Geet but poor Dev did not know tat he himself was getting closer to his death. The Khuranna's, Handa's and Raichand's were very much happy with this new deal as it would be great for their old friendship though Maan never involved any sort of personal relations to come in his business. He had found the project very interesting and for that very reason he had signed the deal with all double verification. It was not in his books to just sign any deal for mere profit, he would double check himself each and every detail about the person he would deal and work with it. He found the reputation of Raichands good enough and he had also done a study about their Canada business which was highly praised by all, so without any further delay he signed the deal only with a condition tat he would never like any of the Raichands to interfere in his way of handling the project unless and until were asked.
It was not a small affair now. The deal had become the talk of the town and the whole business world knew about the three business families and their friendship. It was kind of a festival for them as the whole business community knew tat striking a deal with KC and tat to with MSK was highly impossible but here Dev Raichand was successful in it. The Raichands and especially Dev wanted to kick start the project with a party. He knew tat if he had kept the inaugural party official than Geet coming into it was highly impossible and he was trying a way to figure it out he was right. He got the perfect opportunity in getting everything set for the next plan. He was sure tat none of the Khuranna's nor Handa's could reject this and he was all set with it. It was perfect idea tat his project inaugural party was clashing with his parents wedding anniversary and he did take the perfect opportunity of it. He discussed with his parents and though they first were shocked but later happy tat their son remembered it and were ready with his party plan.Though Maan was reluctant for going to the party he could not deny his family but when he was also informed tat even the Handa's were invited he felt tat he needed to go as Geet would also go with them. He was still in the thoughts of the incident where Geet was highly scared but on inquiry Geet had told them tat as Annie ws not nearby she felt tat someone was trying to come closer and harming her but when she turned there was no one. She also told then it may be her hallucination and made them believed tat she was just scared of being alone and so Maan agreed for the party invitation thinking tat it would be good for her.
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The Raichand's had invited the whole of Delhi and the aura of the party could be understood the way the Raichand House was decorated. No one could say tat in this palace there lived a Devil, who was not only a threat to their daughters but was a pure Devil in form of human roaming freely all around. The guesst were spell bound with the arrangements for the party while they wished the Mr & Mrs. Raichand for their wedding anniversary while Dev had his eyes all the way to door. He was so anxious tat he could not wait any longer and went near his parents to ask.
Dev: Dad, are you sure tat the Handa's and Khuranna's would come for the party.
Vishal: Dev, why are you so tensed my son.
Mona who was just watching her son was feeling strange tat he was so much interested in them.
Dev: Nothing.. its just tat the whole Delhi is here but your best friends and their family is no where to be seen when they must be the first one.
Mona: Dev are you sure, tats only the reason. I mean you are really waiting for the whole family or..
Dev: Mom.. please don't get to any useless conclusions. I was just asking anyways its between you all so why should I worry. Anyways you both wait I will catch up with some people around.

Mona smiled seeing her son going while Vishal just watched her with amusement.

Vishal: Mona, wats the matter have been seeing you smiling since Dev was here.

Mona: Oh come Vishal, cant you see your son waiting for someone desperately. I mean I feel something is very much fishy.

Vishal: Mona, can you get straight to the point instead of running around the bush.

Mona: Vishal, how is Geet for Dev, I mean how we take Dev's proposal for her.
Vishal: wat.. I mean Dev and Geet.
Mona: Ya, I fell for Geet's innocence the day I had seen her for the first time and had decided tat I would ask her hand for Dev, after all our Dev is the best.
Vishal: off course dear, My son is the best and Geet would never get anyone better than him.
Mona was so happy tat Vishal had agreed so she decided tat without any much delay she would take the proposal to Handa's as soon as possible.
Dev was busying in his talks while his eyes continuously on the door when he saw wat he wanted. The Khuranna's and Handa's were coming inside with full attitude while Dev scanned them and there he saw Vicky nearly hugging Geet which burnt him. he could not take the sight of Vicky's hand on Geet's waist holding her possessively. Dev moved his eyes from top to bottom scanning Geet staying far away and could see the pure beauty. He had a strong urge to just eat her up satisfying his hunger for her which was at a peak and to cool down he gulped the whole glass of drink in one go. The Khuranna's and Handa's wished the couple for their anniversary while Dev just kept looking at Geet with his lust full eyes when Mona asked one of the waiters to call Dev.
Mona: Dev, here are ur guest whom you were waiting since long ( everyone looked at Mona).. Actually Dev was bit worried tat the whole of Delhi had arrived but the most important guest I mean Vishal best friends families did not, so he was asking whether his Dad's friends and their family would come or not.
Raj: Dev, how could we forget, after all its been long since we three friends partied with full excitement and don't worry today we three will rock.
Mohinder: Dev, though your Dad moved away from us but we were never apart and this one thing we missed in our life's and more upset tat our like us you could not get a chance to be a very close friend with our children the way they all are and I really m angry on ur dad for this.
Vishal: how many time do I have to say sorry for this but don't worry its never late, let them leave alone so they get gelled with each other after all they are our children.
The elders left all the youngest alone while Dev smirked.
Dev(ST): gel and with this idiots. Come on dad, me DEV RAICHAND does not need anyone but the one who has the most innocent beauty and right now standing in front of me. Ya but to reach her I need to cross all this but would do as the more time passes and my desire for her increases the more fun it will be her. Live Geet live as much as you want, but soon you would be under me on my bed and I would rip you apart with my desire for your pure beauty and no one would be able to reach you thereafter, you would be mine caged bird, a bird who would satisfy this beast with her raw skin and body.

Vicky found Dev smirking to himself making weird kind of ugly faces and he could not leave this chance of making fun.

Vicky: Mr. Dev, do you know how funny you look with your weird faces right now.

Dev who was still in his world of lust did not hear anything while Vicky and others just stared at him.

Vicky: Mr. Dev Raichand, I don't mind you entertaining us with all those weird and ugly faces but m sure poor gals would get scared to come near you.

Dev who was brought back by the laughter of others were shocked to see them laughing at him when Prem said.

Prem: Dev do you have any split personality, I mean in a minute you make a different face with some expression while the very next moment something else.. just see how different u look, I mean in past 10 minutes we have seen many expression on your face as if you were going through some personality change.

Dev: Spilt personality..

Annie: Off course Dev.. don't you know wat it means.. oh sorry I thinks guys his teachers did not teach him about it.. no worries, I will ask special permission from my teachers for it afterall you are the new board member in the management of our college.

Vicky: oops.. sorry Dev, just forgot to wish you for tat.. my heartily sympathies for you as even after being in the management you will have to work under the best.. you know the Khuranna's and Handa's.

This ignited Dev and his blood boiled but still he kept calm and patted Vicky's shoulder and said.

Dev: My boy you are too small to talk about business right now and as far as me working under the Khuranna's and Handa's it can never happen.
Vicky: I may be small in age Mr. Raichand but don't forget tat m a Khuranna and business runs into our blood so…
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Prem: Ok guys cool down and Dev we were just kidding, don't get serious.
Dev: I always mean serious but anyways like your sense of humour.
Dev went away sparing a wild glance at Geet who felt uneasy with it and instantly turns for Maan but he was no where to be seen. She arched herself closer to Annie as if trying to make sure she was not alone.
Maan though busy with some business associates but his eyes were all the time on Geet, he had seen her looking for him and later clinging on to Annie, and the look on her face made him to come near them and without anyone noticing him he placed his hand on her waist slightly pulling her closer and when the others noticed they acted as a barrier between them covering them from the world. While Geet loosened herself from the stress. She did not know why she felt odd with the look from Dev but she could not even voice it out and tell anyone as she herself thought tat her doubts were baseless. Maan made her relaxed which his touch and asked Vicky not to leave her side even for a second while he joined others as he did not want anyone to have a doubt about them and specially the media who would make her life a mess.
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The party was in full swing while the devil Dev was having his eyes on Geet while Maan on the other side enjoying his Mishti's enjoying with Vicky. Maan was still tensed about the mall incident and even though Geet told everyone tat she may have been scared and tensed. No one pressurized Geet about the incident as they knew tat she gets scared of silly things. Maan saw Geet smiling and laughing at Vicky's joke while Annie was being irritated with him but still enjoyed when suddenly the announcement for couple dance was made. Geet turned to see Maan staring at her and she so much anted to dance when she saw Maan nodding his head in a no which made her to pout her lips and turn around cursing him.

Geet: Hitler, does not even know how to dance with me. But yeh not to forget tat he danced with tat Sameera, gadhi.. and when I want he will nod his big head like a donkey. Hitler.. only knows to say.. Jaan I love you.. but does not think tat his Jaan would want to dance with him tat to a couple dance.. Geet forget dreaming Hitler will kill you even if you think like tat.

While all the time she was cursing Vicky and Annie were enjoying it.

Vicky: Poor Geet… Princess see your Hitler does not even like to dance with you but yeh you remember tat he danced with tat Sameera tat to a close dance. Poor girl.

Geet: Chup.. you and your Hitler bro.. one day I will kill both of you.

Annie: OMG Geet, are you sure you will kill bhai.. I mean you cant even talk in front of him and you are planning to murder him.

Geet: Haan.. wat he thinks of himself. Just see how is he standing and looking at me and if I ask him to dance he will give a big lecture saying Jaan don't you know the media people are there. Don't you know Jaan tat Annie was so much stressed after their relation was out and so on…
Vicky: Jaan.. haan.. Geet wat else does bro call you along with Jaan.. I mean love, sexy and all..

Geet bits her lower lip realizing wat she said and when she heard Vicky making fun of her she hit him on his arms making him to glare at her.

Vicky: Geet y are u hitting me when you, yourself told us tat bro calls you Jaan. I just added few more names. Anyways wat else you and bro do.. I mean mushy mushy.. haan Geet.

Geet: Vicky I call Maan than you can ask him wat we do.. I hope tat will be good, wat say Di.

Annie: haan sweetheart, Bhai will explain Vicky better. So Vicky shall we call him.

Vicky: Mataye, do you both plan to murder me in the hand of tat Hitler.

Geet: Vicky don't you dare call him Hitler ok.. its only my right.

Annie: Oh Oh.. you right and since when did you started to call Bhai as Maan, dear. Wats going on between you too looks like ever since bhai is back from London you look all red and pink. Wats the matter Geet.

With the mention of London Geet went into the thoughts of their almost love making moments where they felt each other to such an extreme tat they could not control themselves and the mere thought of them on bed made her to blush making Annie to smile for her sweet sweetheart while Vicky just stared at both of them finally bringing Geet out of her lovely dreamland by Prem. Prem who approached Annie for dance saw his sister all lost and shook her getting out of her thoughts.

Prem: Geet, no need to dream as Maan wont ask you for a dance so its better you and Vicky pair up for the couple dance and join us.

Geet pouted her lips faking anger and grabbed Vicky's hand and joined the others for dance while cursing Maan but Maan was all the while enjoying her expressions from far but Dev was burning in anger seeing Vicky close to her. he could not take the sight of her with tat Khuranna but before he could do anything he saw Vicky and Geet on the dance floor while Vicky holding Geet very possessively by waist and close to him while Geet was also holding him by his neck. Dev saw Vicky coming closer to her face while he visualized tat he was kissing her while Geet moved more closer to him, and Dev gulped the glass once again spitting fire through his eyes. He eyes scanned Geet from top to bottom and the little skin which could be seen on her arms were making him even more devilish while the closeness between her and Vicky was getting on his nervous. He did not even turn his gaze from her all the while drinking and thinking about her on his bed all for him.

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Dev marched towards his bed all-naked from top to bottom drinking the white pure beauty lying in front of him on his bed. His eyes feasted on her skin for sometime and taking slow steps he moved and crawled towards his prey who was tormenting him from day and night.Geet was all-fearful while her hands and legs tied on to the bed post while she lay full nude on the bed. She struggled to get out of there by moving from side to side but he held her tight and crawled on her naked body.

"You are a true goddess in form of a beautiful angel. You have been making me to go crazy for you ever since I have seen you. Your beautiful glowing milky skin has been tormenting me and today I will feel you and rip you apart."

Dev placed his hand on her long slender leg slowly moving upwards and stopped near her thigh making circular movements.
"Your skin makes me burn with an unknown desire for you. Your skin makes my devil to go wild and wild every time I see you and dream about you."
His hands slowly made his way towards her upper body all the while pressing her underneath him while Geet struggling for her life.
"Your soft curves have been making me mad and today I will taste the most beautiful and divine beauty of these curves all for myself."
Dev slowly placed his full naked body on her nude body making sure tat his each body part was exactly positioned on hers feeling her. He placed his one hand on her curve while the other stroking her lower body enjoying his prey.
"Today I will taste the universal beauty all for myself. I have seen so many girls naked but believe me no one could satisfy me till now and the day when I laid my eyes on your beauty and body I knew tat my hunt for a lifelong prey was over. Yes, Geet, you will be my lifelong prey and satisfy my Devilish hunger with your soft body and curves day and night."

Dev was brought back from his devilish dream with a push by someone and he than realized tat he was day dreaming and had a smile thinking tat he could visualize her all naked but as soon as his eyes once again fell on Vicky and Geet his anger grew to new heights.

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Dev saw Geet along with his family talking to his mom and dad and he had the perfect time for getting closer to her. he soon joined them while keeping his gaze all the time on her which did not go unnoticed by Mona and Vishal. Mona smiled at Vishal and shook her head.

Mona: Dev why don't you go and dance beta.

Dev: Mom, I need a partner to dance and right now I don't have a one.

Vishal: are all the girls hooked in the party tat my handsome son does not have a partner for dance.

Dev: Dad, your son's name is Dev Raichand and he always needs the best and right now there is no one such who can match upto me.

Mona: Why not Dev, I know one who can match you in all. ( she turns to Geet) Here Geet Handa.

All were shocked at her words when Vishal saw them staring at Mona and he soon corrected her.

Vishal: She means tat Geet would accompany Dev for a dance if you all don't have a problem.

Mohinder: Why would we have Vishal after all his your son. Geet beta can you.

Geet: Papa, m tired and I cant dance anymore.

Dev: Uncle, its ok. Looks like she does not like my company and is just giving some lame

excuses as I have seen her dancing so well with Vicky but its all ok.

Raj: Geet, just for few minutes sweetheart, see all are dancing and it does not sound good when Vishal and Mona are requesting so can you please.

Geet could not deny them and without her wish, she agreed while Dev holds her hand and took her to the dance floor. Dev had a wild devilish smile on his lips while Geet avoided his gaze. She did not knew why she always felt a terror with his look but right now she could not do anything. Dev placed both his hands on her delicate waist while Geet stood there with her hands loose on her sides. Dev stared at her for sometime and in a second pulled her more closer almost touching his face to hers which forced Geet to hold him b y his shoulder to maintain the distance while Dev smirked on his victory.

Dev: So, scared of me Ms. Handa. (Geet looks at him). Oh don't give tat look dear, it will make me loose myself.

Geet: wat…..

Dev: Oh ya, your one look can stop my heartbeat. ( geet still continues to look at him). Do you know how beautiful you look. Did anyone tell you anytime tat while suits so and you look as pure as an angel.

He slowly moves his hands on her waist making Geet uncomfortable while pulling her closer and closer.

Dev: but I don't understand why do you get scared of me. Its not tat m a devil or someone tat you will get scared.

Dev slowly moves his one hand on her naked arm slowly moving it downwards while Geet shivered with his touch.

Dev: Don't you like my company Ms. Handa or is it you just fake it.

Dev once again brings her closer and he bands near her face making Geet to struggle while he slowly whispers in her ear.

Dev: Do you know Geet, tat you look so pure tat I feel like eating you raw right now.

Geet got scared of his words and pushed him but Dev was stronger. She tried to free herself but Dev holds her tighter and gives her a sweet smile.

Dev: OMG.. you are so scared of me Ms. Handa. I was just joking and you are so scared and he pulled he closer.

Geet: please.. leave me… I don't….

Dev: Oh come Geet I said na I was just joking you seem to be not liking to dance with me or should I call Vicky, as I know tat you would love to dance with him.

Vicky: off course Mr. Raichand, Geet would love to do tat and Vicky almost pulled Geet towards him without even waiting for a reply while Dev's anger was rising.

Dev: Mr. Khuranna, looks like you always keep an eye on her. wats so special in her tat you cant even spare a minute without her.

Vicky: Special.. oh ya.. did not I mention earlier tat Geet Handa belongs to us and I would love if you excuse us now.

Dev: oh.. don't get hyper Mr. Khuranna, looks like MS. Handa does not like jokes as I can see her scared with my small talks.

Vicky: Off course she does like Mr. Raichand but when its sensible and among us not any outsider.

Dev was fumed with an unknown anger while seeing Geet more closer to vicky, but he could not do anything and left with an angry glare. Vicky who was dancing with another girl had seen Dev taking Geet and later observed tat Geet was uncomfortable and struggling to get out but before Maan could even see Geet with Dev he reached to help her unknown tat Maan had seen Dev with Geet and his was damn angry. Vicky relaxed Geet and took her away and gave her some juice to drink. Geet though relaxed but Dev's words were making her to shiver. Geet was still sitting while she saw Maan coming towards them with anger filled eyes which made her to stand at instant making her more vulnerable. She was continuously praying but his one look was enough for her to realize tat he had seen her with Dev.

Maan: Vicky, just get Geet out from here right now.

Vicky: But Bro, the party isn't yet over.

Maan: Vicky we need to go and I said right now means right now and do be sure tat none of the media people see her.

Geet: but.. Maa.. papa..

Maan: I said right now Vicky and inform everyone tat Geet is with me no need to worry.

Vicky looked at Maan's retreating figure while he grabbed Geet by her hand and followed Maan making sure none see them. Though Vicky was not aware why does Maan wanted to go but the angry look was enough for him tat he should follow him while Geet was all numb now, first with Dev's words and now with Maan's anger.
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AMAZING
Dev is such a pig 😡
Disgusting !
i'm actually scared for Maan's anger... BUT i can't wait for it either 😆
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